Text Battle Archive: IceC vs Lawless |
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Cuba
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Posted: 09 September 2004 at 2:47pm |
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LaWleSs
Standard Member Joined: 01 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 431 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-5-0 Form: LWLLWL |
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FYI. Olympics flames are brung, diss-ability, paralympics..think This ice bitch is kidding me so he i bring to shame son now yah finished Aight.... When you lie in a WRECK HORRIBLY let it be known yah DEATH HONURS ME, Theirs nothin LEFT FROM YAH SPLEEN, Like slippin on scripts ice fell when he STEPPED ON THE SCENE! Dun get the wordplay or if u vote with no explination dont bother... 1's...
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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FYI: I leave ya lover wasted, leave ya in a state of shock kinda like when ya saw her mother naked!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (LMMFAO!!!!) ...Dam... |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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Well I didn't even wanna try and call this fuckin' thing - but I will, 'cuz no one else is. Lawless... absolute fire. You had some funny-ass breakdown wordplay here, you used the lie-on thing, been done before but you worked it well, da-voted and response-ability at the end were just straight murder. In general wordplay was good and actually came in punches this time whereas in ya last two battles it didn't as much. There were some nice multis at times, I liked the scheme in the penultimate bar. On top of all of that, what let you down slightly was flow, but what came through harder than anything were the personals. The lines for approval, usin' my wordplay, goddamn, and the nameflip wasn't too bad... This was really hot, one of the best I've read on the site in some time... 8.6/10 IceC... absolute ice (lol). Your flow was just on motherfucking point, structure better than Law's also. I liked ya rhymes, not always as long as Law's but in general more fluid. You had some funny personals, the mother naked thing was good but coulda been used better. The Parliament Act line was a NICE nameflip and outdid his considerably, and ya response flip was on par with his initial punch as well. Your wordplay was nice, came in every bar, and punching was constant and original. You, though, lost this. Two bars were at fault, the loaded gun thing has been done, and the Seattle line had a nice personal but didn't do anything more than jab, whereas when Law came out with personals like usin' my wordplay and shit, it was worded to come at you harder. 8.5/10 ^ No shit. That's actually what it came to, Law's nine bars averaged 8.5 recurring (so 8.6) and Ice's 10 bars were 8.5 average exactly. Close as shit, and Ice's style was generally more fluid for me, structure was better, but he had two punches not quite up to scratch with the rest of it. VOTE: Lawless |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Demonic
Superior Member X Fade II Joined: 06 August 2004 Location: Cardiff Status: Offline Points: 3463 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-4-0 Form: LLWLLW |
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ok Law:first off i think you know to much about lion king lol naw you have REAL SICK WORDPLAY your muties were good aswell some sick punches and personals just your flow was off think it may have been your structure but ahh you still droped a tight drop. Right very very close but i think like orion lawless wins this he came a little harder i think with a little more in his lines that ice c didnt so |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
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MSN-battles are always close... and predictable... Lawless... good wordplay and punches... Rhymes were original if a little forced... Rhyme-scheme was too simple... Multisyllable rhymes were too calculated and unnatural... though they incorporated wordplay or other punches... Flow was choppy and long... except for the short three-line rhyme: cruel blades/2 late/new dates... Do not throw in a couple of lines of multis for the sake of it... It gives the impression that you plan one bar at a time and put them all together at the end to make a verse... IceC... good wordplay and punches... A few nice bars where a short line was used to set-up a longer punch... Otherwise a simple rhyme-scheme but rhymes were more original and less forced... Flow was ok... Vote: IceC... Adios... |
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BiggStankDogg
Veteran Joined: 22 May 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 1832 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #7 Stats: 35-8-0 Form: LLWWWW |
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FLOW: IceC Close battle, hot shit soth. IceC flowed like a glacier in Death Valley... Goddamn, son... Multi's were hot, a little light on the punching front, feelin' that you coulda done more. Your verse was the better of the two, lyrically, in my opinion... Lawless. Structure seemed fucked at first glance, but didn't affect your flow at all. Technically Ice had you, as far as flow, multis, etc... but some of your wordplay/metas killed it. Mufasa/Lion King Line had me laughin'... Lawless edged Ice in punches, which is the most important category, but was bested in flkow and multis, which are also key criterion. VERY close battle, and hot as hell. Great job, both. Winner: IceC |
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Eternity
Superior Member Joined: 16 July 2004 Location: Vietnam Status: Offline Points: 1656 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-3 Form: NWWWL |
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Intro: Lawless Lawless: Structure was poop'd. Wordplay on your behalf was killer. Flow'd pretty well. Complex as a mother fucker too. Not so many multies. But punches were hard hittin'. Iceilly: Flow was tight. Structure was dope. Some punches could have came a lot harder but didn't, you still managed to pack heat, though. Mulites were present. Both verses had all the required elements. Flow, wordplay, punches, etc. But I liked Iceilly's style more. Also with him having more of a strong verse. Vote: Iceilly. |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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3-2 IceC. Uppin'... |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Abstrakt
Standard Member Joined: 23 March 2004 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1702 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 32-17-2 Form: LLNNWW |
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Flow: IceC
Punchs: Lawless but close.. Multis: IceC less forced.. Wordplay: Lawless, both quite sick though.. Personals: IceC some funny ones.. Structure: IceC Both came tight with good wordplay and punchs, Lawless kinda killed those..but on the whole Icec's verse was better lyrically Vote:IceC |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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I don't wanna sway, or hate on my crew, but both Rap and BSD (and Eternity) gave Lawless punches and wordplay but not the battle... 4-2 IceC Uppin'... |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Insomnia
Groupie Joined: 14 October 2004 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 50 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL |
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Lawless: Came so hard he still has a boner...:D anyway....punches on
point...and hard...was smackin his opponent like a bitch.....nice
wordplays....loved the lion king shit.....you fucked a little in the
middle...that was a little weak....overall a straight fire drop......
IceC: Nice personals.....nice wordplays.....maybe a little to big of an EGO....ya drop was great but not that great.....i didnt like the scheme so much.....but i aint sayin you was bad....you was straight fire to.....its hard to wote on this kinda battles...yo did almost everything as Lawless....both were great.... But.... MY Vote: Lawless by an inch... |
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NepentheZ
Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
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hooo shit, 4-3 yo both had gd verus, iceC had a few lines that made me chuckle, but thats bout it, lawless had a good pun or punch in EVERY line even tha filler lines!! so here goes flow - iceC very very close battle but ima vote for LAWLESS - 4 - 4 |
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Anubis
Veteran Joined: 24 October 2003 Location: Australia Status: Offline Points: 964 Text Rank: #12 Stats: 4-6-0 Form: Unknown |
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both good verses, well since i got that out of the way i can start 2 pull each of them 2 peices......
flow: Ice punches: hmm both good but...... Ice multis: lawless wordplay: lawless vocab: Ice lawless~ as i said b4 good verse, had Ice beat on many aspects, the seemingly everpresent multis were well used and so was the wordplay, but punches didnt work as well so this dragged down the verse in my view. iceC~ also a good verse, flowed well, the vocab used i found 2 b alot better and the punches used were more successful than those made by lawless vote~ Ice C |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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Goddamn... 5-4 IceC... Good battle... 1
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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