Manc Vs Twiz
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:27am
Topic: Manc Vs Twiz
Posted By: Manc
Subject: Manc Vs Twiz
Date Posted: 13 April 2011 at 10:25pm
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16 lines Any explained votes count 3 straight votes KO - first to 5 otherwise Flipping/feeding allowed Due no longer than a week from today Drop first & I'll follow shortly afterwards Good luck |
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Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 15 April 2011 at 4:42pm
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Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 19 April 2011 at 4:31pm
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Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 19 April 2011 at 4:49pm
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Right .....first battle and all..... Opening
Interestingly enough "MANC TO THE UNION" rearranged is " a innocent mouth"
......time to spit some childish shit on this kid .....take him back to school...
Cease~and~desist, this bitch is the reason that treason~exists,
Your like a thalidomide baby, "no arms", thats the reason~he's~pissed, Twiz'll finish with this "pussy" quick, like teenage premature ejaculation, No exaggeration, Ill smash this patient, lyrically bash his fucking face in, This dude couldnt "cum" slick with his whole dick covered in lube, I heard the best thing "coming out" of Manny was the M602! I run "circles" around this kid just to prove that you got no "girth", Your whole style is "ass Backwards" like you were a "breech birth", This "scally" must be blazed~up, too much praise got you raised~up, I thought Man City and Man United was your two favourite gay~clubs! You can't diminish my winning pattern, I demolish and flatten, Your "punches" are way stretched like that fat midget Ricky Hatton, The more I hear this wack "Lyricist stink", the faster I get irate, You wanna rap like "Shameless", but you sound more like "Chatsworth Estate", Ya forgettable rhymes come up "short" cos I tripped~over~this~nipper, If I wanted to "hear your lip" I would have flipped~open ~my~zipper. Ricky Hatton is a boxer from Manchester
M602 is the main road out of Manchester (apparently
Shameless is an East London rapper, Chatsworth Estate is a kind of "chav" estate in the TV show Shameless.
"Scally" is a term for a Northern chav.
dont think I need to explain much more...
Waiting for Manc to reply....!
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Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 19 April 2011 at 6:31pm
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Twinz your biting or recyclin... http://www.rapsearch.com/showthread.php/young_terror_vs_twiz-33765.html?s=36a27085a07fb1f0284d021f6eeb26d8&t=33765" rel="nofollow - http://www.rapsearch.com/showthread.php/young_terror_vs_twiz-33765.html?s=36a27085a07fb1f0284d021f6eeb26d8&t=33765 Ya forgettable rhymes come up "short" cos I tripped~over~this~nipper, If I wanted to "hear your lip" I would have flipped~open ~my~zipper.... Good Bye -------------  |
Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 19 April 2011 at 6:33pm
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Theres more than just that one line also...but that one stuck out to me...nipper....didn't seem right ------------- |
Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 19 April 2011 at 7:17pm
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damn.... Not another one.
Props on spotting that one, Lucky!
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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 19 April 2011 at 7:28pm
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Oh heck SMH I must hold the record for having the most amount of kids who bite lyrics to put against me LOL Terrible way to go out that is |
Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 19 April 2011 at 7:42pm
Can a mod sort this out please cuz I can't get onto my battle with KidKane until this is dealt with - I'm at my limit ya see 
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Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 19 April 2011 at 8:26pm
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Moved to BUR. -------------  I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:31am
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Thats my lyric......I didnt realise I couldnt use lyrics Ive used before.....
I do NOT bite lyrics. If you want I can take out the lyric and rewrite the verse without the line i used before.
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Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:39am
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I ain't a mod...but in tha rules is says NO BITING/RECYCLING...and besides looking at that verse from tha other site...it seems suspicious as well. ------------- |
Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:40am
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Fixed Rules Fixed Rules are rules that you cannot change as the site does not allow this in battles. You are not required to post this in a battle as they're not allowed even if the battle says they are. The Fixed Rules are as follows:
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Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:42am
There was more than one also I think I counted at least 4 lines maybe more ------------- |
twiz wrote:Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:49am
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I didnt read the rules .....sorry!
I can assure you all lines are mine, written by me....
Why were they suspicious?
I sometimes forget which lines I have used before.....i have loads shooting around in my brain...
I can rewrite the verse....minus the lines i have used
which lines have i used before?
