R1-B2) dalinquent vs. masta p
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Topic: R1-B2) dalinquent vs. masta p
Posted By: 2smooth
Subject: R1-B2) dalinquent vs. masta p
Date Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:18am
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Round One - 10 lines first to 4 votes or 3-0 = KO
No Dickryde Votes
Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted! Voting will last 1 week from the deadline... if there is no clear winner at that point, whoever is ahead at the time will advance. Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed.
If you want to bitch, take it to the Bitching Thread, or PM me DEADLINE IS MIDNIGHT, DECEMBER 20TH, 2007
if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show and not allowed entry to the next tournament
BLIND DROPS, SO ANYONE CAN DROP AT ANY TIME (AS LONG AS IT'S BEFORE THE DEADLINE
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Posted By: Masta_P
Date Posted: 18 December 2007 at 11:03pm
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Check it Dal,
u inspire dopeness? bitch u only shine when u got on GOLD STUDS cuz da only time a daliquent's hit jackpot is when he on da DOLL-BLUDGE so hold up and� stop braggin on unstoppable* that u got a bitch HOPPED N SPOONED yo hook sounds so retarded, its like u naturally CHOPPED N SCREWED and fool� call me a pimp, fuckin bitches till they be screamin WILD MOANS but when u bangin chicks, da only sounds u hearin r DAL TONES** and hoe, I�ll fuck u till u respect me�u can�t duck it�so TRUST IT delinquent�s be fuckin wit da law as much as his played shit*** doin JUSTICE
and that's never �closer�
geek don�t try an fight me, in da tourny u about to be ticked of like NIKE cuz yo beat�s**** be similar to adventure games-u ain�t never finding da right KEY �U JUST ALL HYPE G� -------------  |
Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:37pm
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FYI: If ya dont get it, dont vote...see ya in round 2 :) Masta P smashing me? Please, I'll break ya face son... Fitting ya chose ya name...Cause my punchline'll make ya say uhhhh You facing the great one, So look bitch, you'll get hoed And I'll fuck ya world up, Like sticking my dick in a globe I'll shit on you bro, How the fuck ya think ya can touch this Kid, Ya blatantly weak...Bitch don't even know what a punch is Ya dumb bitch, You ain't a big shot, I got this shit locked I'll flip ya, Then get rid of p.m.'s ass like clearin` my inbox Look little bitch, stop...You don't stand a chance when facing me Ain't no reason to fearMasta, 'Specially since they abolished slavery ------------- 
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Posted By: Swift Styles
Date Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:44pm
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lmao at dals closer...
P: dont try so hard to put multis in there, shit looks maddddd fored, really fucked up the verse. some of it didnt even make sense.. whats hopped and spooned mean N E way? the punches u got wern't all 2 hard hiting anyway. DAL: Better plays than P, name plays, globe was nice. natural multis made it more ...fluent. loved your closer, shit was funny. DAL GMV masta, i reccomend readin tutorails if your still confused of y i thought your multis were forced -------------  |
Posted By: sparta
Date Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:04pm
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Dalinquent's got it...he had some good personal hits (2nd, 6th, closer) and laced it together with genericity well enough to prevent the verse becoming unbalanced...Masta, dal tones was your only personal hit and it was pretty lame, the rest of your punches rhymed nicely enough but just didnt hit him with the amount of hardness needed for a tourney battle v. dal ------------- |
Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:10pm
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yeah vote dal
dal - globe was nice, pm's was decent, closer nice, more solid harder hits, punch is, was good aswell, most bars were solid without being KO's, flow was nice and rhyming worked well too masta p - dal tones thought was pretty funny, but that was as good as it got, rhyming good, but no real hard punches, or personals or anything that made me think "shit", needed to come harder and more personal, which you didnt vote - dal |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:29am
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(as smooth hasnt been on since Weds) Closed - 3KO Dal goes thru -------------  |