Rnd 2 - Battle 1: Perfecto [vs] P-Man
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Forum Name: Last Man Standing
Forum Description: Tournament by: Scotty32, Winner: King Jehu
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=1786
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:30am
Topic: Rnd 2 - Battle 1: Perfecto [vs] P-Man
Posted By: Scotty32
Subject: Rnd 2 - Battle 1: Perfecto [vs] P-Man
Date Posted: 03 May 2004 at 1:05pm
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20lines min - 50lines max all verses must be in by: Sunday 9th of May 2004 at 12:00 Midnight (GMT/British) (To find out the time set your time 5hours head of the site time in your profile) Perfecto spits first, then P-Man - since thats the order they came out the hat -------------  |
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Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 04 May 2004 at 3:49am
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ok imma ready ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Date Posted: 09 May 2004 at 6:58pm
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You were ready on the 4th but I made you wait till the 9th, Adios... -------------  |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 3:12am
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Well perfecto thinks hes won, but he aint the �Last Man Standing� This chinks just a gay whore, whos used to vast man handling So senor your out stop banging your head against that brick wall My lines stand tall , chink yours are just a quick scrawl Cause I command all, I wreck this gook like it�s a sick brawl this is a planned maul ,to me your rhymes aint shit fool So stand down , perfecto your lines are getting bland clown So pass that grand crown, you claim to own but I�m here to dethroneyou Remember Your only top, cause all the newbies have blown you So spit a good verse, or lose to p-man like your prone too! You just some lame skid, whos can�t win with your shamed bid So leave ashamed punk , ive got the rifle cocked and aimed kid I leave you maimed son, perfecto�s left disabled like a spastic Now people say �look at this retard� , your labelled mr drastic But I�m sarcastic , I sit and laugh at your dire flows All you have to do is cut an paste my words to aspire yo You have to hire hoes, cause you just can�t pull a lady with looks like yours p-mans strikes cause wars , my hits just end up droppin jaws I make perfecto pause, shit better write that rap again Cause prick its just to plain , I cause strain in perfecto�s brain Mate im insane , I leave u in pain I am here to reign This is no game , I�m here to kill , here to spill Chinese blood I�m like a storm , but we�ll see if perfecto can take the flood ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 5:03am
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Flow: Perfecto (just) Well.. pretty even... but I think overall Perfecto's was a bit stronger, plus he came with more. VOTE: Perfecto ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 5:41am
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ok uppn ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 8:54am
ok uppin please ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: Noxious
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 9:11am
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ok ok....ill battle... p~man: nice alround verse, feelin it alot, nice use of multis, hard punches, nice personals. senor: again nice alround verse, nice punches, nice multis. Flow: Perfecto vote: p~man peace ~1~ ------------- 
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Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 9:24am
cheers 1-1  ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: hectic379
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 11:04am
| iight sick battle ther both verses very good very close to but im gonna vote p man coz he came out wit 1 sick verse and i think just took it with stronger punches vote p man |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 11:10am
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thankyou upping fo the Ko ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 11:12am
sorry not the ko as perfecto has one vote! ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: Thickest crap
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 12:06pm
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Dam good battle.....love reading both of yah
spits....you both have some good skillzzz. Perfecto came with some good hits and some good battle diss'es..........but P-man......wow nice flow bro, way to rock the show. P-man had a great flow and I love the hits ha did throw.....good skillz and you seem to get battle as time goes. This was a very close battle but after reading both spits a couple times I feel P-man had the win. Vote: P-Man Good job guys 
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Posted By: ILLSTARRR
Date Posted: 10 May 2004 at 12:18pm
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hmmm close 1 i reckon p-man got it with flow......but perfecto got it with punches lets break it down flow:p-man punches:perfecto multi's:perfecto.....his was more classy imaginery:perfecto wordplay:none vocab:perfecto even thou it seemed like perfecto had sum filla......i reckon perfecto's spit was classier.......but good effort p-man.......ill-power goin strong! vote:perfecto -------------   www.myspace.com/illsta |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 11 May 2004 at 3:17am
