1-2 Punch League: [1-2] X-centrik vs Spume Corrupt [wk16] |
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Lord Puente
Newbie Final Boss Joined: 05 July 2016 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1814 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-2-0 Form: LWWWLW |
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Posted: 14 December 2016 at 1:57am |
Due vendredi
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spume corrupt
Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL |
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I could cripple this cunt, just chilling, I'd still put a dagger in his back
So after I Kill him, the only Trick that stands up is his vanishing Act... |
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X-centrik
Groupie Joined: 27 May 2014 Location: mumbai Status: Offline Points: 209 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-9-0 Form: LWWLWL |
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Shit am so sorry ...was caught up with work and completely forgot about this . Anyways , here's a quick one.
Every punch a failed attempt,always see corrupt plot,a rough drop/ Think police shootings , ull never see "bars", just "shots" when "corrupt cop" / |
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Ridley Squat
Street Team Joined: 20 November 2015 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 830 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-6-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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Hello.
People have been binned for dropping this late. But not up to me, so I'll vote anyway... Spoom: wordy but nice bar. Good aggression and nameplay and nice rhyming. +1 for inclusion of the word cunt. Always. Inkytrick: basic structure ok, but content seemed all over the place. Feel you tried to put too much in and didn't quite carry it off. Could use more of a focused concept. If needed ... MFVGT Spooooooom. |
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