LA Namedroppin' (FEEDBACK)
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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:57am
Topic: LA Namedroppin' (FEEDBACK)
Posted By: $n00z
Subject: LA Namedroppin' (FEEDBACK)
Date Posted: 19 April 2010 at 6:05am
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Not dissin anybody just sittin here at work bored so I decided to get creative an use some of the LA members names to make a verse. If aint didnt get you in there no disrespect it was just easier to make rhymes using certain names as opposed to others. Lemme know what yall think
Don't $n00z on a nigga cuz my flows are Fatal
More bars than Alcatraz that are priceless upon appraisal King of this like TI or Jehu, these dudes get beat to... A 'pulp', and that aint 'fiction'. I'm 2smooth for weak crews As I-Kontinue to leave em hanGing like black bodies in Mississippi Hot lyrics I Chain together, talented like Mr. Ripley So oKay B a bitch an Im lettin a Tec go Stressed hoes better not test, flows Muy Perfecto Senior to a Junior, stoppin ya shine like Shade Catchin Madeye's from niggaz cuz I'm XXplosive on page Ya girl Spellbound, because I'm DressedToKill thick bitches Youz a Turtle, but ya boy QuickWit being Sick-Witted (with it) Used to be a Dalinquent, rockin Plats in my hair Wanted to be a bigballa but hey the stacks wasnt there I was Brash, ready to smash those who talked a Big Game Rollin on -XTC- is the only way to stop this pain I'm Demonic wit da phonics, ya shits so appalling Real killaz stick together, like the pact wit Hitler n Stalin Take over like Castro in Cuba, lyrics stay hot like Aruba Or Bermuda, yours like how Icez(Ice Is), even mite be cooler Keep a new fitted on my head like I'm DaMadHatter Attention private, dont step to Sergent less u get ya Stats up I'm Lucky D(dope) aint get me locked, like cock in virgins hymen The ghost of sparta loves a fight, uppercut that ass to Orion Keep a Bigg sack of weed and you know it StankDogg Call em 'NepentheZ', these killa 'trees' I blaze yall U'd agree. Jus smoke a J and nigga dont Sass me Lyrical leader like Calibra and my Punchas are Nasty Its ProFound how pussy rappers wanna try me Throw MCs in the woods after sending Poison thru they IV But let me rapdisup , before I catch me a body An fuck a 16 i just dropped 32 like Scotty be easy
hope yall enjoyed ------------- U already know... |
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Posted By: Matt The Ripper
Date Posted: 19 April 2010 at 8:23am
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This was better than your battle verses i've seen. =P Nice work. Keep up! |
Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 19 April 2010 at 10:29am
But sickness. Nice concept. Didn't seem too forced. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow"> 
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Posted By: J Sass
Date Posted: 19 April 2010 at 11:01am
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this shyt was Hot....i think you should do it again......
but use everybody battle records or sum shyt...or use everybody open mics
i dont know but this shyt was killin Shyt.....im ratin this a fuckin 10....it was entertaining tha whole way through....good shyt
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Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 19 April 2010 at 1:10pm
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Thanx ya'll.... and Sass thats a good idea (the open mic idea). Imma have to do some thinkin on that on though since its more words to fit in there lol ------------- U already know... |
Posted By: rapdisup
Date Posted: 19 April 2010 at 2:11pm
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Catching Madeyes line was prob the best one sum others worked well over all a nice piece a while ago me an matt (on seperate occasions) both did similar pieces think mine was LAs open mic players(cant be sre tho) but anywayz this was coolio ya may wanna check what we did back then,Matts was better however i jus started on tha site when we did that haha nice piece 1 ------------- The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'! It aint over till I Rapdisup |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 19 April 2010 at 7:51pm
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Really nice and straightforward idea... no idea why I never thought of this before Good job... executed well enough ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 20 April 2010 at 12:40am
| Ha... I liked it. Content was slick, and the idea was great... |
Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 20 April 2010 at 12:42am
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Very nice. You fucked up by not making Tec red though lol
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Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 20 April 2010 at 3:26am
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lol thanx yall. oh i didnt een know we had somebody named tec here. just fixed that one ------------- U already know... |
Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 20 April 2010 at 8:05am
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sick... youre really good i did this once with like twice as many heads...dissing em all thoo. big ups
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Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 26 April 2010 at 5:47am
| See now this is a "Snooz Drop"....ha ha....it was tight IMO!! |
Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 27 April 2010 at 2:00am
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I like this. Good job. ------------- Insert something rappy here |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 27 April 2010 at 2:51am
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this was sick.. something really new... finally a worth full of reading.. good job guy
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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 27 April 2010 at 9:16am
Yea, nice work. Very clever 
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Posted By: Sick-Witted
Date Posted: 27 April 2010 at 8:40pm
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good shit...go head and try the Open Mic thing...I did one a while back when I Got Bored ------------- Sick-Witted->means I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 05 May 2010 at 7:41pm
| solid drop, worked nicely.. keep droppin |
Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 05 May 2010 at 8:55pm
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Very enjoyable...worked well together -------------  |