Rd 1 - Scotty32 & Kayb vs Big Game & j504
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Topic: Rd 1 - Scotty32 & Kayb vs Big Game & j504
Posted By: Stalin
Subject: Rd 1 - Scotty32 & Kayb vs Big Game & j504
Date Posted: 28 August 2010 at 9:39pm
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12 lines each due in 5 days from this post by PM to me. Do not post in here. first to 3 or whoever is winning by 5 days wins. Any explained vote counts No shows will not be tolerated. |
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Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 2:07pm
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Scotty
Double Impact like I gave ya two ta the chest
First hits the tourny, 2nds the ban puttin ya to rest Without Kos, Js a lonely puppy lackin his master So hes quick to follow Game like his local Paster How does it feel to be the sites most hated? even more embarresin when its all self generated Yeah im hatin on Big Game, aint no denyin cose any vote against him is clearly dickridin LAs Largest Crew? Yet members are droppin like flies * What ya gunna do, when no ones left to vote for ya lies But hatin an flamin aside, I hope you guys win I just hope Big Game doesnt try hacking LA again * You need 5 start a crew, they currently have 4, and big games futures hangin by a thread
KayB
Watch me rain down destruction, like ya lived in pakistan...
I'm droppin dope bars that i concern n connect wit'
J droppin waist lines, like 50stone jus' turned anorexic Game aint hittin shit with so called thunderous ruptions ...I guess ya talents like ya page..still http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/crew/default.asp?id=15" rel="nofollow - under construcion ... It's almost comical how ya DESPERATE for attention Any thread regaring anyone, leads ya to question if ya mentioned... 1% of the site think your a cunt, 99% can't stand you Shit, its because of MY partner YOU even has a damn crew! Drawn against MK, told scotty dont worry nothings trouble ...You bitches aint impacting with a single...so fuck a double Ya'll are retarded, and i dont give a fuck who's to blame Cause riding votes against nep is ONLY time u lived up to ya name J504
http://www.kbtoys.com/KB/comingsoon.html" rel="nofollow - Kay-bee Toys with the idea of his team “ http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/double-impact-2010-tag-tourny-sign-ups_topic20063_page9.html%20" rel="nofollow - Winning this Tourney ”
and you can find that shit in the comedy section, next to http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0098627/" rel="nofollow - Weekend at Bernie's " (under W) When Scott asks Kay B’s ass to multi-task, he’s in for a treat cos he likes bagging your potatoes while he’s handlin’ your meat (and that ain’t even a grocery store diss) and this bitch 32? is that his age or his IQ? cos the A.I. from Halo could run this site better than you. Scott, maybe you're just not ready yet to get back into the saddle (Scott’s a Pilgrim) a fucking Search Bot could beat you and you’re just dumb enough to call it out for a battle Fuck, is this even a fair fight? Some might tell ya "hell no".... cos these fuckers couldn't throw punches with directions on their elbows (bonus points if you just tried to see how that punch works) You fail, hoes – Just say “Oh well, bro” as you get impaled by my HTML code
Hell…We ain’t even killin these mods, cos these bitches killin’ themselves, yo.
Big Game
Die-Nasty= Dynasty..Kays crew
Speaker of Wisdom= Scottys sig
STFU= Scotty the fuck up......he has used STFU about 20 times in post in the last month or so
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Kay 'I bet your crew knew you'd 'Die-Nasty'and I'd blast on ya proper
Dude 'they all know you're a bitch! that's why you're name's http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/crew/the-dynasty_12/" rel="nofollow - last on their roster And we all see ya love your father and how much ya plead to convince him Scott 'Kay wants to do like you 'and claim to be a 'Speaker of Wisdom' (HA!) You think you deserve a trophy? Dude! Everybody knew I'd be http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/beat-this-joke-20_topic19811_post215054.html?KW=#215054" rel="nofollow - winning it For that ' you should just drop out now 'and ban 'yourself' for being an idiot! Ya went and signed your initials all over the site 'showing us what's up Now everybody on LA knows you as http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/manc-for-li-leader_topic20147_post219697.html?KW=#219697" rel="nofollow - Scotty the fuck up (STFU) How could we lose y'all? Kays dumb ass wouldn't know a punch if it landed and Scott aint punchin much 'since he's retarded ..... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/yo-where-the-fuck-is-turtle_topic20144_post219709.html?KW=#219709" rel="nofollow - and only one handed Every day leading up to this battle 'these chumps sinking in quick sand That's why Kay's bitch ass stalkin me' http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/let-me-join_topic20150_post219968.html?KW=#219968" rel="nofollow - just praying I do something to get banned Votes please
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Posted By: stuckinthepost
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 2:39pm
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Scotty
There weren't too much in the way of flow to this, other than the end of each line. The punches on game were alright but you'd pretty much mentioned all of them (as had everyone else) in previous war threads. Also, you only gave 1 line to j5, which was a negative to me. Alright at best.
