Wordsmith (WACK RAPPER FUNERAL) feed
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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=19705
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:00am
Topic: Wordsmith (WACK RAPPER FUNERAL) feed
Posted By: $n00z
Subject: Wordsmith (WACK RAPPER FUNERAL) feed
Date Posted: 10 June 2010 at 10:48am
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jus showin niggaz i can get lyrical lol
Imma wordsmith, use hot vocals to forge on point lyrics
That get u high n raise spirits when u get near it an hear it Peers is captivated how I rap n say shit But if my ass does make it, doubt i'll get congratulated Cause niggaz always have to hate shit Try to let em hear somethin, they too busy showin u crap that they did But thats ok bitch, you cats get slain quick Yall should quit writin, recording an anything rap pertains with Im sick of hearin about ya broads an ya car doe(door) Its funny pussies always got the most balls an bravado FUCK YALL is my motto, Im callin the shots hoe So dont stall if we brawl or you'll fall like a pothole... ..was under ya feet. MCs dont want it wit me I'll kill em all een if u come wit hundreds of fleets... ..of weak paper thin rappers for me to punch holes thru I steer clear of queers but bitch, fear controls you Here! Come show Snooz what makes you think you rap so nice Who ever told ya that had they do-rag wrapped too tite Slap you twice for breathin, livin an being born I gotta cold heart but deez fire lyrics keep it warm Niggaz on stage wit shirts off, PLEASE! keep em on Next thing you know you bitches gon try to let us see ya thong Speakin on those, chickens who be cluckin n fuckin Suckin somethin for nothin then go home touchin n clutchin Yall should be shot on site. Hoes must be the dumbest Or put a pillow over they gut an get ta punchin they stomach But dont leave no bruises, or you doin 72.. ..Hours, Showers wit fags cuz YO bitch was sexin a dude But I guess that Im thru murdering fake mcs Using ya time testin Snooz is just a waste to me eazy ------------- U already know... |
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Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 10 June 2010 at 5:14pm
gully! i fucks with the new niggas, lol ------------- |
$n00z wrote:Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 11 June 2010 at 3:16am
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preciate it chain. you got some tite shit yaself so comin from u thats a big compliment lol ------------- U already know... |
Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 13 June 2010 at 12:21pm
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up ------------- U already know... |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 16 June 2010 at 8:06pm
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Some of it lived up to the title but not all... needs more of a surprise element in the form of something creative/inventive/standout original
------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 03 July 2010 at 4:12am
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Imma wordsmith, use hot vocals to
forge on point lyrics
That get u high n raise spirits when u get near it an hear it Too 80's for me my brotha Peers is captivated how I rap n say shit But if my ass does make it, doubt i'll get congratulated real talk but kinda simple Cause niggaz always have to hate shit Try to let em hear somethin, they too busy showin u crap that they did LOL!! Nice.....this is the kind of bar that needs no dressing up But thats ok bitch, you cats get slain quick Yall should quit writin, recording an anything rap pertains with mm hmm...okay...not spectacular but ok. I suggest you throw in some more complexity and add a bit more aggressive momentum Im sick of hearin about ya broads an ya car doe(door) Its funny pussies always got the most balls an bravado I like this one...wasnt expecting the ending...see that how you should come out the gate my brotha snooz FUCK YALL is my motto, Im callin the shots hoe So dont stall if we brawl or you'll fall like a pothole... ..was under ya feet. MCs dont want it wit me Nice how you sped up the momentum right here. I'll kill em all een if u come wit hundreds of fleets... no....fleets didnt work ..of weak paper thin rappers for me to punch holes thru I steer clear of queers but bitch, fear controls you another straight forward bar that came cool Here! Come show Snooz what makes you think you rap so nice Who ever told ya that had they do-rag wrapped too tite Slap you twice for breathin, livin an being born I gotta cold heart but deez fire lyrics keep it warm Niggaz on stage wit shirts off, PLEASE! keep em on Next thing you know you bitches gon try to let us see ya thong LOL!! I like that last bar Speakin on those, chickens who be cluckin n fuckin Suckin somethin for nothin then go home touchin n clutchin Yall should be shot on site. Hoes must be the dumbest Or put a pillow over they gut an get ta punchin they stomach But dont leave no bruises, or you doin 72.. ..Hours, Showers wit fags cuz YO bitch was sexin a dude But I guess that Im thru murdering fake mcs Using ya time testin Snooz is just a waste to me I noticed alot of refrences that most cats here prolly wont relate to.A bit of southern dialect also.....I think you did pretty well snooz......I see you held back and just jotted some of this....next time you could prolly go ahead and drop a monster like that LA name droppin piece bro. This one here tho......ok....not your best but still an okay read. eazy ------------- |
Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 03 July 2010 at 4:19am
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Oh and I might add.....punches need more power bro.....your strong suit here was the more simplistic bars and the rest was really subpar....far beneath the work i've seen you do in the past.
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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 03 July 2010 at 5:50am
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Decent drop $n00z. I liked this bar the best and it flowed with the rest really well >>>> "FUCK YALL is my motto, I'm callin the shots hoe, so don't stall if we brawl or you'll fall like a pothole Not the usual $n00z drop I've seen but still a nice verse. Good job kid.  |