Stalin vs. Freeda5thDawg
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Crew Station
Forum Name: Assassins vs The Dynasty
Forum Description: Crew battle between the above
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=10274
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:16am
Topic: Stalin vs. Freeda5thDawg
Posted By: Scotty32
Subject: Stalin vs. Freeda5thDawg
Date Posted: 22 November 2006 at 3:16pm
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Dynasty: Freeda5thDawg Assasins: Stalin Blind drops to Scotty32 (Me) Verses due Sunday, Dec 10 14-20 lines each battle -------------  |
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Posted By: Freeda5thDawg
Date Posted: 09 December 2006 at 10:59pm
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g'luck lin...
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Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 11 December 2006 at 2:32pm
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Stalin: Aint no space left for this kid, so I'll have u restin wit Big Cuz Ill make ya beatin more unbearable then the text in ya sig too many cats on LA, but ima tell u I aint the kind to fuck wit cuz Ill be quick to bitch slap u so hard u'll be back at RhyminRuckus u better try enough kid, or ya crew'll be replacin u like a broken light Man, why the fuck are we battlin? U better keep ur bitch ass in Open Mic A bunch of bitches rush to LA, Im wonderin who else did u bring here? I would just kick u inbetween the legs, but my foot would be the only thing there! The Dynastys full of bitches that actin ill, so im lettin u know yall better stop u cant even legally smoke, so anything that come out ya mouth is never hot I dont understand it, Freeda5thDawg, yet this pro aint rhyme All ya shit is stretched longer than Bob & Whitneys cocaine lines ima rip him straight, whats he gonna do when no flippins played fuck Freeda5th, Change ya name to Pleadda5th cuz u aint got shit to say I admit u can rhyme alot and maybe make it flow Get on ur knees and thank me cuz I fuckin gave u PRO Freeda5thDawg: Battle assassins?... I�ll encompass �LIN� quicker than interconnects when �vehicles� crash-in- - And bash ya grill FAST when the rapfist grabs �20BITS� of ya gadgets- - Leave ya gaseous like ashes after the burns - And SCATTER my words- - Cause I happen to learn... Only way I�m �matching ya verse� is playing SCRAMBLE with verbs- - While he�s gambling first - I�ll �handle this jerk� WORST than amateur perves- - And trample the nerd till his �cord� twirps and starts disbanding the �nerves�- - Before you chant that it hurts... You must withstand flows when the hand-chrome expels deep in ya anus- - Leave ya �man-hole� with �shells� even �THE FOOT� feels it needed to �break-in�- - Creep with the stainless... But there�s no need to be stating I burst guns - My cursed tongue can shout swords- - STABBING�s my business - You ain�t HARD - I just got my work CUT OUT for- - While you preserving doubt, hordes of words force through like warriors- - How you claim assassin?... When I�ll destroy-ya-CREW worst than orbiters when storms-occurred- - Even if the floor-reversed - You couldn�t top 5th�s mental- - And I ain�t talking �Buddha History� when I say I SHOT-LIN�S TEMPLE(Shaolin�s Temple)- - My credentials are �ill� - Even Stalin mentions �Dogs suffer the sickness�- - And after this �tragedy� - Dynasty will make sure it lives up to �statistics�- - You can�t bump with the sick shit - Never mad when speaking with ad-libs- - Even if you captained assassins - You�d still be a �Leader IN-PRACTICE�- - EXPLANATIONS: LIN -communication system(interconnections) for electronic systems in �vehicles� -speed up to 20kbits Scramble = Self-Exp Amateur Perves = Self-Exp Cord = Spinal Cord = Nerve Transmitter Manhole - Double Meaning 1- Anus, FOOT in the ass 2-Manhole, Ninja Turtles = Shells, �THE FOOT� = The enemies that �break-in� the turtle�s �manhole� home Stabbing Business/Work Cutout For = Self-Exp CREW = Assassin and/or Crew inside an �orbiter� dying in �space storm� Last Lines refer to �Joseph STALIN� 1st Line - �Gratitude is a sickness, suffered by dogs.� - Joseph Stalin 2nd Line - �A single death is a tragedy; a million deaths is a statistic.� - Joseph Stalin 4th Line - Joseph Stalin is a �de facto leader�, de facto stands for �in practice�...put it all together. almost too late till i got a reminder pm a while ago, *sigh* well here it is...didnt want to fail my crew... ------------- |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 11 December 2006 at 7:05pm
| nice verse freeda5th, votes... |
Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 13 December 2006 at 2:58am
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Stretching the concept (verb): Having a verse where explanations are needed but they seemed forced, like the 'LIN' line above. The Shot Lin's temple shit was so forced it just didn't work. Overall, the verse from Freeda had potential, but it just fell flat due to inconsistensies and it seemed forced enough to make me uncomfortable reading... The Flow was off too... It was hard to follow. Best line: And after this �tragedy� - Dynasty will make sure it lives up to �statistics�- - Dynasties all eventually fall... good punch, no explanation needed (maybe for the retards) The stalin quotes show you did your research, but those quotes never turned into anything hard. The "gave you pro" line was not very good for a finisher, but the rest of the verse was strong enough Stalin's verse had one punch that was overused (even against me). The open mic shit is something even frank used vs Exo... Everything else flowed fine, seemed natural and hit hard. All ya shit is stretched longer than Bob & Whitneys cocaine lines very true... but the best line was: fuck Freeda5th, Change ya name to Pleadda5th cuz u aint got shit to say Vote: Stalin ------------- Insert something rappy here |
Posted By: Demonic
Date Posted: 13 December 2006 at 7:48am
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Stalin: Flow was nice punches were hitting hard ... liked the bob an whitney line alot ha dope... fireing in every bar ... personals were decent too ... closer was nice ... finished off a good verse
Freeda: Seemed alot of this was forced... you flow wasnt vintage like you usually drop... had plenty of personals which is good... structure wernt that nice ... punches were ther .... liked the last but one bar alot ... closer wasnt all that Decent showing by both, good battle... Stalin gets it with a more consistant verse ------------- |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 16 December 2006 at 6:20pm
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Uppin for votes....
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Posted By: G-Pfeif
Date Posted: 19 December 2006 at 2:14pm
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2-0 Stalin... uppin for votes ------------- <img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" /> "I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Date Posted: 22 December 2006 at 12:57pm
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Stalin... good flow and rhymescheme... A lot of the punches seemed too simple or unoriginal... but at least they hit the target... Freeda5thDawg... rhymescheme suffered as you began by attempting too many internal-rhymes and not focusing on the punches... Flow began well... A lot of punches missed due to forced, long-winded wordplay... and the personals towards the end would have been more effective against the real Joseph Stalin... Also... you both mentioned having your own foot up each other's respective arses... Hehe...
Vote: Stalin...
Adios...  -------------  |