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ok uppin ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: Rixa-Mixa
Date Posted: 11 May 2004 at 3:33am
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yer good spit by both of yaz, Flow: Perfecto ------------- ~Rixa-Mixa~Crikey! X-Fade II |
Posted By: Rixa-Mixa
Date Posted: 11 May 2004 at 3:45am
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well that fucked up Flow: P-man VOTE: Senor Perfecto ------------- ~Rixa-Mixa~Crikey! X-Fade II |
, here it goes again, Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 11 May 2004 at 4:49am
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aint accepting no votes off this dick shit ! he been givin beef since he been back! Hate Vote comes to mind! ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: Louie
Date Posted: 11 May 2004 at 7:50am
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yer nice battle manz, u both spat sum aite rhymes here no doubt p-man has got the flow and in my opinon his punches were jus as gud as perfectos, perfecto used "man" like 3 times n a bar i aint usaully down wit shit like tht specially if its a txt battle mayb on stage it laughin , p-mans personals is what gets my vote, nice battle from 2 vets..cool vote> de p man
------------- all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life..... |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 11 May 2004 at 10:00am
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P: I thought Rixa's vote was pretty fair to be honest.. Peace. ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 11 May 2004 at 10:51am
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you need to read some of the threads then cause he been causing beef for dayz fuckin wack punk! ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 11 May 2004 at 11:01am
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Yeah true he has.. all I was sayin' was the vote seemed pretty fair... but it ain't my place to say or nothin'... good luck to both. Peace. ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 14 May 2004 at 3:17am
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comeon ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: MC Saggs
Date Posted: 14 May 2004 at 10:20am
| has 2 be p-man cus his was more persoanl and hit deeper u get me, |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 14 May 2004 at 10:50am
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OK imma threw! good battle perfecto! Close Please ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 14 May 2004 at 11:14am
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not so quick lil pman! am not sure about this vote - i dunno if its explained well enuf (oviously it is to you :P) ama think about this ------------- |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 14 May 2004 at 11:30am
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i pmd him and asked him to vote an he did! wats wrong with that! you should have looked at rixas vote that was dodgy HATE VOTE! ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 15 May 2004 at 8:08am
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is this finished or whst? ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: XXplosive
Date Posted: 15 May 2004 at 9:53am
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here is my vote... Over all this was a very very close battle! Flow: Senor Perfecto This was a close battle and they were both good verses but i think senor's verse was a bit more agressive than p-man's well done to both |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 15 May 2004 at 10:28am
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MC Saggs vote is disallowed 4-4 i believe the score is now ------------- |
Posted By: J-Dash-P
Date Posted: 15 May 2004 at 1:12pm
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Comment'z on perfecto - I like how perfecto was displaying the illest flow on point the whole way through - this alway'z count'z to me as I'm alway's tryna study complex rymestyle'z when I see em. First glance on battle - Perfecto besides his flow also backed it up with content that made sence. P-Man - First glance for P-Man is he seemed to outlash at ratial discriminancies to attack his opponent saying thing'z like - "This chinks just a gay whore, whos used to vast man handling - First of all I thought senor was a word from the spanish language (not chinese) which mean'z sir or Mister so this count'z in battle break down so punches made the emcee look like he did'nt have any understanding on the opponent'z back ground to start with. Intial first glance rating - 1 point to Perfecto and a minus point to P-Man for these 2 point'z that were mentioned above in the first glance description.
Highlight'z of both verse's: Perfecto: - "I'm displaying dismaying sayings portraying AKs spraying, Comment: Good wordplay
- "Leave the rapping to the Pros cos these Cons just ain't weighing" Comment: Nice flip that was bringing 2 analogies into the wordplay.
