Salvatore Presents: Sal-utation's World
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:27am
Topic: Salvatore Presents: Sal-utation's World
Posted By: dalinquent
Subject: Salvatore Presents: Sal-utation's World
Date Posted: 01 September 2008 at 2:49am
As some of you know, I've been hella busy working on my new mixtape,
Thus I haven't been as active as I've been in the past, With that said,
I present to you...  http://www.megaupload.com/?d=K1533KA8" rel="nofollow - DOWNLOAD NOW Download the tape ans leave a review Peace -Salvatore-
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Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 01 September 2008 at 5:02am
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Isn't there a way to stream it song by song?
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 01 September 2008 at 10:01am
Just download it you lazy cunt...
Props dal, ill download at get at you with a review, though i already know it'll suck
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Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 01 September 2008 at 10:46am
Cool. Downloading it now. I'll drop feed after I've listened to it
------------- https://soundcloud.com/lostblueeyes" rel="nofollow - Music
Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)
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Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 01 September 2008 at 11:58am
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Lazy cunt? For not wanting to download it?
Please explain that one
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 01 September 2008 at 1:27pm
It would take longer to download a as a whole than streaming separate files, obviously
So i repeat, download it...you lazy....cunt
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Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 01 September 2008 at 6:07pm
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Intro - Loving the piano, delivery is nice, flow is decent, sounds a little restrained at times but that works with the beat. I'm feelin this one, good stuff. Chick is hot, guy did you right on production.
I'm Best - Not feelin the synths in this one, in fact not really likin the beat at all, too digital for my tastes. Ridin the beat well, nothin really standin out in the lyrics, flows nice, a bit too generic/mainstreamy for my taste.
Ghetto 2 Ghetto - Beat is ok apart from that midi/sample guitar, that's just nasty to my ears as a guitarist. Spittin is nice, still a bit mainstream for me (i have a feeling i may be saying this alot) well put down though. Not feeling the hook at all if i'm honest.
Last Man Standing - Again the music is lost on me far too synthetic sounding at times, almost like someone took an ambient trance track and put a hiphop/bongo beat over it. Spittin is tight on this one, nice emotion, good presence.
Take You to Hollywood - This beat starts off tight as fuck, then it goes all frickin trance again which I hate completely. I really aint feelin that vocoder voice in there don't know if that's you or the producer but that shit is mad played out and cheesy as fuck. The spittin is pretty nice, kinda get thrown off at times coz of the vocoder crap in the background though.
Steppin Stones - You're already at a disadvantage on this one because my boy used this beat and fuckin killed it. You come in aite, flow's nice and fluid. Hard for me to give solid feed on this to be honest, I keep hearin my boy's shit in the back of my head and he's a frickin monster.
I'm In Luv With a Dancer - this is just plain not my type of music to listen to, really synthetic/trancey samples/soundfiles, even the drums sound like a weak drum machine to me. Your vocals are way better than the beat, this would prolly have been a tight track if you used a good beat for it.
Miss Lady - Can't hear u on the intro, and omg this beat is good but you absolutely ruined the entire track with that god awful dissonant vocoder off-key singing bull. The rap parts are actually nice, but that vocoder thing is one of the ugliest things i've ever heard in my entire life.
Future of The Game - Again too trancey for me, it's that whole non-musical synth thing i really hate about today's mainstream in full effect. Spittin is aite, pretty generic again, you got better than this, kinda an album filler for me.
Breathe No More - Not my steeze drums wise but this beat is beautiful, great musically and that chick's voice is angellic. You ridin it nice, could announciate a bit more, your flow sounds good but the delivery is a little mumbled/muffled at times. Sorry to say it, but the beat outshined you here, but then that girl would prolly outshine most people.
Come On Over - Hook is out of tune which I don't like, singing lessons maybe? Spittin is aite, not your best, lyrics are a bit played out on this topic, I've prolly heard this song a million times from a thousand artists. Another filler track to me.
Sal-utations World - No lie, the intro made me thing I was at a mellow house club in manchester's gay village. Not feeling this beat at all, you actually outshining the beat here.
Good Die Young - Another beautiful beat. Not feeling your voice on the hook accent sounds out of place against the beat. Verses are well delivered, again the accent at times sounds out of place on a beat with this style, a bit too strong at times, but this is a good track I quite like this one apart from the hook.
