Just Flowin 2
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:14am
Topic: Just Flowin 2
Posted By: Stalin
Subject: Just Flowin 2
Date Posted: 18 January 2010 at 6:54pm
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seven nine eighty five, the birth of a legend Lyrics'll be quickly past you like words in the present every verse that I pen in will make rappers bleed ull practically have to flee if u atackin me lackin heat shit I pack in these rapid frees smacks ya soul I get rich when I send spits into Cash 4 gold rapture sculls with the poisenous writtens Once a battle starts, u got no choice in the endin voicin opinions aint smart to do in my artist booth What u spit is not fresh like production on Tha Carter II i slaughter fools wit unproper views of the flows I Write I'm off the chain like broken bikes, Pro's on site know I'm right scoldin mics like I take this personal, let the verses flow I do it straight off the top, what u steady rehearsin for? I'm comin back runnin rap, tryin to get money stacked you think u as nice as me? Haha... you a funny cat There aint a squad or clique that i'm bothered wit Cuz I raised the rap game up.. Like I fathered it U gotta quit or I atleast better get my props Cuz I've been sick like I skipped my Tetanus shot Vets'll rock you rookies and unranked writers U make noise wit no effect like blanks fired Why's ur spits lackin? kids actin like u rip rappers swift actions hit faggots, yall aint a challenge, Its practice slick tactics that'll only leave your family in a line of cars I'll hit u wit Earth, Wind or fire on a major hit, like Shining star minor scars show I'm never fatally wounded U nerd ass faggots should be skatin wit Lupe My optics clear, I'll see you pussies drop in fear thinkin yall makin noise but couldnt even pop ya ears I will take all you bitches on, but I aint a slick Tiger Shove red peppers down your throats til yall spit fire your shits tired, when united there aint no stoppin us Most rap cats get greased up quick like boxing gloves Ill stop your cause, I spit the words that the world fears Yall thinkin u on top but I been the best for four years I Am hip hop, what yall cats spittin is a shame to me I'm responsible for more losses in LA than gang shootings |
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Posted By: N8Ball
Date Posted: 18 January 2010 at 7:18pm
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shit I pack in these rapid frees smacks ya soul I get rich when I send spits into Cash 4 gold i slaughter fools wit unproper views of the flows I Write
I'm off the chain like broken bikes, Pro's on site know I'm right There aint a squad or clique that i'm bothered wit
Cuz I raised the rap game up.. Like I fathered it the multis where sick all the way thru bro it was overall a well done piece... but the lines where like shit son! haha keep it up man ------------- Look to the sky to try n find god in the clouds hoping when he looks down i dont get lost in the crowd |
Posted By: I-SEE-GRIPS
Date Posted: 18 January 2010 at 8:34pm
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First time I read ya work man
Real easy to read it flowed right thru to my mind
loads a class lines, cash 4 gold was very nice
Yep thats a good lesson
thanks
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Posted By: Matt The Ripper
Date Posted: 19 January 2010 at 1:07am
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Props. This was fire, Stal. Smooth read. Nice! |
Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 19 January 2010 at 1:28am
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yeah solid enough piece, rhymes and scheme was hotter at the start then seemed to dwindle off, some plays where pretty run down.. i.e. funny cat, fathered it, peppers etc.... on the up, cash for gold, blanks and tiger plays all funny and creative..
good shiz |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 20 January 2010 at 10:44pm
| thanks for the feed yall |
Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 21 January 2010 at 4:52pm
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Read the first half when you showed me. The rest did not disappoint. Some multis were a little forced, like it would've flowed nice but you had to add one more rhyme (I've been guilty of it too). This stayed great all the way through, except for the last line, which was off. ------------- Insert something rappy here |