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    Posted: 28 January 2017 at 9:00pm
Beat battle

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 February 2017 at 4:33pm
me and doom decided to extend the deadline until tomorrow morning
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 February 2017 at 5:26pm

https://soundcloud.com/daofficial1/dark-days-type-beat

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2017 at 8:45pm

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First off let me start by saying this was a great battle..... I was really feeling both of these beats.....

Bakardi:
I was feeling the intro...... I like the soft lil start too it..... Your drop was decent, but didn't feel no umph in it, ya know..... This beat was a bit slower, not much hit behind the bars....... The difference between hook and verse wasn't that powerful either......  This was a good beat and all I just feel you need to put a little more into it...... The overall was too soft without much affect in the beat....... There wasn't very good hook, verse differential either....... If you could get that down and a little more bass behind your beat your gonna be a great producer........ Still a very enjoyable beat as well, just trying to give some tips to improve your skills, good work......


D. Von:
Wow, this beat was excellent, I would love to do a song to this beat for real...... I love the Intro, drop, verse, and chorus....... This was overall a great beat bro..... I like the intro, how you gave a little bit of a drop, then came in with the beat........ This had great bass and plenty of effects to it.......  An excellent beat, love the darkness to it....... This would be a solid beat to do some true street shit too......  There is nothing bad I could possibly say about this beat...... I enjoyed it from start to finish.......  Great Work.......


Vote- D. Von Doom


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Bakardi..

Yep this was good i liked the way you opened,it gave me a sense of time ticking by,
then the beat kicks in like it had an urgency about it,plus it had a jumping/bouncy
vibe attached to it,then the vocals get in on the act also,I liked the 2 different vocals
here,1 was haunting the other was saying "yeah", both complemented and mirrowed
the beat well too,(and that haunting one had the feel of Prince Paul/RZA in their
Gravediggaz yrs),so take that as a complement,plus it had a good clean sound also,
Real good work here I was feeling it..


Doom..

Ok,now this was interesting in many ways,1 Barkardi's beat was shorter,and 2,boy did
you nail it here,my very first impression was maypole dancing vibe cracking with the
hopping skipping feel, then comes a thumping base line,damn it was powerful too,it
gave it a real good ambience,then damn along comes a moody cello which enhance nicely this big thud base,even the whispered vocals was ripe,and the cherry was the
warping/Dub (as in reggae) slant just sealed it..

Overall Bakardi you didn't do alot wrong here,your beat I did enjoy,but you were just
simply outclassed today,(sorry if I sound harsh),but Doom killed this..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 March 2017 at 5:00pm
2-0. This need more votes. 
Go my Minions!


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 March 2017 at 6:16pm

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How has two such active contributors been ignored like this? because that was sarcasm..anyway



baakardi- i liked the haunting samples as crim described but really wasn't a fan of the drums. They sounded very tinny. Could of gone for something more traditional. The sound lacked depth but it wasn't a bad attempt.

doom - intro prob my favorite part. Wena little minimalist once it dropped. Idk i felt it sounded the more professional but lacked a wow factor. The samples were cool though very stoupe(jedi mind tricks) esque. This did give it a decent atmosphere.

gotta vote doom here, felt his sounded the more finished product and the samples he used were the best of the two.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 March 2017 at 6:19pm
Thanks rutter. 
3-0 KO
Doom. 

It'll go on the audio records. 
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