Forceful Flows - Sage soundin like a hiphop barry white on the intro or some shit lol. Sage killin that first verse bigtime, not changin my opinion that noone fuckin with him audiowise on LA. You come in nice, then that echo voice throws me a little, until that point the track almost had an underground flava and then that lil echoey sample thing sounded mad out of place like it was tryna be mainstream in a non mainstream soundin steeze. You goin on for a while but shit started to lose quality towards the end. Sage comes back in like a monster, dope as fuck. That annoying beep thing in your first verse was also wack. You come in a little less strong on the second verse, another wack beep thing soundin like feedback from the mic or something, sage also gettin better quality on this one throughout. Not bad at all though, best track on teh album so far.
Around The World - Feelin this one, nice simple beat, comin nice with the flow, nothin special lyrically but your presence carries it well. Oh I hate the hook though, that really does sound like a frickin gay night club dance beat. The change up in the beat lost me a little but it comes back ok-ish after the hook, though the first verse came across better to me. I seriously hate that hook, no offence but I'm sure it'd go down well at gay pride.
Outro - Again too trancey/synthey for me, I guess I just don't like that whole sound. Not feeling your delivery on this eaither, I think you suit a faster tempo when you rap this sounds a bit to drawn out to me. Personally I woulda liked a tighter closer on teh album.
Overall it's a nice effort, a couple of points where you started to shine through, alot of places it was hella generic and that bored me if I'm honest. The mixed standard in your quality and delivery makes it a little unproffessional aswell. Props on gettin it out though man. Stay Up.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)
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Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 02 September 2008 at 9:11am
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ouch lol - mainstream from underground at heart... ill D/L and do a run down for you, i think ill like this mixtape...
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Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 02 September 2008 at 10:11am
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LMAO @ Kay...what a loser
Anyway Dal, as I said in my original post, before that bitch had to get involved and start hatin on me AGAIN, is there any way I can stream the tracks?
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 02 September 2008 at 10:46am
Yeah man, what a loser kay is hating on you AGAIN...amusing thing is you seem to think it's only me on this site that has that opinion on you, but hey lets not ruin dal's thread here now be a good girl and just download it :)
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Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 02 September 2008 at 12:13pm
No, there ain't a way to stream it, download or miss out, either way - fuck off and take that shit to the fuck you forums or dead it
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Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 02 September 2008 at 3:16pm
That's your girl? Bitch get over here, give me some brain! I'll bust off on her face, and right after the segment, She'll probably rub it in her pussy, trying to get herself pregnant.
PEACE.
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Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 02 September 2008 at 4:36pm
Huh? But seriously peeps, if I can listen to the whole thing and post some feed, so can you, quit bein fuckin punks...
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)
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Posted By: Charlie_B
Date Posted: 02 September 2008 at 5:52pm
I said it I meant it, that's the way I deal with enemies
Like pro lifers, that support the death penalty
And don't talk about war, when niggas know that your pus
A fucking hypocrite draft dodger like George Bush
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Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 02 September 2008 at 5:54pm
???
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 02 September 2008 at 6:18pm
There quoting imm tech...why i dunno, but thats what there doing
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Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 03 September 2008 at 12:52am
Yea, that's what i'm wondering as well... wanna know why so I can plot my reaction
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Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 03 September 2008 at 1:35pm
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Fa sho, I'll check this out... Too much personal/school work at the moment though..
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Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 12 September 2008 at 12:52pm
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downloading... 4%...
feed will be up shortly..
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Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 12 September 2008 at 2:29pm
I'll feed em when I listen to em anytime I do but I cant listen to em all now though...
Around The World is dope... Nice lines, and emotion... I have a good feeling bout the tape.. Great intro to it.. Some quote ables, for example, kwazi moto...
Back On The Wall... First guy Starts off dope lyrically... Hooks nice... The usual nice emotion by you Dal... Lines are cool overall... His 2nd verse is good... Not as ill as his 1st, but yeah...
Breathe No More...I like the start/the concept of the track... Good storytelling... This beat is hottt... I like these types... You came hard on this one...
definitely not disappointing so far... Definitely worth a cop/listen... Soundin on point so far... the rest will be fed later... 1
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Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 12 September 2008 at 4:51pm
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Charlie you a swagger biter.
