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Rectify This

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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:14am


Topic: Rectify This
Posted By: CHAIN
Subject: Rectify This
Date Posted: 06 May 2008 at 4:05am
 
g'head and prove me wrong, lol
 
go in.....
 
 
The best alive till better scribes can rectify what Chain said

Was next to die, but exercised the vet survived to break bread

With those that don’t oppose and recognize the snake head

The rest can die today, so step aside or play dead

Speak or go to sleep ‘cause death arrived to make beds

I lecture minds with text supplies of pesticide for K-Fed’s

Never cried, not petrified of threats inside a hate thread

Never mind, I bet them guys would testify for Chain’s cred

Terrorize their petty lives till heaven cries a rain red

From vaporized blood of sets I fried while aids spreads  

Of course u know the name so fear my stuff or join the bums

 ‘All in’ with the poker face, here to flush the royal ones

The warning, a warning, to liars throwing chairs at me

The warring, I’m for it, ‘cause lying won’t embarrass me

That I won’t encourage, y’all tryna clone a parody

Tryna fool a lion like them biased votes are rarities

I’m laughing at the wining, guys who post hilarities

Fake thugs acting like, my fire’s momentarily

My fire is democracy to tyrants soaked in kerosene

The Big Daddy Kane of this, u Spider Loc compared to me

 

 

.....out!

 

 

Venomous

 
 
 
 



Replies:
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 06 May 2008 at 7:13pm
this was dope spit.. alot of personal thing I'm feeling from this.. its like you aiming at some shitty ppl on LA.. probably dynasty..JOKING.. nice multi, the flow was smooth.. kept me reading.. plenty of good line.. I can't pick the best 1 cuz the whole spit is dope.. keep spiting those flames.. 1

EZ


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Posted By: Madeye
Date Posted: 06 May 2008 at 10:31pm
Flow was lava, Chain...  Dope drop.
We share that "line-to-line with similar annunciation" type of rhyme scheme...  liked it.
Some lines are multied from start to finish, and carried over to the next line - giving you that Multied-Bars skill...  Nice Ish.
Vocabs ill, conceptual aspects are hot.  I like this style alot, and was a wicked read.
 
Stay Up, mayng.
 
One ['1]


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Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 07 May 2008 at 4:03pm
rameez -appreciate the feedback...and i'm not getting @ anybody but if u feel like i'm talking 'bout the dynasty..it is what it is, lol
 
mad-eye- good looking out on the feed  
 
 
 
 
 
ps: 3 replies - 50 views......y'all need to stop frontin


Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 08 May 2008 at 12:09am
Lol...im sure some of them digs were at me. But nonetheless was a hot verse. Although a callout would have proven more :P  jk...good shit

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Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 08 May 2008 at 3:25am
lol, nah, fatal....those digs weren't for you, you don't fit the description
 
..don't worry, lol
 


Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 08 May 2008 at 3:41am
i didnt get it

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Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 08 May 2008 at 4:42am
didn't get what?


Posted By: Rhymez
Date Posted: 08 May 2008 at 4:53pm
Damn. I like your rap style. thats the way i flow, lots of multies. The thing that made this one so hot is that i had the g's up instrumental playing when i read it, and it just flowed crazy, you got alot of skills.

you fell off a little after the "That I won’t encourage, y’all tryna clone a parody"
line but the drop was still hot.



Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 08 May 2008 at 6:04pm
props chain, i's drop feed but you aint need it on this one, bang up verse. again, props.

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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)


Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 08 May 2008 at 8:26pm
i didn't get most of it...flow was nice but meaning was lacking imo...

Quote I lecture minds with text supplies of pesticide for K-Fed’s


Was others also but im tired...


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