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Super Bowl Punday

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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:16am


Topic: Super Bowl Punday
Posted By: King Jehu
Subject: Super Bowl Punday
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 7:49am
I wrote this Sunday afternoon because it was the anniversary of the deaths of the two most underrated artists in their field, especially because of their influence. I was gonna write more, or write better, but that's what came out of 5 minutes of typing on my iPod.

Super Bowl Punday, run plays, some say
"He wasn't the best" and "there's only one Jay"
But like me, he wasn't just round, but well rounded
Sad that it's been ten years since his bell sounded
Fell sound asleep, heart gave out
obese dude with a flow, broke apart they doubts
Indelible, incredibe, every rapper was edible
Medical professionalism, flow unforgettable
Don't trip on how short his rap timeline is
Big pun's the reason why I rhyme like this
Syllables of rhymes, unkillable design
Book meant for class, I would fill it full of lines
And who can forget that this day's killa
When a day just like this we lost jay dilla
Producer that inspired beats like pun did rhymes
His mother by his deathbed, her son did fine
Now the talent lost in death is pittied a lot
Because hip hop has lost way more than just biggie and pac
Small towns dance to it, whole cities have rocked
Hip hop has lost more than just biggie and pac

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Insert something rappy here



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Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 8:02am
yessir.... i like this joint... gon an put a beat to it an make a full song. shit if u aint got one i'll make u one

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U already know...


Posted By: Alcatraz
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 9:33am
nice drop Jehu.... i really felt where you was goin wit this and ya prolly wit more time and effort it mighta been better but sometimes its what comes naturally thats the best and this is a good example of that.

this flowed real nice to me
Fell sound asleep, heart gave out 
obese dude with a flow, broke apart they doubts 
Indelible, incredibe, every rapper was edible 
Medical professionalism, flow unforgettable

and this killed it as a closer
Now the talent lost in death is pittied a lot 
Because hip hop has lost way more than just biggie and pac 
Small towns dance to it, whole cities have rocked 
Hip hop has lost more than just biggie and pac


keep droppin


Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 1:18pm
Fuckin sick piece mate..
 
How Pun gets so little mention is a mystery, he's got to be in the top 10 for flow, punchlines and delivery of all time.


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Posted By: Demonic
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 2:38pm
Awesome

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Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 3:06pm
Great work.

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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 5:21pm
Pretty hot for a 5 minute key... Pun was one of the best..
 
Indelible, incredibe, every rapper was edible
Medical professionalism, flow unforgettable
 
That was real nice right there.
 
 
If u wouldve taken time on it, it wouldve been much better.. but still good how it is


Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 9:10pm
Haha... my man

I like it


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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .


Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 16 February 2010 at 4:30am
RIP Big L.

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Insert something rappy here


Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:13am
Yeah, I bumped a LOT of Big L today and in the past couple of days... so charismatic, awesome

I think it's great how in Renegades we had you on the Pun shit and Stalin on the L shit... guess we were missing the likes of Biggie and Pac


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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .


Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 17 February 2010 at 1:07am
...and a Calibra!


Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 19 February 2010 at 8:51pm
You got Renegades II going on... three of your seven

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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .


Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 20 February 2010 at 11:11am
Lol yeah, don't think I haven't had that thrown in my face before. Apparently im trying to recreate the Renegades...


Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 20 February 2010 at 11:08pm

Anyone who said that is retarded Cal...

It's just not something u can recreate


Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 22 February 2010 at 6:09am
i aint gonna lie this shit is dope.
You're on some fucking mf doom swag, the topic is smooth. mentioning dilla is always a classy move.
I can definitely dig how you tie in superbowls with death, it blends well and in the end you're just like....ok.

gitrdone


Posted By: J Sass
Date Posted: 22 February 2010 at 6:40am

this shyt was fire...flow was on point...i fareal could hear it when i read it....nice shyt

 

Sass



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