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Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 12 September 2008 at 6:52pm
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around the world - beat hot - actually bumpin my head lol - rhymes are hot, multis cool flow on point - this is a definite car tune - 2nd verse mixing it up - quasi moto lol nice, shit.. this hot... hook is cool too, bit odd but i like it lol - nice message - 9 / 10 - could easily go higher on repeated listens.
back on the wall - beats okay, pretty cool - first guy is cool, comes nice on the beat, nice rhyming, - hook is cool, nice and catchy good stuff - ill assume your the second guy - sound more expressive, good lines, good rhyming, missing your spine lol! nice..better on the beat too, rest of the guys is cool... nice track... 8/10
breathe no more - intro is cool - beat is nice - singing is hot / nice remix sample - first verse is hot - nice story, good lines, cant fault flow - emotion slightly less on thsi track but not as bad... it picks up in the 2nd verse - flow pretty fast - was expecting a bit mroe of a layed back style, so a bit of a surprise but still cool, maybe a touhc rushed - hook is hot shiz - my type of hook - like singing on a chorus and back vocal is nice - shit ending is nice, nice twist - hot song - 8.5 - 9 / 10
cmon over - beat a little odd - arabic sounding kinda, not feeling it instantly - hook sounds quite amateruish - yeah first verse is hot, flow and lines are hot, good chill track, feeling me too lol... hook catchy enough - sounds a bit badly mized but its growing on me lol, hard to hear the phone skit, rest of verses are solid, no complaints nice track - 7/10
forceful flows - beat kicks in quite dominate, eerie, has a nice feel to it, first guy (sage) is good , nice rhymes - good multis, decent lines..... dal comes in - decent presence - voice sounds a little.. chocked up, or blocked up a little scratchy - decent lines tho, not quite as powerful as previous, sage has great presence- cool voice - if he layed it back a bit on a devin the dude style beat he could have a hit or two... good flow - a bit fast for my taste but still cool, then finishing off is good shiz... this a nice lil "freestyle" style track in the album, not bad, but not killer 6.5/10
future of the game - nice hook, catchy.. beat a little jumpy but still cool, flow is cool, nice swag on the track, next lverse is cool multis, some cool lines, taking your belt nice - get the picture - not bad, plays a little simplish - but fresh, so they work nice lol. next verse is cool, more of the same, cool flow nice on the beat.. decent - 3rd half what the fuck bit pretty funny - this is the second best hook so far.. minus the singing one.. cool shiz.. 8/10 - beat hot, towards the end, got used to it lol
ghetto to ghetto - nice intro, guitar is cool, got a 70's feel, bit kicks in.. hook is cool - message looks good already, opener is tight, nice lines, for the first time kinda straining to hear everything said, not bad, but its something i noticed, so bad enough for me to mention it lol. hook is def nice, again a fast beat, still hot - expecting a laid back track soon here, this is just BANG BANG BANG - fast paced all day lol, message is tight - outro (MLK? / malcom? ) is pretty cool, a little scratchy bit still cool - this a nice track - cool thoughts and beat / guitar is off the heez - beat 10 / 10.... track - 8.5/10
good die young - starting off slow, singing/piano pretty classy - beat kick is - flow slightly more layed back, beat a bit faced paced, kinda feeling a bit off, but still works - hook pretty cool - another decent message, verses are solid - stay on beat - cool... jay kanye - reference decent... overall nice song - 7.5/10
im the best - beat a little amaterusih, still decent, but sounds a little in your face - flow cool - some nice early plays - jet ski , gretsky, damsel - hook pretty cool - swag aint as tight on this one, kinda a reach your the best, as if you not totally feelin it lol, flow on and works well with the beat, multis pretty hot, 2nd and 3rd verses cool - another solid track - 7.5/10
in luve with a dancer - lol, beat a little odd - verse comes in a little quick - decent lines, obviously not as meaningful as some - hook a little different too, 2nd verse pretty good lol, good pimp swag on this lol hook grows on you tbf, in luv with a dancer bit, repetitive and catchy - nice player style track here - 7.5 /10 -
intro - beat cool - decent singing - nice emotion - nice multis stays on the beat nicely, hook decent - girls voice aint brilliant, brilliant lol,sounds a little amatuer, dunno if that the way it mixed but ah well, 2nd verse comes in nice, cool lines, nothing to hate on, piano has been used nicely in songs, another example, cant hate on this cool verses, nice beat - 8 /10
