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Broken Language 2010

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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:27am


Topic: Broken Language 2010
Posted By: Calibra
Subject: Broken Language 2010
Date Posted: 13 February 2010 at 3:49pm
Following on from my old Broken Language piece. Didn't wanna over do it though...

The masterbater, tax evader
Wack rap procrastonator
The watching porn, late night ejaculator
Animator, steal the office laminator 
Apple hater, Mac invader
Smashin' Chain collaborator
Peepin' Tom salivator
I'm in danger wrestlin' an alligator
New Era's violent member
Silence ender, child vendor
The mic pretender...
The bleeping while ya rhymin' censor
The space and time inventor
Mind extender, line condensor
Name used in vain, Jesus Christ repenter
Written 187, repeated crime offender
The Al Pacino fighter, emo smiter
The cliche "De Niro in Casino" rhymer
Ego sniper, Joe Budden killin' Premo Cypher
"I can record my favourite shows" advert Tevo hyper
Till smashin' robber, someone being killed tragic stopper
On the fence Reasonable Doubt and Illmatic copper
The still static shocker, pill addict popper
The "Never should've redone an ill classic" dropper!




Replies:
Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 13 February 2010 at 3:51pm
dope

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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 13 February 2010 at 4:05pm
"I can record my favourite shows" advert Tevo hyper
LMAO!!

Not sure about the masturbation material, but everything else was hot


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Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 13 February 2010 at 4:09pm
Originally posted by Cuba Cuba wrote:

Not sure about the masturbation material, but everything else was hot

Lol thought you'd have got by now that it's meant to be a little weird haha


Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 13 February 2010 at 6:31pm
Again, brilliant... some bits more than others, but generally outstanding... Apple hater Mac invader, De Niro in Casino, and a perfect closer... magnificent

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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .


Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 13 February 2010 at 7:01pm
Thanks a lot O!


Posted By: Alcatraz
Date Posted: 13 February 2010 at 8:08pm
nice drop cal...shit was on point


Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:53am
Twas ok

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Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 14 February 2010 at 10:05am
Originally posted by -Orion- -Orion- wrote:

Again, brilliant... some bits more than others, but generally outstanding... Apple hater Mac invader, De Niro in Casino, and a perfect closer... magnificent


well i be damned, positive feed from you??? oh shit, maybe god really did split the red sea for moses

Cal, when the type that would hate on a baby taking its first steps like "so what , i walk everyday' calls your shit magnificent u know u dropped heat

the piece had mad quotables, even the chain line, lol Clap


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+Sick-Witted+


Posted By: Eyez
Date Posted: 14 February 2010 at 3:29pm
hot throughout
not sure about that late night thing hah..
finisher was dope.!


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golden#.


Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 14 February 2010 at 7:09pm
Chain, just get off his dick already. There's no need for that shit here. You might think O's an asshole but people like you just make it worse, getting him started with no provocation.

Cal, this was the shit.


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Insert something rappy here


Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 14 February 2010 at 7:54pm
calm down, i was giving him props Smile

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+Sick-Witted+


Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 17 February 2010 at 7:18pm
Dope the whole way through... The closer was the icing on the cake.


Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 18 February 2010 at 12:23am
Till smashin' robber, someone being killed tragic stopper
On the fence Reasonable Doubt and Illmatic copper
The still static shocker, pill addict popper
The "Never should've redone an ill classic" dropper!
 
Hahaa, that shit was pretty ill man. I was pretty much laughing the whole time through this verse. Good job!


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The original comeback kid


Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 18 February 2010 at 12:38am
The start of the piece left me thinkin' WTF..
 
Then it went all dope on me afterwards Smile 
 
Consistent piece, very sick Calizzle..


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