Starvin Artist ft. KayB
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=19169
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:27am
Topic: Starvin Artist ft. KayB
Posted By: Stalin
Subject: Starvin Artist ft. KayB
Date Posted: 20 February 2010 at 10:59pm
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You ever met a starvin artist? You ever met a starvin artist?
so far its hardest just to keep the bills paid spit these in real ways but payment on the heat is still late please conceal hate and give us a chance to overcome the odds we cant keep our kids fed in the winter wit only summer jobs I got a passion for spittin, I'm designed to be a rapper man devisin a master plan, So I dont see my guys bein a back up band layin off workers, What are we prayin for? Ask for some sunshine but everyday it pours Some cats spit wack shit, and they made it to gold I aint takin that road cuz I aint gonna trade in my soul Any life brings struggles and plenty fights I'm stressed here so I've shed tears many nights when I die I wanna be a figure my son'll be proud of How does a soul survive in this cold world without love The rap games full of killers though and my hearts the target Tryin to be a stars the hardest when your stuck as a Starvin Artist You ever met a starvin artist? This how id class it, struggles a more suitable word Wearing a vest in the hood, wantin' a suit in the 'burbs Using my phone as a mic, blue toothing recordings Desperate to prove that im dope, this a suitable warning We'd shoot in the mornings, an' robs shit in the night Never saw peoples pain, jus a platinum disk was in sight Selling all i could to earn to money for studio time Knowing deep down without success im losin' my mind Droppin' random disses abusin who shines Ignoring others advice, fuck em the conclusion was mine Criticising my style yet not realising the truth You come from my world, my actions a' coinciding with you Ima keep strugglin' till my son has a room So keep smilin' i dont give a fuck if it's funny to you Cause im time best believe ima be carving past this And in a few months time...you won't see a starving artist |
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 20 February 2010 at 11:04pm
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About damn time haha...nice verse's
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Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 21 February 2010 at 3:22am
I like it. Well written and stay focused on topic all the way thru. Nothing seemed forced and all thoughts connected. Everybody on the site has to feel this. I think we're all starvin artist or we wouldnt be up here lol.... So the old mods got some lyrics lol that's whats up... be easy ------------- U already know... |
Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 21 February 2010 at 3:41am
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Awesome shit. I'm sorry I haven't been able to finish writing to this. I did 16 bars but I figured it wouldn't be enough to I was waiting to see if something else popped in my mind.
I like the concept and the execution. I hope you don't mind me posting my verse someday. ------------- Insert something rappy here |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 21 February 2010 at 7:01am
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No prob J.. I sent a pm but u never answered so I just figured u were too busy.. would love to see the verse. |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 21 February 2010 at 7:07pm
| I forgot thanks for the feed J & Snooz. More feed please |
Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 22 February 2010 at 6:00am
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First verse was the dopest. Second was cool Third kinda fell off for me in terms of rhymes and flow... But you stuck to the topic very well, and you never trailed off. It's very consistent and on point and that's something to be proud of. The topic is cool, lyrically it reminds me of some living legends stuff. Keep on collaborating, you guys do well together. PEEACE
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 22 February 2010 at 9:27pm
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^ I actaully read through my verse and i found LOADS of faults with flow ect, i hadnt read it since sending it to stalin like 2 months ago lol Props on the feeed ------------- |
Posted By: Sick-Witted
Date Posted: 23 February 2010 at 11:01pm
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the first two were the tightest, but all three verses were dope..and worked well as a whole... peace ------------- Sick-Witted->means I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
Posted By: Alcatraz
Date Posted: 24 February 2010 at 12:47am
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agree wit sick the first two were the best but overall all 3 were gud. |
Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 25 February 2010 at 11:10pm
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please conceal hate and give us a chance to overcome the odds we cant keep our kids fed in the winter wit only summer jobs that line really stood out to me ------------- |
Posted By: Matt The Ripper
Date Posted: 27 February 2010 at 8:13pm
| Some of the best writing i've seen in awhile... keep up |
Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 27 February 2010 at 8:37pm
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Enjoyable read, I like tha way it was structured. With tha feelin' of copin'. Well done -------------  |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 27 February 2010 at 11:18pm
Thanks man, i was kinda annoyed stalin let the side down though but its cool my uber dopeness kept his up  ------------- |
Matt The Ripper wrote:Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 27 February 2010 at 11:47pm
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lol funny guy..
sit down before I smack that mic out your avatars hand
 thanks for the feed everyone.. any more is appreciated.
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Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 01 March 2010 at 1:34am
| I like the concept. Very good collab, good choice of pickin' Kay to collab with... Shit complimented each other. I felt Stalin's first verse was better than his 2nd... Just some slicker ideas to me, A couple quoteables in each, like the preacher line, and the "around me" rhyme all the way to the "laundry" rhyme just flowed effortlessly... The second verses standouts were the summer jobs and "everyday it pours" lines... and Kay did his usually good writing on a given topic... You could see the different style... Seemed more straightforward and specific as in telling a story while Stalin's seemed more general... Both good angles at it... Peace |