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Abstract State of Mind (Wordplay)

Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13712
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:01am


Topic: Abstract State of Mind (Wordplay)
Posted By: dalinquent
Subject: Abstract State of Mind (Wordplay)
Date Posted: 03 December 2007 at 8:13pm
This is just a keystyle...May record it later as a freeverse...Shit, Might get bored and write 3 more verses, make it a track...lol...Enjoy

Yo, Dal be eclipsing them so called ''hits'' ya dropping...
I musta swallowed a battery, Cause damn, All of my shit is shocken
Therefore, You can not win...I see the bitch in you now
Personal shit blew minds, Well this time it's just typical dal
Spitting that wild shit, See I can still write them banging hits
I'm like neglectful baby sitters, Naw, I ain't changing shit
Yo, My basic scripts, 'll have ya down and under right
Have you tryna leave dog, Like you was that bounty hunters wife
You should bow before me, ight? Refused so ya got hurt
And I made you http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0163187/" rel="nofollow - run away bitch , Like you was Julia Roberts
Truly ya not worth, My punches will smash on you rookies
I'm Dope...That's something that ya ass never could be
You wanna battle, I'm good, See stats don't mean nothing to me
An I ain't allergic to felines, So you cats dont be fucking with me
I'm so much of a beast, Yea bitch, I'm known to blaze the mic
Plus, I'll put you up on hot singles, Like an online dating site


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Replies:
Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 03 December 2007 at 8:53pm
Nice...
 
flow was pretty good throughout and like some of the plays..i dont know if the UK heads will get the bounty hunter line but was original...closer was dope...keep up negro


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Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 03 December 2007 at 9:11pm
yeah flash we got dog the bounter hunter over here too :D

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https://soundcloud.com/lostblueeyes" rel="nofollow - Music

Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)


Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 04 December 2007 at 3:37am
thanks fa feeding...more appreciated

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Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 04 December 2007 at 10:22am

closer was ill... overall, good fluent plays... keep it up son...



Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 04 December 2007 at 4:15pm
thanks fa feeding

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Posted By: possibilities
Date Posted: 05 December 2007 at 12:29am

Dead



Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 05 December 2007 at 12:32am
dude, your about to be banned...well not now, but when a mod gets on...advertising ain't allowed...

oh yea, fuck you...lol...what you mean it could be better...dopeness like this is hard to come accross nowadays...dont be a hater...lmao


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Posted By: Swift Styles
Date Posted: 05 December 2007 at 12:35am
(^ohhh sucka u on thin ice...)
i peeped his earlier so ima say something about it now i guess.
dope drop nice closer
liked the rookie/could be bar


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