Kay
damn bitch got a Pakistan line too, i gots one of doze! Again you didn't mention j504, he must be feeling left out. The % line was nice, well thought out. It was quite a good verse, but I think the thing here is you've got so much personal and beef against BG that you gave the verse no time to work as a rap as a whole, rather than just flaming on the game.
J504
I liked the verse, won't lie. The Kay-bee shit wass good, kinda easy but still solid Wordplay was top, cultural references, personals, flows, jokes (i did that punch...) Closer was alright but I think the set up was better. Still a good verse though
Big Game
Verse was alright, you've done better since you've come back though. You kept close to the personals, well worked and in contrast to Scotty, you saved them for the actual verse. Closer was alright, but my fave bar was probably the opener, I liked it.
My vote has to go to J504 and Big Game, take it or leave it ------------- you come at the king, you best not miss. |
Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 3:05pm
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Scotty came pretty much how I expected, nice effort but out of practice and lacking anything really hard hitting. Felt like you had some good ammo on him, but just didn't use it effectively. Kay had some decent punches, nothing out of this world but a solid battle verse, under construction line was cool. J504's verse was ok, looked a little rushed to me at times if I'm honest but had some cool concepts and punches along the wa, meat and potatoes line was cool. Game, standard battle verse, good flow, decent punches. I agree that Scotty is a fuck up too lol Overall, battle was ok, thought J504 and Big Game came out swinging more. Vote: J504 & Big Game |
Posted By: rapdisup
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 4:01pm
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first off i think Scotty did aite tbh the lines ere in places a little simple but the ban line an the dickrydin lines were alrite more than i expected tbh lol kays verse was aite also but not wat i expected from kay,the line Cali headed was nice liked that and the Double line was also alright mostly aimed at game i think but was aite J and Game came suprisinly well thought js IQ line was funny game has defo got better too i jus think overall the punches from J a game were harder not a great battle tho guys but enuf to win soooo ima have to agrree with tha votes so far hate too Ko ya but... my vote goes to J48575577 and Big Lame ------------- The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'! It aint over till I Rapdisup |
Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 6:18pm
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Imma do it like- Punches- Flow- Multies- Personals- Keep it simples. Scotty- Punches- 5/10- basic, but i did love the 'self generated' bar, that was dope. Flow- 5/10- again, not like it's wack, but it's just alright, didn't try anything too difficult. Multies- 3/10- few and far between, but i don't think it's your thing, but a bit more complexity in the structure of a verse makes everything sound better. Personals- 5/10- mentioning the ban and the hacking kept it direct at Game which was good, but the only time you mentioned J, you had to mention another member, you seemed to struggle to throw anything at him. Kay B- Punches- 7/10- I really liked your punches in this, you kept them together as a pair, so both got a roasting together in equal amount, 'underconstruction' line was dope. Flow- 4/10- Not a massive fan, it was different, but to me, whilst it obviously had a structure, it was off putting having to anticipate breaks and switches in the flow. Multies- 5/10- Slightly better used than Scotty, but yet again, only at the end of lines really. Personals- 6/10- Again, nothing that particularly made me go 'Owwww!' but atleast you went at both, and the 'only having a crew cos of my partner' line was a nice blow to them, would've knocked some pride. Scott & Kay- 40/80 J504- Punches- 7/10- Your punches were strong and very direct, you went at Kay nicely, good use of research and links. But you made me laugh with your Scotty baiting especially, you didn't hold back. Flow- 7/10- On point for most part, i mean the first couple of bars were perfect to read, just so smooth. It dropped in the middle maybe, but still then it was decent. Very nice. Multies- 6/10- You used multies the better than anyone one else in the battle. The first half of your verse was on point as it gets, however it dropped to a 6 for a sloppier second half. Personals- 5/10- Whilst talking about moderating skills doesn't really scream personal.. You had moments with the 'meat and potatoes' line and the 'battling a bot' line. Big Game- Punches- 5/10- Hit and miss for me, i mean whilst i liked the 'STFU' line which was nice, talking about roster position and Scotty banning himself has been done so many times and they're stretches IMO. Flow- 6/10- It worded well, and whilst it wasn't quite on the level of J's for most of the time, you're improving with this element, and your verse was nice to read in my head. Multies- 5/10- A few examples, at the ends of lines, but multies are multies, and the rest of your setups flowed well without them, so nothing lost. Personals- 5/10- You were direct, which always helps. But the only point of your verse i'd call personal would be the closer, i mean, accusing someone of such a bitch move of stalking you just to ban you is a pretty big 'fuck you'. J & Game- 46/80 MVGT- J504 and Big Game. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow"> 
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Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 6:26pm
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Nice vote Kiki, but that battle was already over :) First to 3, that's 4-0. Damn. They got beat HARD. haha. -------------  I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 6:54pm
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Fuck you Rap haha
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Posted By: rapdisup
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 6:56pm
haha Fuck you very much for knowing my name  ------------- The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'! It aint over till I Rapdisup |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 7:38pm
| Big Game and J504 advance |