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    Posted: 07 November 2004 at 1:52pm

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Sick of votes that breakdown all the elements
Yet lost punchlines in the mist of evidence
And Law got that on lock, cant take it away
Break it down ppl, Ima fukin break him today
Son Ima take this uncategorically - cant ya see
Coz Ima lyrical genius under the alias IceC
You neva follow the rules - understand it
That it isnt written but you still get commanded
Call it terrible, inedible - not even credible
But I got a grip on this like a Squids tenacle
Lets see, real is real and this theives revealed
As a by-product of the game that he concealed
Forget wordplay, long assed multis its all fake
Coz at the end of the day your still a snake
Unlimited bars aint even a test for me
God is blessing me with the recipe in textin see
Thats why this battle is an open-close casket
Dismantle your corpse and fill up several baskets
Like in egyptian times, son ya scripts are mine
And tha site so stupid they think its cryptic rhyme
But that aint the case, that aint my brief
Execute you, ya mother, sister and neice
Every family member, terror in November
Melt you with fire and fukin spit at the embers
You've got a want for diction, a contradiction
Like Mystikal no-one knows what ya spittin
Illusive or Lawless, Incredulous or not
The result is always u dead, ripped on the spot
Now which emcee brings degrees like these?
Ya confused, in a muse - whilst I spread disease
Like a fukin HIV nymph, son Im that deadly
Know ya snakish tendancies but u aint ready
A coward in scales, now balance that out
Im a pure emcee you drink from the challace of doubt
Potentially, I cripple whatever you sed to me
Watch the poison puncture and I hold the remedy
And hold the elixer above ya head with no remorse
Then smash it off the wall and laugh at ya putrid corpse
Of corse I'll stay to watch you whiter away
No longer a snake - cant slither away
Ya in the line of fire - set for ya death
Hold ya head under my flow so you struggle for breath
So now your clowned and drowned now
Wudnt stop for over five thousand pounds
Get the message? Do I mean coins or pressure?
Ya wifey crippled, hopin that God will bless ya
Text wise it obvious to me, ya thrust in seas
Even pneumatic emcees aint crushing me
So what chance do u stand? None at all
When my cancer eats everywhere below ya balls
But never above - coz I aint on ya dick
Five personalities you wonder which one'll spit
I've a variety of styles - everyone with a purpose
Every single one jus makes u seem worthless
Down to the vault, ino its ya lyrics at fault
Sometimes I think you've corrupted Lyrical Assault
And Ive neva been down wit the politics of text
Talkin of dickrydin uno Law swallows it the best
But it doesnt matter son, its jus materialistic
I'll martyr ya flow and claim its sadistic
Religious undertones mean I plunder foes
Beat you round the head til ya comatosed
I know my foes so uno I keep them close
Battle in a greenhouse to see who grows the most
Surround you with fertiliser coz I despise ya
Corrupt all purity and label you dickryder
You cant comprehend it, so how u contend it?
I really dont give a fuck if ya offended...
Talk to me on messenger but its the end bitch...
Son I called it e-commerce u say its friendship
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Yo, my bad i was mad tired......

Sick of Jokes Thinking their weak meta's Equal exelence
Spittin those Evil quotes People know are the testiment
Of this Feeble Hoe Struggilin Inside his Residence
I'll Eat you yo..Believe all know Yah still Faking
Ill put u in a CAST And i aint mean Film Making
Yah will's breaking..Cant gaurd this Level of Hard hits
Whos got the time in 1 day to drop 2 Garbage 100 bar spits
Thats retarded..Specially since u cant rhyme with this man
But..what u gonna do with 2 much time on yah hands..
You talk 2 me in mess and show me your Lame flows
U call it Friend-ship But i dont think were in the same boat
I disgrace hoes Take notes fear is about to replace hope
I never thought u was this wack..Or i never did remember..
U being on the level of, family member..terror in november?
That forced shit get tourchurd and scorched kid
Youve lost this...Im a leader and you follow me
You fell when choosing quantity over quality....
Yah flows aint toppin me..Ill put a end to this geek
I was so tired i cudnt finish..that verse sent me to sleep
Believing is seeing...I wont give you a reason for breathin
Call you a martyr, dying for what you believe in(loosin 2 me)
Acheiving..only the knowledge that my rawness is crueler
In-graving ice..U can call me Lawless the Jeweler
In these present times ive been known to hold the gift
You opened the casket and asked me to close the lid
Not suposed to live..Your dead its suffice to say
U aint fee-Nominal theirs a big price 2 pay
I looked at our last battle..this herb say he crushed it
Despite every voter said i took wordplay and punch's
Aint that proof..The win was no miracle revolt
Lawless just dont win...on lyrical assault
And that suits u fine....The bitch gets touched and sodimised
Yah verse's are so SORRY He better apologize...
Horrified...I just key the better verses
Yah quiver when u try 2 deliver..hence why ur audio never surfaced
Forever nervous..Ima denounce this rhymer
Voters wont be pickin ice unless they become mountain climbers..

 

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flow: lawless
metaphors/ creativity: tie (very well done by both)
multi's: lawless, not by much, neither were working the multi's too hard, some n1's tho.
flow: lawless
punches/ personals: iceC, almost a tie, both worked nice here.
overall enjoyability: lawless

very very nice battle gentlemen. basically my vote goes for lawless because he flowed his shit better than iceC although ice came with some hot shit as well. basically ice just didnt have the flow that i was feeling, and missed a couple attempts at multi end rhymes, not that they didnt rhyme, but that they hit wrong.

sickest line of the battle:
Acheiving..only the knowledge that my rawness is crueler
In-graving ice..U can call me Lawless the Jeweler          ; <--- hot shit lawless.

like i said, good battle guys, i enjoyed  it alot.

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^^lol

u put flow as a catagory twice yo

haha

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It woulda been funny ass shit if he's put two diff people, but as it is we gotta call it jus' forgetfulness as opposed to shadiness...
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
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i didnt think it was shady
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I know, was just a general statement to any readin' it.

Freeposts rule.

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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hot hot...

IceC = nice shit nice rhymes nice punchez... flow was Good... but lack of
REAL hard-hittin one's,.. some nice personals...

LawLess = ...oh whee... hot shiiiiiet son. gr8 punchez. Flow was good.
wordplay was xtra nice and punchez jus str8 hurt. nice personals... but
the line 2s said "jeweler" line and the last bar... sicknezzzzz

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ok

 

yo ice, a solid verse, nice punches, a little filler at times, got ok flow an a good structure, not too many personals considering tha length of the battle, can work on that a little mo,

lawless, good verse, had sum genius punches, mostly personal ones too, so gd gd there, nice flow, bit off at times, gd structure, quite a few personals, an jus like everyone else has stated, that jeweler line was hot, definatly killed ice off,

lawless had a better verse overall, but good glimpses from ice

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that it?

gd battle...one

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Lawless wins by KO
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
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