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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
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Topic: Lyricist Inc
Posted By: Lucky D
Subject: Lyricist Inc
Date Posted: 19 September 2010 at 9:05pm
Lucky D
You compare us to who..legends with priceless writings
Christ-like precisness enlightings with these rightous titans
Our words of wisdom hightens tha most weakest of systems
Depictin' this mission for most artisans and christians
Blow through your prisms.. my persistants penance
True whos tha menace..troop through and fool tha peasents
Past and present look back with a pastors presences
Crash through heavens uncaged them bastard sentence

Turtle
So we write egyptian hyroglyphics, you wouldent get it like scientific-
But to be specific its prolyphic like humanistic biophysics.. 
in order to be on our level you would need materialistic lyrical fitness.. 
Even then you may scratch the surface, so consider this a miracle witness.. 
We're competitive with concepts that age like historical monuments- 
So this is a last chance event that will benefit your personal documents.. 
Take notes boys, jot em down cause this talent is hard to defeat- 
these boys from Lyricist Inc will leave you deep in the belly of the beast.
 
Matt the Ripper
We philosophical writers droppin gold when our thoughts unfold
You ain't as fresh as us, all you jokes have already gotten old
You better than us? That's impossible, this crew's unstoppable
Don't get in our way, or we'll send ya straight to the hospital
We're fuckin hostile, y'all, I honestly wouldn't get in our way
cause the truth is this is our game, we're just lettin you play
We're reppin L.A., so if ya textin is lame, we lettin ya know
We on another level, ya can reach, but ya ain't gettin us, though

Capture
Fresh to the Inc, Like a Newly written essay
I wordplay, He say, She say, It only matters what We Say..(LI)
Because when we speak, You pay, Pay attention closely
We brag, talk shit, kick ass, Call It "Confidential Boasting"
All your lyrics are irrelevant, Quit LA and secure Retirement
Fuck You If you're Not LI, We Burn Bridges, Fuck Firemen
You could learn from us, I Did, Out of pure Admiration
You Bitches Cant Even Touch The Inc, Consider This Pure Consolidation

Manc
I'll say I'm sorry in advance if my pro writtens offend ya 
but I'm no Lady Gaga & there's no hidden gender
I'm LI yet apparently I sneak like a stealth guy - 
that's why these mouths run just like Neek when he smells pie
but fuck it, it's all gravy & I aint rockin' no boats
just invest in giving my 2 Cents but aint coppin' no votes
it's all good though, cuz LI is the crew to make ya friends doubt
if INC is surging through us like a bunch of crazy pen pals - 
so think ya something maybe some kid may just fight you
and snap ya back the fact is that that kid would be from my crew


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Replies:
Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 19 September 2010 at 9:21pm
Lucky - Nice verse man. Nice rhyme scheme, and the alliteration was cool too. Great vocab, some of it out of no where.

Turtle - opening bar was killer. Rest of the verse not up to it, scratch the surface a bit played, some nice concepts though.

Matt - said the same shit about 3 times. lol. rhyme scheme was nice, a couple nice plays in there, but pretty basic in terms of depth compared to the first two pieces.

Cap - nice verse. Nothing overly complex, but still pretty decent. Nice flow, good multis.

Manc - brilliant.


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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: TURTLE
Date Posted: 19 September 2010 at 9:26pm


Good lookin on checkin this out NEP!!
Thanks. . .

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''STYLEZ''
<ce


Posted By: rapdisup
Date Posted: 19 September 2010 at 9:38pm
ill feed with honesty also....

LD shyt was nice bro ya already knew that seein as i had a verse lol wordplay was insane dope drop man!
matt an turtle both had good flow an rhymes,Ts opener was nice,but matt as nep sed realy,still nice tho
cap ya had nice stuff in there a lil new to the crew hype stuff but still nice man
manc rockin boats was nice the votes bit hit well,as for the closer........ill leave that too ya,asumin i know wat that was tryna mean....jus meh on that note 

overall D brought the heat an rest followed nicely keep talkin' together as a CREW an there shudnt be no problems ya know Wink


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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!

It aint over till I Rapdisup


Posted By: TURTLE
Date Posted: 19 September 2010 at 10:00pm


Thanks Raps!!

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''STYLEZ''
<ce


Posted By: Matt The Ripper
Date Posted: 19 September 2010 at 10:25pm

What it do.



