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Because I Can...

Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13893
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 3:59am


Topic: Because I Can...
Posted By: Point Blank
Subject: Because I Can...
Date Posted: 24 December 2007 at 2:10pm

I hate haters, they sayin i deserve the sack
But fair play, even i'll admit im really, rarely wack
So call me what u want, i'll keep defeatin ya men though
Coz im LA's biggest feature this xmas, like the wii to nintendo
An when i write a verse, i can get any rapper sent to hell
Because my 'post get's in your way', like to hatton when he fell
An thats due to the fact i post the tightest raps, son!
I'll leave you with more plasters on ya face than fuckin http://www.dailymail.co.uk/pages/live/articles/showbiz/showbiznews.html?in_article_id=503557&in_page_id=1773" rel="nofollow - micheal jackson!
Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches
Im savage and im just tryna rep the hardest
Watch me put a big price on ya head like an expensive barbers
All the men that watch are standin back astounded,
And THATS why im that kid ya mom won't let u hang around with....



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Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 24 December 2007 at 4:57pm

Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches

Clap classic, illest line i read in a while  

All the men that watch are standin back astounded,
And THATS why im that kid ya mom won't let u hang around with....
 
Clap killer closer , point on that ishhhh!


Posted By: Freeda5thDawg
Date Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:00pm
lol, this was nice...nice flow throughout...some koo lines made an enjoyable read...i liked the way the santas/branches couple was delivered...the way i flowed wit da verse, the whole thing sounded aggressive and demandin if ya kno wat i mean...nice shit man...

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Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:17pm
yeah, i know what freeda means, kinda like the unbitten 16 one

branch line was really memorable, good play and well executed

flow tight, nice plays and worded well,

drop more man lol


Posted By: SiNiStAh
Date Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:28pm
Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches
^^best line, MADE the verse.. hands down, hope-est line there..

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..Sin, The Boi Unforgiven..
..Im A Lethal Weapon On Mics Lik'a Mel Gibson Interview..


Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:57pm
Haha nice shit point..I have to agree the familly tree bar was dope nice..you also had some decent lines even though I wasnt feelin some plays..keep up

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The original comeback kid


Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 24 December 2007 at 6:26pm
Nice verse P...couple nice lines in there....keep droppin
 
...1


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Posted By: GraphicKontent
Date Posted: 26 December 2007 at 3:11pm
Testosterone controllin me, my sacks fatter than santas!
Anger makes me climb up ya family tree an start snappin the branches

^Very creative...
this piece flowed nice.. nice multies and a few gud punches and lines.. overall it was a gud piece.. nice.

but man how many times are yu gonna use
" So call me what u want, i'll keep defeatin ya men though
Coz im LA's biggest feature this xmas, like the wii to nintendo"

U used it twice on HHE.. lol..


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Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 26 December 2007 at 3:24pm
An when i write a verse, i can get any rapper sent to hell
Because my 'post get's in your way', like to hatton when he fell

Ha, that was slick. You showed me the snappin the branches line on MSN... Stay up.



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