On and Off (feat. NepentheZ)
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Topic: On and Off (feat. NepentheZ)
Posted By: CHAIN
Subject: On and Off (feat. NepentheZ)
Date Posted: 14 June 2009 at 9:32pm
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we lost the finals, but we're back...hard, pause
[Chain]
Rhythm is this thing that their flows aren’t keen on
What happens to their punches if I put a beat on? Or this is a subject I really shouldn’t speak on? Knowing that the truth hurts, meaning that the beef’s on Once I drop subliminals u fiends couldn’t sleep on Doper than a ‘brick’ when I get my ‘key’ on High for 10 decades when I get my ‘e’ on If u think this will wake ‘em up…dream on! Checkmating kingdoms when I get my freak on The weakest on the board are the bitches that I ‘pee on’ Peons will be gone once I put my peeps on Piece on their hips getting they Clint East’ on Squeezing through percussion that we feast on Turning up the heat our vocal chords will skeet on Fuck a multi, I gets my ‘tongue-in-cheek’ on Got ‘em asking things like: ‘what type of shit is He on?’ Looking at me like, this ain’t sumthn I should keep on Like walking through a mosque with my fucking sneaks’ on Either show respect or getcha ‘Ctrl C’ on I’m ill, I think that much we can agree on I never hit notes ‘cause I gets my M.C on While snitches at the precinct get they Do-Re-Mi on You know thats my boy Chain, turnin' it on but I'm coming back to flip this shit, burnin' it off .... Officially, I'm not a kinda topical texta, but right now we here eatin' this Offal for breakfast what do you Offer to Nep? Nothin', demented with lyrics 'cos anything you ever dropped you just Offending me with it I got plenty to bring, its crazy if you think you taking it Off me an if you get too pushy right here, we can start takin' it Off Screen I murder emcees, Neps ya man to just Off him fucking you up so bad in 9 months you havin' my Offspring my style its real grimey, leavin' Office gentlemen militant 'cos everything Offkey is Offensively brilliant none of you rappers can Officiate the punches I bore so bowl down with your strong arm, watch me Off stump him for four you Offtrack emcee's try to copy us? Nah, Crazy I got more chance of gettin' a beat down from Officer barbrady don't ever wanna battle, v Me you'll get Blast Off We got them Cheap Em'seas for Sail, who are easily Cast Off don't come near me swinging them fist, or I'll be Off with ya Arms an now we got cats who wanna team up with Nep, but you're not Offered the chance NEW ERA, THE TRUTH....
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Replies:
Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 14 June 2009 at 9:34pm
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Good shit man, your verse is crazy.
-------------  I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 14 June 2009 at 9:43pm
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Haha.. This is dopeness.. Chain's verse was insane.. Props both.. |
Posted By: Rhymez
Date Posted: 14 June 2009 at 9:52pm
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Best collab i ever read on here chain went in
------------- 'jaemills' trying to beat me is like a broke pencil. there aint no point |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 14 June 2009 at 10:09pm
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Wow. ------------- 
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Posted By: Tesla
Date Posted: 14 June 2009 at 10:21pm
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chain this is the first bit of material ive read form you and i gotta say man it was nice nep nice verse man up to the usual standard ive come to expect from your work overall id rate it a 9/10 ------------- prophecy is fulfilled when my fingers dance the pencil |
Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:16am
| This is why you can't fuck with us.... Damn we're dope! |
Posted By: Madeye
Date Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:38pm
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Well formulated, Famz.
Genius collab, imo. Liking Nep's contribution best.
Both verses were well written. Nice @ both.
~iLLy
One ['1] ------------- <font color=darkgray>I'm only offended by those I respect... and I don't respect you[/COLOR] |
Posted By: aminal
Date Posted: 18 June 2009 at 5:24am
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since when is it hard to rhyme the same word 24 times? chain your verse was ill i'm not taking anything away from that, but its pretty easy to write a good bar when you dont have to worry about rhyming... |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 18 June 2009 at 10:51am
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^ Well he did still have to worry about rhyming, coz he used a multi...so he was rhyming the first syllable differently then on everytime, probably makes it a little bit harder to think of a line that hits if you gotta say 'on' at the end of every line...not that I think it was amazingly hard, but overall it was still pretty dope -------------
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