- Resting Gardens -
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:15am
Topic: - Resting Gardens -
Posted By: J504
Subject: - Resting Gardens -
Date Posted: 01 December 2010 at 2:50pm
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Welcome to
Don’t worry about your wife, I promise to take Great care of her and make her look pretty For her memorial service, just outside the city As soon as you leave, I rip her clothes off And turn on a heat lamp to make her skin soft Dress her in new linens and pretend we’re out swimming A day at the beach is just the beginning Roll her over, puttin lotion on her back and her shoulders “My dear you seem tense!” is what I so casually told her She said nothing back, “I HATE WHEN YOU DO THIS! YOU GIVE ME THE COLD SHOULDER LIKE YOU’RE SOME KIND OF RUDE BITCH!” Pull out my knife and show her the weapon, If she doesn’t speak to me soon, she’s gonna regret it! “I TOOK YOU TO THE BEACH AND LOOK HOW YOU DO ME, I JUST WANT SOME RESPECT, QUICK! SOMEBODY SUE ME!” The tears start to race, as I pleaded my case She sat there unmoved….not a tear on her face “SO YOU THINK I’M NOT MAN ENOUGH, THINK I WON’T STAB YOU? WHEN I GET DONE, I PROMISE NO ONE WILL HAVE YOU!” I forgot I still held the knife so tight in my hand… It just happened from passion, my slashing never was planned I tell you this crudely but know it’s my duty to truly confess But is it so wrong to express that there’s such beauty in death? Or is it just the heat lamps so Floridian Sunny That makes coagulated blood look like obsidian honey? That’s all I have to say, so Detective, please feel free to lock me away If loving someone too much is a crime than I guess I must pay Detective? Did you hear what I said? I loved her so deeply, I never wanted her dead.. “SAY SOMETHING! DON’T JUST SIT THERE AND STARE YOU THINK I DIDN’T LOVE HER? THINK I DIDN’T CARE??? MY LOVE FOR HER WAS PURE, WHO ARE YOU TO JUDGE IT? I SEE THAT LOOK ON YOUR FACE, I CAN SEE YOU’RE DISGUSTED IF THAT’S HOW YOU FEEL, WHY DON’T YOU JUST SAY IT??” Pull out my knife, just so he’ll know I’m not playing… |
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Posted By: hanGing
Date Posted: 01 December 2010 at 4:22pm
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You remind me of me... -------------  |
Posted By: TURTLE
Date Posted: 01 December 2010 at 11:11pm
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Nice lil topical J5!! My fav line. . . v v v v v v Welcome to Resting Gardens, My name is Jake Don’t worry about your wife, I promise to take Great care of her and make her look pretty For her memorial service, just outside the city Nice way to start your verse and I liked how you ran all off the first part together!! The rest was good too, conveyed the story very well to me as the reader. I could see this umfolding as I read to the end. Good imagery ma man!!! -------------  <ce
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Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 2:36pm
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'Preciate the feeds on this one! |
Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 6:28pm
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I tell you this crudely but know it’s my duty to truly confess But is it so wrong to express that there’s such beauty in death? that shit was sick, clap for 'm j5 for mc of the month...awwwready ------------- |
