Assassins vs The Dynasty: DressToKill vs. Icez |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
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Posted: 22 November 2006 at 3:03pm |
Dynasty: Icez
Assasins: DressToKill Blind drops to Scotty32 (Me) Verses due Sunday, Dec 10 14-20 lines each battle |
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iCeZ
Standard Member Joined: 29 June 2005 Status: Offline Points: 1415 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-13-0 Form: WLWWWW |
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check, goodluck
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Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now |
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
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check..good luck Ice..
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The original comeback kid
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
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Dressed to Kill:
Dispursing A Hurting,While Murking This Queer Hoe Explinations : *Stands Below Zero = Freezing Point Is Below Zero IceZ: u know shit might fall, assassins lack class in this game
cant blame dickriders wit so much ass in that name
ill deform ya script so inform ya click i swore ya'll all clit
kids been fucked up by our whole roster its like a porno flick
but lets keep it formal kid, ive heard n observed ya spits
how can an assassin be dressed to kill yet not murder shit
ok you might accidently kill me so i guess this man outta
process a name change at best you'd be dress to manslaughter(HOMO)
nerd you just kick my nerves this prick deserves a serve
when i rip these verbs, herb ya'll all ass like chicks wit curves
fix up ya game no mistake which crew spills best
just mix up ya name is all it takes "to kill dress"
tha second i yell on mics, watch this fool fade
ya sec0nd L from ice, josh..yeah you 'cool J'
its funny yet, dress no one's believing ya mouth
how you gon come after me?
mummy said "DRESS YOU AINT LEAVIN THE HOUSE"
let me sound it, Josh's Big talks just been rebounded
surrounded what sorta gansta still gets grounded?
dawg you battle n got hit you know i rattle hot shit
n the only ice you chewin, comes on a paddle pop stick Edited by Scotty32 - 12 December 2006 at 3:50pm |
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iCeZ
Standard Member Joined: 29 June 2005 Status: Offline Points: 1415 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-13-0 Form: WLWWWW |
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didnt realised you finally dropped...nice verse |
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Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
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DressToKill... multies and internal rhymes were good... but did not articulate well into coherent disses... There was no more than one decent punch within each rhyme-scheme... and hence too much filler for a battle spit... IceZ... nice rhymes... Punches were frequent and incorporated good personals worded originally... though some were less effective... Vote: IceZ...
Adios...
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iCeZ
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thanks for voting...
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Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now |
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G-Pfeif
Superior Member Joined: 19 June 2004 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 2541 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-0 Form: WWWLLW |
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uppin for votes
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"I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
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mcwoods
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DTK - liked it, decent flow relly liked the first 4 line,s thought it flowed relly well and had sum clever lines in ther, sort of fell away towards the end , rhyming fell away, divorce and child line were both good, overall a good verse.
Icez - too much ass in ya name, clever line. there was alot of quick rhyming words ie "
nerd you just kick my nerves this prick deserves a serve
when i rip these verbs, herb ya'll all ass like chicks wit curves" and "let me sound it, Josh's Big talks just been rebounded, surrounded what sorta gansta still gets grounded?" which helped with flow, overall i thought it was better verse, in flow, multis and rhymin.
good battle
but Icez gets my vote. |
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ProFound
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Iaght DTK : I liked the WHOLE verse, nothing extremely spectaculer.. But the whole verse appealed to me, flow was on point. I think it lacked personals.. I think with some Personal-Punchlines you could have murked him easy.
Ice : I didn't like the whole verse, only a couple parts apealed to me... Like the grounded bars.. but besides that the WHOLE verse didn't appeal to me.. I think if you would have wrote ya verse as strong as those grounded lines it would have been much better...
Overall: Im going to have to vote for DTK because I'm voting on the verses, not just a couple bars.. and overall I think DTK had the better verse.
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
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2-1 icez
Uppin
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U.N.L.M.
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DressToKill- Fav. Lines "Im Cold Cuz I Dispise Ya Life,Skills Man? Thats Lies You Write Paul wall one was pretty good also...Multies and Internal Rhymes were real good but i thought they didn't reallly go well into making consistent punches except for a few....i thought the first 4 bars were nice but the rest of the verse tailed off a bit in looks of punches...Overall multies, internal rhymes, and flow were consitent throughout but your punches were not and i thought you definetly needed more punches to take this
Icez- "
its funny yet, dress no one's believing ya mouth
how you gon come after me?
mummy said "DRESS YOU AINT LEAVIN THE HOUSE"
let me sound it, Josh's Big talks just been rebounded
surrounded what sorta gansta still gets grounded?"
Your punches were frequent throughout and you had some nice personals in there...i thought you had a good verse cause you were consitent with the punches IMO and i like the flip of his name and too much ass in your name...Overall- good verse and your punches and personals took this
V/IceZ |
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