- "You can't flip my complex spit cos you couldn't even understand it" Comment: Tyte rymestyle with good diss. - "P-Man searching for skill is like seeking the sunken City of Atlantis, Comment: Content all pulled in together with tyte flow and punches. - "I'll call the people from the Funny Farm in, Comment: Had me laughin at this one - tyte flow too. after-word advice: All the other pubches seemed like they were fill in punches not really hitting too hard Like this comment - "You'll have the P taken too when I have your ass crash-landing" had me wondering why was the P taken too? or this comment - "I'ma have fun baiting you though I'm done hating you, had me thinking well while it was tyte rymestyle the content did'nt all relate too well with the other line'z like as if your just trying to put down the opponent instead of bringing it all in context - It's alway'z good to bring hard content every single line. Over-all: Nice flow brah that'z still a pretty advanced ryme due most flow'z I've studied - actually it's very advanced (shyt you been doing this for a minute bro or what?). Peace - that's my over-all break down of Perfecto'z verse. My suggestion to the people wanting me to vote for peep'z is that if you want me to vote I'm alway'z going to have a detailed description like this coz I ca'nt be more honest.
P-Man: First of all the ryme-style is not as fluid as Senor when I read it. It sound'z like the emcee has'nt been rappin for that long as the rymestyle is basic. - "ive got the rifle cocked and aimed kid" Comment: Does'nt seem like this sort of content is original - I see this sort of stuff being rapped most of the time - Minus point for this. - "I leave you maimed son, perfecto�s left disabled like a spastic Comment: First of all it rymed - Secondly where did mr Drastic fit. More to the point Mr?. Are you trying to be funny?. I guess a spastic person could be pretty drastic but to do it like you did was pretty wack (no diss I'm just here to help you learn). You need to not use fill in'z as they just flood your ryme with basic punches. - "You have to hire hoes, cause you just can�t pull a lady with looks like Comment: This is probably the most effective part of his ryme - I thought this was a pretty good flow with relatively good content though not linking. By linking I mean this - "You have to hire hoes, cause you just can�t pull a lady with looks like yours" (one topic) "p-mans strikes cause wars" (Second topic) "my hits just end up droppin jaws" (Third topic). "I make perfecto pause" (fourth topic with all four not relating to each-other).
Over-all Comment - You need to link more with your rymes bro. Your rymestyle'z still on point though keep that in mind so your on the right track. Final analysis from both verse'z: Perfecto scored a 4.5 out of ten. P-Man scored a 0.5 out of ten. Keep in mind that my rating is broken down from all the best ryme'z I've ever analysed and using these verse's rating in comparison to the best battle ryme'z I've ever heard. Peace, J-P outty 1. ------------- "North side against the south side, leave it alone Killin eachother over land that we don't even own" - K-Rino/Greatest rapper of all time. |
Posted By: J-Dash-P
Date Posted: 15 May 2004 at 1:20pm
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lol I guess that mean'z I'm voting for Perfecto. Vote perfecto - Peace. ------------- "North side against the south side, leave it alone Killin eachother over land that we don't even own" - K-Rino/Greatest rapper of all time. |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 15 May 2004 at 1:28pm
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Perfecto is actually a Chinese guy with a Spanish username.. hence the punch from P. And I'm not sure if there's a rule on how long votes can be but try and keep them a bit shorter, 'cuz the battlers themselves like to read 'em but don't have all day! Nice to see you took it serious though, welcome to LA. And I guess that means Perfecto wins... Peace. ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: J-Dash-P
Date Posted: 15 May 2004 at 1:31pm
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Yeah sorry bout that I just did that to show y'all what level I'm on but yeah I will shorten it most most battle'z but for the serious one's that is how I would break it down, peace. ------------- "North side against the south side, leave it alone Killin eachother over land that we don't even own" - K-Rino/Greatest rapper of all time. |
Posted By: P-Man
Date Posted: 17 May 2004 at 3:47am
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ok fuck this perfecto wins even though i already won ------------- p-man taking over |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 17 May 2004 at 4:33am
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urm P-Man - you won?
Perfecto goes thru to the next round ------------- |