Round 3 - Votes
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Forum Name: Topical Tyranny
Forum Description: Topical Tournament by Point Blank - Winner: KayB
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=14984
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:27am
Topic: Round 3 - Votes
Posted By: Point Blank
Subject: Round 3 - Votes
Date Posted: 10 May 2008 at 9:19am
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=14866" rel="nofollow - Verses
Vote for your winner & explain |
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Posted By: Word.Smyth
Date Posted: 11 May 2008 at 10:42am
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Both drops were pretty dope. The first verse told a real good story, with great imagery and emotion. A couple of the lines were a little off but it flowed pretty well. Good structure and nice rhyme-patterns (e.g. inner multies, etc.). Not a bad drop at all. The second verse was equally powerfull in the imagery and emotion, the structure I felt was much better, and it seemed to flow easier to me. I think the multies in this were really good as well. I particularly enjoyed the way the second writer came at this, topic-wise. The split decisions shown, the first having a relation to the second, but the overall hardest decision was which to write... that was brilliant. I'm going to have to give this one to the second verse. It just left more of an indelible impression on my mind... but I give props to both writers. P.S. do I need to have a certain number of posts before voting, or is it okay for a newb like myself to vote? -------------  |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 11 May 2008 at 6:18pm
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No you don't aslong as it's explained...props on voting though remember the click the poll 1-0 verse 2 -------------  |
Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 11 May 2008 at 9:57pm
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Damn this one was hard to vote on... The first one gave great imagery and story telling while still managing to have great flow and multies. Not many are skill enough lyrically to be able to do this. I thought it was a unique approach on the topic and creative to take something that happened to kay recently and give it it's own twist. Second verse had great emotion and very original approach to the topic. I felt this one was less clearly written but left alot more to the reader to interpret on their own. I can see this going either way since both had very well written verses. One was more story oriented while the latter was more personal and expressed feeling...Im gonna have to go wit the second because i liked how it presented two really hard decisions and leaving it up to the reader to decide which is harder. Tight battle...Vote: Second verse-------------  |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 16 May 2008 at 4:16pm
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Who voted verse 1? According to the explained votes it is 2-0 to verse 2 ------------- |
Posted By: ProFound
Date Posted: 16 May 2008 at 4:23pm
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 17 May 2008 at 2:08am
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Why not? ------------- |
Posted By: Word.Smyth
Date Posted: 21 May 2008 at 2:55am
I don't know who voted for verse 1, but I just polled verse 2. Someone evidently voted with no explanation, I guess. ------------- |
Kay B wrote:Posted By: Bolo
Date Posted: 21 May 2008 at 3:18am
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its a bit past the 14th.... ------------- I am the one that knocks... |
Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 21 May 2008 at 3:34am
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Just a tad hehe Jif's been busy with school..(exam season)...so this is pretty much up in the air until pimpin gets back. Until then...looks like verse 2 has the lead. |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 21 May 2008 at 9:34am
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Score is STILL 2-0 to verse 2 People if you aint goona vote fuck off out the thread and quit clicking the poll (to those who did) ------------- |
Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 21 May 2008 at 8:04pm
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verse 1: verse was pretty nice...flow was very hard to grasp thus it wasn't really an enjoyable read...but still, i loved the story...emotion was display nice and consistently so good job...really compelled me... verse 2: verse was pretty nice as well...flow was much better here than in the first verse...made the reading very smooth...almost felt like less line (may have been, iunno)...enjoy the stories, both had nice emotion...love the twist vote: verse 2, felt the twist was amazing, loved how the closer tied the whole piece together, it connected both verses to each other as well as to the topic so yea Verse 2 GMV ------------- 
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Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 28 May 2008 at 3:14pm
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Sorry Dal, your vote is disallowed since voting ended on 17th May. anyway Verse 2 wins with 2 votes. -------------  |