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Remember Me?

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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=18918
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 5:44am


Topic: Remember Me?
Posted By: Calibra
Subject: Remember Me?
Date Posted: 12 January 2010 at 12:45am

Remember me? Yeah, thought so...

 
Watch me... break down the monotany
Solemnly swear, too profound for philosphy
My prophecies, are the sound of monopoly
Bound to astound till the ground is on top of me
Im outta my cage, im like Tyson to box
We can't scuffle cause im too busy fightin' the odds
Lyrically? Einstein, they place my mind at the top
Been quiet lately but I've been typin' a lot
Right out the blocks, so catch me if you can
The gingerbread man ain't the athlete that I am
Pissed and im smackin' a bitch in the mammary gland
Shit, I flipped and now im fuckin' up ya family plans
Glady I hand, you ya ass and serve with h'orderves
Unique, no other C's in a universe with 4 Earths
Sick of basic gay shit, to drop you need to 'Pause' first
Im the saviour, I'll amaze ya like the child that the Lord birthed
You got that form curse, all ya puttin' out's a forced verse
Bored after the first, ya value's droppin' like it's Saws worth
My lyrics so hard when you mime it makes ya jaws hurt
I rock Hip Hop, im what made Collision Course work!
 



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Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 12 January 2010 at 12:54am
u speld monotony rong + dere wuz no ppunches multiz basic w/e

It was good...effortless. Didn't seem to follow a particular inspiration or strong theme but it still demonstrated an ability surpassing most with some good lines


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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .


Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 12 January 2010 at 10:09am
Cheers O, changed the spelling lolcould have sworn I checked that.

Props for the feed.


Posted By: rapdisup
Date Posted: 12 January 2010 at 1:43pm
nice read cali i liked tha gingerbread man line an tha "amaze" Gods son line was Sick keep droppin this was average for you but still came good nice read an stay up 

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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!

It aint over till I Rapdisup


Posted By: J Sass
Date Posted: 12 January 2010 at 1:52pm
Right out the blocks, so catch me if you can
The gingerbread man ain't the athlete that I am
 
that line was So Stand out-ish to me....No Homo, but it kinda just rolls off tha Tounge
nice shyt Cali
 
 
Sass


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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 12 January 2010 at 2:29pm
Nice shit cal as usual, as everyone said gingerbread line was sick...flow well throughout and as O said surpassed most people on here in majority of catefgorys....shit was ill

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Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 13 January 2010 at 5:39pm
Originally posted by Calibra Calibra wrote:

 
Bound to astound till the ground is on top of me Smile
The gingerbread man ain't the athlete that I am Wink

Pissed and im smackin' a bitch in the mammary gland Shocked

Unique, no other C's in a universe with 4 Earths Smile

I rock Hip Hop, im what made Collision Course work!   ...gully
 
 
i know u'r gonna be mad at my feed....but whatever, lol
 


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+Sick-Witted+


Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 13 January 2010 at 6:23pm
The idea of the closer was sick. Flow is so smooth, so... audio. Haha. Good verse.


Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 06 February 2010 at 3:35pm
Echo the thoughts of everyone else really, no real topic to the verse but still some impressive stuff in there...I liked the gingerbread man line, that was nice.

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Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 06 February 2010 at 8:03pm
Born to astound till the ground is on top of me. Love the flow, the gingerbread man line, the rhymes were good, etc. There's an echo in here.

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Insert something rappy here



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