Rank Me
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Archive Forums
Forum Name: Spit for Rank
Forum Description: Dont like bein a Novice? Wanna be a Professional? Spit a verse here
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13336
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:28am
Topic: Rank Me
Posted By: Cee-Jay Outlaw
Subject: Rank Me
Date Posted: 18 October 2007 at 9:03am
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Hey Guys please Post i wanna elevate a rank, and give me feedback please i'm only spittin 16 but i can do much more  I'm A Grime Mc, Just too let you knowOkk Cj Here, Lyrical dominater why do u have to go and be a hater you dont wanna mess i'm a lyrical alligator the urge for a clash just keeps getting greater rudeboii u need to make a decision i'm ready with a shank to make a incision i'm never off beat allways in precision face it blud ur not in my division Rudeboii its obvious ur faking have u seen what the bookmakers staking i think ur Lyrics need forsaking or from this nightmare u wont be waking wen u spit next try not to be shaking cos u've got limbs i wouldnt mind breaking the place at the top i will be taking u best get decision making -------------  |
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Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 18 October 2007 at 10:29am
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ya' rhymes were VERY basic... but ya' flow was ok... work on bein' more complex... NOV...
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Posted By: Cee-Jay Outlaw
Date Posted: 18 October 2007 at 10:44am
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wht u mean by complex? like multi's?? ------------- |
Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 18 October 2007 at 10:53am
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what i mean by basic is this... your rhymes are only the last word...
text text text text BREAKING
text text text text text text FAKING
text text text text HATER
text text text text text ALIGATOR
there's nothin' complex about it... yeah, multi's might help, but so would wordplays an' clever, fresh ideas...
anyways, if you want more advice on this, post it in the open mic section an' ask for feed...
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 18 October 2007 at 12:24pm
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Gotta agree wit Smooth...Your verse is VERY basic...i suggest readin our tutorials...you need to improve in all areas...i also suggest reading battles from some of the better guys here to see what a dope verse looks like... Rank: Novice -------------  |
Posted By: G-Pfeif
Date Posted: 18 October 2007 at 2:10pm
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listen to these guys... read the tut's... read some verses by the pro's of the site... search for battles from Orion, Ikon, 2 Smooth, Myself, and other pro's and see how our verses have more to them Nov keep workin ------------- <img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" /> "I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 24 October 2007 at 3:46pm
don't worry man ur better than G-PUP, FAT-ill, N 2 Smoothy 
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Posted By: Swift Styles
Date Posted: 24 October 2007 at 5:42pm
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ight RAM ME -------------  |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 24 October 2007 at 7:51pm
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^ LOL that was HOMO
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 24 October 2007 at 8:02pm
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But its YOUR name...congrats
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Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 24 October 2007 at 9:17pm
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hoe'd ------------- https://soundcloud.com/lostblueeyes" rel="nofollow - Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
Posted By: Swift Styles
Date Posted: 24 October 2007 at 10:25pm
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X's 2 ------------- |