Say It Now
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Category: Archive Forums
Forum Name: Spit for Rank
Forum Description: Dont like bein a Novice? Wanna be a Professional? Spit a verse here
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11670
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:40am
Topic: Say It Now
Posted By: ProFound
Subject: Say It Now
Date Posted: 08 March 2007 at 12:00pm
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I put this in the audio section and it got ok feed back... and I already know the Chorus sucks.. so don't worry about it... but here it is...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=643929&songID=4870354 - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=643929&songID=4870354
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Posted By: njZillesT
Date Posted: 28 March 2007 at 7:04pm
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n2b jus try and seperate ur bars better.. most the time u did it well but some times it wwant done well yeah ur chrous sucks.. the second verse needs work with flow (seperate bars better) you sound a bit uncomfortable on the mic, but im sure in time that will come along.. |
Posted By: ProFound
Date Posted: 28 March 2007 at 7:45pm
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Any judges? |
Posted By: ProFound
Date Posted: 09 April 2007 at 5:44pm
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Ikon?.. others? |
Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 09 April 2007 at 6:23pm
| Dude above me said it well actually... Much better than when you began... Shit's much cleaner... I could see this being an Ama track... At the end, you mixed the hook in a bit faster than the beat.. Hook is decent, lyrics were straight, and you stayed on the beat... (That was your biggest problem before)Keep talkin' clear and elevatin'... No Pro yet. Won't get it 'till you develop a style where I can almost know it's you without you tellin' me... |
Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 09 April 2007 at 7:23pm
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liquid and pro in the same paragraph...............*rubs eyes*
lol, liked the track tbf, wont listen to it again, but definately best ive herd from you, keep it up
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Posted By: Mackie
Date Posted: 09 April 2007 at 8:17pm
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you got the name wrong
Say It.. Nov |
Posted By: U.N.L.M.
Date Posted: 09 April 2007 at 8:32pm
 Lol at your sig Mackie
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Posted By: King Blood
Date Posted: 09 April 2007 at 9:03pm
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lol
------------- and hypothesis can't define how I be droppin these |
Posted By: ProFound
Date Posted: 09 April 2007 at 9:45pm
| thanks for the feed *crew* |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 10 April 2007 at 9:46am
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LiQuiD wrote:Posted By: ProFound
Date Posted: 13 April 2007 at 7:40pm
| Uppin for the next judge |