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Blind Faith

Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=17532
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:00am


Topic: Blind Faith
Posted By: Calibra
Subject: Blind Faith
Date Posted: 03 June 2009 at 11:47am
Trying something a little different here, open your eyes and your minds!
 
 
Dear reader,

If this ever gets political
Im President of syllables
Eloquent and visable
As relevant and lyrical
Intelligent, invincible
This blessin' isnt spiritual
My effort is as physical
As wrestlers in interviews
Heaven is the interlude
For Hell that we are livin' through
Confession with a sinner proves
You'll never cleanse the inner you
I'll never get religion too
Both Testimants are fictional
Lacks evidence and simple truths
From messin' with originals
The Reverends would pick & choose
The text that's in the written books
Edited so it would suit
The messages they wished to use
Im pressured into spittin' proof
And end it with initials too...

Your Sincerely
M.J.S




Replies:
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 03 June 2009 at 3:22pm
Haha... This is ill.. Great flow.. The set up reminds me of a Cuba piece awhile back where his line's where mega short but flowed awesome..

Props bro'.. You know the drill..




Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 03 June 2009 at 4:29pm
yeah man, that was hot. Flowed brilliant, unique, great message, didn't just start throwin' in random words to make it flow either. Good shit man. You're fast becoming one of the best textcee's on this site. Keep up the good work.

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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: Higgs
Date Posted: 03 June 2009 at 6:25pm
I liked the concept; addressing the readers.  Nice vocabulary, interesting rhyme scheme, went aaaaaaabab so there's an appropriate change up that flowed nicely.

I'm looking forward to checking out some more pieces from you.


Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 04 June 2009 at 1:39am
ha...this was nice....the flow was outstanding...i would of liked this to be a bit longer but this was still pretty sick...nice to see a different rhyme scheme for once...

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Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 04 June 2009 at 2:24pm
shit was da troof, 


u already know


Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 04 June 2009 at 3:57pm
Sick.

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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 06 June 2009 at 12:46am
Dope as everyone has said im too lazy to re-type everything u know it was dope

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