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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth




Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 19 September 2010 at 10:26pm
Thanks Neppo and Raps

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Posted By: ~EviL~
Date Posted: 19 September 2010 at 10:57pm
Real Nice collab, I liked this!
Originally posted by Lucky D Lucky D wrote:

Lucky D
You compare us to who..legends with priceless writings
Christ-like precisness enlightings with these rightous titans
Our words of wisdom hightens tha most weakest of systems
Depictin' this mission for most artisans and christians
Blow through your prisms.. my persistants penance
True whos tha menace..troop through and fool tha peasents
Past and present look back with a pastors presences
Crash through heavens uncaged them bastard sentence
 
This verse was pure fire all of the way through. I really enjoyed this read. Brilliant!

Turtle
So we write egyptian hyroglyphics, you wouldent get it like scientific-
But to be specific its prolyphic like humanistic biophysics.. 
in order to be on our level you would need materialistic lyrical fitness.. 
Even then you may scratch the surface, so consider this a miracle witness.. 
We're competitive with concepts that age like historical monuments- 
So this is a last chance event that will benefit your personal documents.. 
Take notes boys, jot em down cause this talent is hard to defeat- 
these boys from Lyricist Inc will leave you deep in the belly of the beast.
 
This verse was also fire. Nice follow up. The first 3 bars were excellent and very complex. I think maybe you should have emphasized more on the rhyme scheme in the closer. (de-feat and thee beast) But besides that it was straight fire
 
Matt the Ripper
We philosophical writers droppin gold when our thoughts unfold
You ain't as fresh as us, all you jokes have already gotten old
You better than us? That's impossible, this crew's unstoppable
Don't get in our way, or we'll send ya straight to the hospital
We're fuckin hostile, y'all, I honestly wouldn't get in our way
cause the truth is this is our game, we're just lettin you play
We're reppin L.A., so if ya textin is lame, we lettin ya know
We on another level, ya can reach, but ya ain't gettin us, though
 
I wasn't really impressed with this verse. It wasn't garbage, but it was very basic and kinda repetitive.

Capture
Fresh to the Inc, Like a Newly written essay
I wordplay, He say, She say, It only matters what We Say..(LI)
Because when we speak, You pay, Pay attention closely
We brag, talk shit, kick ass, Call It "Confidential Boasting"
All your lyrics are irrelevant, Quit LA and secure Retirement
Fuck You If you're Not LI, We Burn Bridges, Fuck Firemen
You could learn from us, I Did, Out of pure Admiration
You Bitches Cant Even Touch The Inc, Consider This Pure Consolidation
 
Eww, you guys fuck firemen??? ....... Queer

Manc
I'll say I'm sorry in advance if my pro writtens offend ya 
but I'm no Lady Gaga & there's no hidden gender
I'm LI yet apparently I sneak like a stealth guy - 
that's why these mouths run just like Neek when he smells pie
but fuck it, it's all gravy & I aint rockin' no boats
just invest in giving my 2 Cents but aint coppin' no votes
it's all good though, cuz LI is the crew to make ya friends doubt
if INC is surging through us like a bunch of crazy pen pals - 
so think ya something maybe some kid may just fight you
and snap ya back the fact is that that kid would be from my crew
 
Nice closing verse. I enjoyed this read too. I thought you could have left Neek out of the mix in this situation tho. But no hate, the closer was an excellent way to close this collab.
 
Nice crew collab. It was a nice read, It all layed out very well (could have done without the 4th verse) but aye, whatever.
Nice shit tho, I even read it a few times. Good Job LI Thumbs Up


Posted By: TURTLE
Date Posted: 19 September 2010 at 11:20pm


Thanks EviL for checkin it out!!!

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''STYLEZ''
<ce


Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 20 September 2010 at 3:17am
Originally posted by ~EviL~ ~EviL~ wrote:

Eww, you guys fuck firemen??? ....... Queer




lmao that had me rollin.. haha

well I see some improvement in these spits, turtle u doing better than b4... but some of you still need to push a bit.. keep at it


gud luck.. 


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Posted By: TURTLE
Date Posted: 20 September 2010 at 4:26am


Thats wasup, coo. .^^^

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''STYLEZ''
<ce


Posted By: Capture
Date Posted: 20 September 2010 at 7:18am
Originally posted by ~EviL~ ~EviL~ wrote:

Nice crew collab. It was a nice read, It all layed out very well (could have done without the 4th verse) but aye, whatever.
 
