Some Stuff
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
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Forum Name: Spit for Rank
Forum Description: Dont like bein a Novice? Wanna be a Professional? Spit a verse here
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=12698
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:40am
Topic: Some Stuff
Posted By: Sergent Stats
Subject: Some Stuff
Date Posted: 07 August 2007 at 4:58am
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This Is Just A General Background On Battles Ive Done -
This Con Needs Luck, He's Got An Audience On The Sea Front! This Kid Got The World Watchin', Welcome To The Comedy Club! You Great!?Pff,U The Opposite! Kid Think Logic, Ya Shit Couldnt Make Profits Bitch! Ruin'n My Style? Honest , You'd Be Better Off Waitin' For The Next X-Men Apocolypse Sincere Kid? U Winnin' is Like A Queer Stearin' His Gear In Clits!..Hearin' This? U'll End Up Workin' For Mr.Pretzel With Ya Career In Twists! _____________________________________________________________ This Was Against A Dude Called aftermth - Watch This Cat Get Divided In 2 From A - M {AfterMath}From Catchin' My Draft Screamin' ''Stop This'',Findin' It Hard To Multiply Cos The Only Time He Crackin' Stats Is After Maths This Kid Aint Workin' Me Out,His Brains On Overheat Cos Im Summed Up To Be 'Lightenin' Son Hes Searchin' For A Towel,Breakin' A Sweat,This Kids Pumpin' Three Fires At Once My Mind Equals A Complexed Ability,So Tough To Even Try 'Crack' These Cookin' Equations So Lethal Hes Sent For Extra Facilities To Try Bust My Skillz,Hes Too Pussy To Face' Em __________________________________________________________ ------------- http://imageshack.us" rel="nofollow - [IMG - http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/8958/seargentsigjx4so3.jpg - |
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Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 09 August 2007 at 10:07am
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a bit formulaic, but you know what you're doing... but plays and even punches (which aren't that strong anyways) seemed forced to shit... try to make them flow better and be more relevant... low AMA
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 09 August 2007 at 12:58pm
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Agree^
You need to work on ya punches and ya wordplay...low AMA -------------  |
Posted By: G-Pfeif
Date Posted: 10 August 2007 at 3:07pm
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you get ama from me cuz you had some unique idea's.. the carreer in twists was clever to me... but your lines are WAY too stretched... and your style is cliche and generic.... typical Netcee shit.. work on making that style your own and shortening your bars Low AMA ------------- <img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" /> "I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |