The Message
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13459
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:00am
Topic: The Message
Posted By: -Orion-
Subject: The Message
Date Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:28pm
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This is it... Grand Slam Champeeon, damn peons... The next one WILL kill you... ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Posted By: sparta
Date Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:35pm
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Pretty mean piece of text here, never really let up, enjoyable to read...mcrae was ill, the rest of it was smoothly put together which made for an advanced piece of writing, a pleasure to read...
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Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:37pm
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Hot shit. dont take a scientist to figure out the culprits here. Some real dope bars, for sure. a few bars didnt flow/rhyme right, but all in all it was straight to the point and effective. Colin McCrae was off the hook, Second Mouse was hot too. Solid drop.
Eaaaasyyy -------------  I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:48pm
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Gotta agree wit nep and sparta...this was def hot...loved the aggressiveness of the verse bro...
But let the blind lead the blind, despite what's now apparent Gotta put talent in power to empower talent ^Dope... Nice to see you writing again O... -------------  |
Posted By: lynxx
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 7:10am
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agree wit the other 3, this was a tight piece,
balls in ya mouth part made me laugh, sum great concepts in there...
nice drop.
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Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 10:44am
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so is this what "greats" do after they come back an' get beat? lmao... decent drop... have seen a lot better from you, perhaps you're still rusty...
had a couple nice punches/ plays... agression as said above was nice through out, also...
keep elevatin' man...
-2s
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Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 11:27am
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I Hate The Way People Come Back An Immediately Get Feed, While There Is Other Open Mic's Around That Just Get Ignored
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 11:35am
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That's cause we all love adore and follow him... Anyways.....Yeah as others have said dope drop, not your best but still better than 90% around here...nice drop *hops off* -------------  |
Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 11:53am
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To be honest, i thought this was a little above average at best. i aint gon ride when it aint due, u got better than this man. ------------- https://soundcloud.com/lostblueeyes" rel="nofollow - Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
Posted By: Freeda5thDawg
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 12:33pm
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let the next one kill us...this wasnt aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, jus a hehe... always liked the style tho...great agression thruout... -------------  |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 12:35pm
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N every1 like my opinion.. thank you.. Ya I like reading it, all ya text rhymed all the way, the points were crystal clear..But don't cry a river, if u hate some1 even thou ya "best" then battle em... teach him a lesson with ya text... Am I wrong? were u jus rapping for fun n don't mean it what ya said  ? ------------- 
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Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:00pm
To be fair, you havant been around long enough to undersand most the shit in there.. ------------- I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
SwordedStylez wrote:Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:01pm
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to be fair nepenthez i've been around since 2004 i used to be tigger and remember when you weren't nepenthez ;) ------------- https://soundcloud.com/lostblueeyes" rel="nofollow - Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:11pm
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lol, u 2 should battle, rather than fighting like kids. -------------
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Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:13pm
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Tigger... yea i remember you. but you had a leave of abscence. Why'd you have to come back as SS ... why not stick with tigger.....
------------- I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 1:28pm
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SS is the name i use on stage and on my album. Tigger is my dj name, so yeah. ------------- https://soundcloud.com/lostblueeyes" rel="nofollow - Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 6:43pm
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Ok tig, how is it riding if some one likes a perticular drop? i personally thought it was a good verse, and certainly better than most of the verses lyin in open mic right now...i get where you comin from but i dont get where you see "riding" in this thread... ------------- |
Posted By: SkyFly
Date Posted: 06 November 2007 at 6:30pm
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it was tight, you started off hotter than u finished, u should jus go ahead and say who u talkin bout tho, let em kno feel me' ------------- D.A.D.E |
Posted By: _HolloW_
Date Posted: 07 November 2007 at 2:52pm
To be fair, SS, I've been doin' this shit since before you had any idea who "the real slim shady" was, an' this stuff's still pretty decent. I ain't gonna call it top-dawgin' nothin, 'cause in my eyes a few of the RHYMES fucked up the content of the bars.
The apparant/empower talent bar for one.... Good content, that shit was icy. But... dunno if it does with a Brit accent or whatever you got, but to me, that doesn't really have much more than a POSSIBLE slanted rhyme.
That aside, most your bars were better than most peoples, but only a couple in my mind were show stopper worthy.
Damn good piece, but from someone who has (or CLAIMS to have--I haven't really noticed yet) this place on lockdown, it didn't hold to the hype. Keep it up, though. ------------- Spent six months hurtin' who I shoulda been supportin'/ But I was nervous, I was stupid, I was pushin' for abortion/ |