last man standing - beat brash - sounding a tiny bit drowned out - i know it sounds weird, but its easy to tell this produced like the rapping done, then put with the beat - it sounds really like you spitting through a muzzle or something , a little scratchy, kinda feels a little awkward next to the crisp beat, as if they just been layed over - kinda hard to put in words someone who dont now a whole lot about audio, but thats my thoughts - 5-6/10
miss lady - beat sounds cool, heard of syntehsis beats before , beat cool - vocoder thing sounds odd lol dunno what you doing there, when your verse comesi n the beat and flow are on lock, hot shiz, no problem with the lay over tracks in this one unlike the previous one hook is cool, beat is solid, verses are cool, another chill track, nothing too serious, but hot lines, age involved - lol, hot track 8.5 /10
outro - beat come in alot of scratchness in the beat, but still alright - emotion a little more swaggiful in this one, nice for the end of the album - outro skit is pretty decent - chattin at the end decent - tryna come off? lol decent ending 7.5/10
salutations world - beat is banging, nice mystical sound backing - come in attacking it again with a fast flow lol, again a head moving song, lines are hot - been very impressed flow wise - solid, multis cool - beat sounds uplifting - nice little track, bit quirky - out of thsi world kinda style lol, nice tho - beat and (trumpets?) pretty cool and verses solid.. 8/10
steppin stone - this the one thats been hyped, and discussed it with kay - like the song by duffy and this remix is dope - hot - really like the mix of her song and beat is cool - again a bit of a spitting in a booth sound effect, but still alright, flow is on lock, lines solid compliment line cool, multis hot - hook comes back in and im feeling it.. you come in with a few nice ad libs - i didnt know duffy big in the states? how you come across here - 2nd verse about the guy is hot - flow and beat is crazy - this living up to the hype nicely multis nice - intercom lol - dope all that can be said, mix is crazy - if you done all that then this shows real creative talents with beat making etc - hot track 10/10
take you to hollywood - beat comes in, sounding like something wayne would kill - nice strings - hook pretty cool - a little low - nice hollywood- scratching mix pretty cool, beat gets you bumping - flow again crazy fast lol, flow still hot, beat matches it pretty cool - role play lol - nice track - decent message in the song - girls in hollywood a common sight, gettin used and spit out - this is nice, beat and verses cool - 8.5/10
shit - well, very impressed, voice has improved from what i rememeber - beat choice was very good for the most part - flow was on lock - can count on my index finger how many times i felt you rushed it lol, really good in that respect, multis and lines where cool, some girl tracks where a little slacker, but thats to be expected - some cool punchlines - flow on the beat was awesome - mixing for the most again was solid - i see why you been working so hard, and its paid off, this is impressive stuff - going on the ipod - hot man.. well done...
hard work and serious props deserved, we dotn see eye to eye often, but respect where its due ...
definately an album for all of la to cop..
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Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 14 September 2008 at 10:46pm
Come On Over... the hook is surprising... im undecided on it right now... sounds like somethin that can grow on me, but it's weird at first... the verses are straight... sounds very radio-ish. i can hear it on the radio easily... even tho i9t aint my favorite type of track, it expands your fan base.
forceful flows... sage has the underground flow... love the emotion that dal brings... an overall hot track to me...
Future Of The Game... starts off hard... The beat is illlll. You rippin it too... The hook's dope... real creative... lyrics are on point...delivered well... hook is the shining point, even though it's simple...
Ghetto To Ghetto... Hook's cool... Nice concept... Ridin' the verse in your usual style... like the emotion... Vibin' track... Speakin the truth on it.. Nice use of MLK's sample... Added more spice/ an authentic feel to the track...
Rest later...
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Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 15 September 2008 at 2:09am
props to both of you for taking the time to hear the music and leave ur thoughts, respect... also happy that u both seem to like the tape overall...
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