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 Topic: SpectrumPosted: 20 May 2005 at 9:01am |
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red, the colour of passion, spread in a deilcate fashion
dead, life extinguished without compassion in a single sesion Yellow, engerized with feelings of dealing in property with 12 ft celings mellow, softened with time the past descrepency still appealing gold, repition of the deed with an added sence of wisdom bold, gaining that feeling of untouchable freedom, the attacks become random Brown, replaces the traces of inconfidence with family embraces down, falling from the higher places, caught in a sea of empty faces Olive, at peace with the concrete below the entire process seemed to slow Alternative, recieving a single blow by a bullet thats hollow* White, attraction of the opposite, becomming a destraction delight, a positive reaction leading to the ultimate satisfaction Purple, a love found, the feeling of lust surrounds Ripple, with a series of leaps and bounds, the feeling becomes profound Turquoise, helping that special someone to make the pain begone comprimise, the old life becons but its done blue, promises of concealing the past and allowing the wounds to begin healing untrue, hidden the true feeling because the past life is worth continuing Black, the everyday market taken away in a final bout of gunspray hijack, taken away, unable to return, even to spy the light of day meanings of colours (not all in some cases) red- passion, rage, anger, fire, blood yellow- joy, happyness, intellect, energy gold- illumination, wisdom and wealth brown- stability Olive- Peace White- safety, purity, virginity Purple- Royality, power, romance, luxury, ambition Turquoise (aqua)- protection Blue- health, healing, tranquility, softness Black- Death *hollow tip |
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Posted: 20 May 2005 at 9:30am |
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hit the floor,an duck for cover,my spits bring gore,u wont recover, from my raw spit,ur bone an flesh,im young an fit,well hung an feelin fresh, |
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Posted: 20 May 2005 at 8:39pm |
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yea man, agree^. I like creative shit and this was creative, somthin diff. Keep it up man..........Keep it thoro
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Posted: 20 May 2005 at 8:58pm |
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nice shit bro... |
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Itz Simple....I'm Better Then You!!
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Posted: 21 May 2005 at 9:02am |
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Just seen the concept you put behind it and it looks dope... like really dope... I'll check tha rest when I get time, consider this a token up Peace |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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allrigggggggghhhhhhhhht...nice. a different style from ur other verses, but its a good difference.i really enjoyed reading this so keep em comming Foowaffle.