Super Bowl Punday
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:16am
Topic: Super Bowl Punday
Posted By: King Jehu
Subject: Super Bowl Punday
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 7:49am
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I wrote this Sunday afternoon because it was the anniversary of the deaths of the two most underrated artists in their field, especially because of their influence. I was gonna write more, or write better, but that's what came out of 5 minutes of typing on my iPod.
Super Bowl Punday, run plays, some say "He wasn't the best" and "there's only one Jay" But like me, he wasn't just round, but well rounded Sad that it's been ten years since his bell sounded Fell sound asleep, heart gave out obese dude with a flow, broke apart they doubts Indelible, incredibe, every rapper was edible Medical professionalism, flow unforgettable Don't trip on how short his rap timeline is Big pun's the reason why I rhyme like this Syllables of rhymes, unkillable design Book meant for class, I would fill it full of lines And who can forget that this day's killa When a day just like this we lost jay dilla Producer that inspired beats like pun did rhymes His mother by his deathbed, her son did fine Now the talent lost in death is pittied a lot Because hip hop has lost way more than just biggie and pac Small towns dance to it, whole cities have rocked Hip hop has lost more than just biggie and pac ------------- Insert something rappy here |
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Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 8:02am
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yessir.... i like this joint... gon an put a beat to it an make a full song. shit if u aint got one i'll make u one ------------- U already know... |
Posted By: Alcatraz
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 9:33am
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nice drop Jehu.... i really felt where you was goin wit this and ya prolly wit more time and effort it mighta been better but sometimes its what comes naturally thats the best and this is a good example of that. this flowed real nice to me Fell sound asleep, heart gave out obese dude with a flow, broke apart they doubts Indelible, incredibe, every rapper was edible Medical professionalism, flow unforgettable and this killed it as a closer Now the talent lost in death is pittied a lot Because hip hop has lost way more than just biggie and pac Small towns dance to it, whole cities have rocked Hip hop has lost more than just biggie and pac keep droppin
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Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 1:18pm
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Fuckin sick piece mate..
How Pun gets so little mention is a mystery, he's got to be in the top 10 for flow, punchlines and delivery of all time. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow"> 
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Posted By: Demonic
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 2:38pm
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Awesome
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Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 3:06pm
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Great work.
-------------  I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 5:21pm
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Pretty hot for a 5 minute key... Pun was one of the best..
Indelible, incredibe, every rapper was edible
Medical professionalism, flow unforgettable That was real nice right there.
If u wouldve taken time on it, it wouldve been much better.. but still good how it is
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Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 09 February 2010 at 9:10pm
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Haha... my man I like it ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 16 February 2010 at 4:30am
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RIP Big L. ------------- Insert something rappy here |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:13am
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Yeah, I bumped a LOT of Big L today and in the past couple of days... so charismatic, awesome I think it's great how in Renegades we had you on the Pun shit and Stalin on the L shit... guess we were missing the likes of Biggie and Pac ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 17 February 2010 at 1:07am
| ...and a Calibra! |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 19 February 2010 at 8:51pm
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You got Renegades II going on... three of your seven
------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 20 February 2010 at 11:11am
| Lol yeah, don't think I haven't had that thrown in my face before. Apparently im trying to recreate the Renegades... |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 20 February 2010 at 11:08pm
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Anyone who said that is retarded Cal... It's just not something u can recreate |
Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 22 February 2010 at 6:09am
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i aint gonna lie this shit is dope. You're on some fucking mf doom swag, the topic is smooth. mentioning dilla is always a classy move. I can definitely dig how you tie in superbowls with death, it blends well and in the end you're just like....ok. gitrdone
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Posted By: J Sass
Date Posted: 22 February 2010 at 6:40am
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this shyt was fire...flow was on point...i fareal could hear it when i read it....nice shyt
Sass -------------  |