Says the pussy who took forever and a day to drop a verse against me. . .


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Lyrically Force Niggaz To Spit It Like Masturbation.....The Next Generation


Posted By: ~EviL~
Date Posted: 20 September 2010 at 12:24pm
Originally posted by Capture Capture wrote:

Says the pussy who took forever and a day to drop a verse against me. . .
Says the pussy who took forever and a day to drop a verse against me. . .
 
Now let's see if you take forever and a day to reply
 


Posted By: J Sass
Date Posted: 21 September 2010 at 6:15pm
all of yal did ya thang.....
 
Glad to see how everybody Stepped they Shyt up...Turtle....im fuckin proud of you my nigga
 
LD, real nice...keep droppin that shyt yall
 
 
NLEI!!!
 
 
Sass


Posted By: TURTLE
Date Posted: 21 September 2010 at 7:11pm


Ya this was a good collab I thought. Thanks for checkin it out!! . .when you gonna come back to LI??

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''STYLEZ''
<ce


Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 22 September 2010 at 6:48pm
Originally posted by Lucky D Lucky D wrote:

Lucky D
You compare us to who..legends with priceless writings
Christ-like precisness enlightings with these rightous titans
Our words of wisdom hightens tha most weakest of systems
Depictin' this mission for most artisans and christians
Blow through your prisms.. my persistants penance
True whos tha menace..troop through and fool tha peasents
Past and present look back with a pastors presences
Crash through heavens uncaged them bastard sentence

Turtle
So we write egyptian hyroglyphics, you wouldent get it like scientific-
But to be specific its prolyphic like humanistic biophysics.. 
in order to be on our level you would need materialistic lyrical fitness.. 
Even then you may scratch the surface, so consider this a miracle witness.. 
We're competitive with concepts that age like historical monuments- 
So this is a last chance event that will benefit your personal documents.. 
Take notes boys, jot em down cause this talent is hard to defeat- 
these boys from Lyricist Inc will leave you deep in the belly of the beast.
 
Matt the Ripper
We philosophical writers droppin gold when our thoughts unfold
You ain't as fresh as us, all you jokes have already gotten old
You better than us? That's impossible, this crew's unstoppable
Don't get in our way, or we'll send ya straight to the hospital
We're fuckin hostile, y'all, I honestly wouldn't get in our way
cause the truth is this is our game, we're just lettin you play
We're reppin L.A., so if ya textin is lame, we lettin ya know
We on another level, ya can reach, but ya ain't gettin us, though

Capture
Fresh to the Inc, Like a Newly written essay
I wordplay, He say, She say, It only matters what We Say..(LI)
Because when we speak, You pay, Pay attention closely
We brag, talk shit, kick ass, Call It "Confidential Boasting"
All your lyrics are irrelevant, Quit LA and secure Retirement
Fuck You If you're Not LI, We Burn Bridges, Fuck Firemen
You could learn from us, I Did, Out of pure Admiration
You Bitches Cant Even Touch The Inc, Consider This Pure Consolidation

Manc
I'll say I'm sorry in advance if my pro writtens offend ya 
but I'm no Lady Gaga & there's no hidden gender
I'm LI yet apparently I sneak like a stealth guy - 
that's why these mouths run just like Neek when he smells pie
but fuck it, it's all gravy & I aint rockin' no boats
just invest in giving my 2 Cents but aint coppin' no votes
it's all good though, cuz LI is the crew to make ya friends doubt
if INC is surging through us like a bunch of crazy pen pals - 
so think ya something maybe some kid may just fight you
and snap ya back the fact is that that kid would be from my crew
 
 
 
 
Good shit by everybody Clap
 
 
L.I. is one hell of a crew now, seriously impressed by the way this turned out and how everybody flowed together. I think Lucky tore shit up! That's some of the best I've see from you, boss!
 
Keep at it, looking forward to collabin' with all of you.


Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 23 September 2010 at 5:20pm
great collab, lucky and manc bodied it 

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+Sick-Witted+


Posted By: Capture
Date Posted: 26 October 2010 at 4:46pm
Epic

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Lyrically Force Niggaz To Spit It Like Masturbation.....The Next Generation



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