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Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:54am
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LA verse Your like a thalidomide baby, "no arms", thats the reason~he's~pissed, Twiz'll finish with this "pussy" quick, like teenage premature ejaculation, No exaggeration, Ill smash this patient, lyrically bash his fucking face in, This dude couldnt "cum" slick with his whole dick covered in lube, I heard the best thing "coming out" of Manny was the M602! I run "circles" around this kid just to prove that you got no "girth", Your whole style is "ass Backwards" like you were a "breech birth", This "scally" must be blazed~up, too much praise got you raised~up, I thought Man City and Man United was your two favourite gay~clubs! You can't diminish my winning pattern, I demolish and flatten, Your "punches" are way stretched like that fat midget Ricky Hatton, The more I hear this wack "Lyricist stink", the faster I get irate, You wanna rap like "Shameless", but you sound more like "Chatsworth Estate", Ya forgettable rhymes come up "short" cos I tripped~over~this~nipper, If I wanted to "hear your lip" I would have flipped~open ~my~zipper. All others that you've biten from....bolded are bitten lines.. Your only Young....Terror so this time I'll accept your schoolboy error, Step to me and you'll "urn" a death "in MY hands" like I'm "Paul Bearer", Nearly all of ya wins are no shows, I Pro flow this wack noob, This dude couldn't "cum" slick with a dick covered in K - Y lube, "Terror" is looking forlorn, aaaah he aint even got a crew to be sworn in, My flows "smokin'", thats why my battles carry a "surgeon generals warning", "Rain" of Terror, hah, my Hurricane of Destruction will show u bad weather-exists, Your 19 years old, kid, u need to have "arms" to be a REAL "terror-wrist" Ya forgettable rhymes come up "short" cos I tripped~over~this~nipper, If I wanted to "hear your lip" I would have flipped~open ~my~zipper http://www.nextgenupdate.com/forums/1574418-post33.html" rel="nofollow - http://www.nextgenupdate.com/forums/1574418-post33.html Is it me or does your avatar look liked a ****ed up Mario brother, This dumbass is the reason his mom should have carried a rubber, I made him "an offer he couldnt refuse" so now he sleeps with the "fishes", "Codfather", I rip this bitch a new one, vicious, like a chick with big titties, Fake ass gangsta, true, he couldnt even hang with his local crew He says the Blunt is Lit, yet he has no clue how to smoke a fool, It feels like Im trying to climb up the side of a mountain in a sled, So much shit to write down, profound, that my pencils out of lead, Ya'll bitches are trying to "dig" up dirt on me but all you get is "dusty", There must~be liquid in ya rhymes because yours are straight "rusty", I run "circles" around this kid just to prove that you got no "girth" Your whole style is "ass Backwards" like you were a "breech birth" My clique are wise, Its quick~to~see this victory was prophecised I rip "skin" from "bone" like I got The Codfather circumsized, Breaking ya wrist, cock the gat back ready to squeeze hammers send unwanted hits to ya "mail address" and i aint talkin' "spammers You aint got no loyal endz, the streets will deny you proper turf Ya style is "ugly", like ya avy, you look like the Hispanic Papa Smurf! http://www.rapsearch.com/showthread.php/grizzle_vs_twiz-33868p2.html" rel="nofollow - http://www.rapsearch.com/showthread.php/grizzle_vs_twiz-33868p2.html This'll get that hair on ya neck bristled, standing up sharp like a thistle, My Delivery whistles like Scud missiles, ripping "skin from bone" leaving "Grizzle", I run "circles" around this kid just to prove that you got no "girth" Your whole style is "ass Backwards" like you were a "breech birth" Your "worry free days" are over, got ya nervous on the outcome of this, I Use my mic lead as a catheter because this emcee is "taking the piss" Breaking ya wrist, cock the gat back ready to squeeze hammers send unwanted hits to ya "mail address" and i aint talkin' "spammers" I get more "props" than Rugby Union, you get more "flops" than Mariah, This rap battle will never be over, Twiz does not do cease fires. You aint got no loyal endz, the streets will deny you proper turf Ya style is "ugly", like ya avy, you look like the black Papa Smurf! ----Shall I find more..or do you always recycle lines in your battles? ------------- |
Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:56am
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Thats 5 lines in your verse...that I can find in like 5 minutes. I'm sure if I look harder I might find more. But 5 lines outta 16...thats over a quarter of your verse.. ------------- |
Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:01am
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The lines cant be bitten if they are written by me....
I may have used the lines before but some of them battles are like 5-6 years old....how the hell am i gonna remember every line that i have written?
Do you?
I have said what i needed to say which is I will remove the lines that you have found to be recycled and I will rewrite the verse minus the lines above.
Can you move this back with the lines taken out please?
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Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:04am
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Go ahead......try and find more! you wont....
Your like a dog with a bone aint ya!
I wrote that shit years ago....you cant tell me that no one on here hasnt at some point dropped a lyric that they may have used at some other time and place. I have aplolgised and offered to rectify it. Get off my back!
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Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:09am
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Alright than whats tha name of tha user at http://www.nextgenupdate.com/forums/1574418-post33.html" rel="nofollow - http://www.nextgenupdate.com/forums/1574418-post33.html ... if its you than you should know ------------- |
Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:18am
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Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 3:44am
luck what will that prove? all he has to do is go look at the username  ------------- U already know... |
Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 10:01am
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If you look underneath the text.....MY sig says my PSN is twizted81.....if you need me to I can change the sig to whatever you want to prove it is me......
I will change it now to " I am Twiz!" for proof.
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Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:12pm
| I have changed my sig now ...... |
Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:55pm
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Regardless you have recycled your battle lines, numerous times might I add, so tha mods will figure it out. This battle prolly won't count, so you'll have to start fresh. ------------- |
Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 2:26pm
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Even if you didn't bite, it's lame enough that you recycled all them shits. I ain't feelin' your argument either, I mean, I may touch on the same concepts or reference something I've said before but not busting shit out that's identical. You had to know that. You guys might well just start over with a fresh battle with a fresh verse (pun intended)
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Posted By: BiggStankDogg
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 3:07pm
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Yeah, you remembered those lines enough to write them down exactly like you did several years ago. Dropping pre-writes is almost as lame as recycling and biting. Either way, you look like a douche. ------------- 
Fear the Bow of the Silent Archer |
Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 3:49pm
I personally think the verse linked from NextGen is bitten too. The dude is English,
Yet spells mum "mom". We never do that. I'll sort this out this evening when I get a chance. For now, consider the battle finished. No wins awarded, no losses awarded. Twiz, we have rules here. Please read them, and adhere to them. < ="utf-8">------------- I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 4:39pm
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Forget all these comments Twiz. I know you're only tryna do your bit for the environment. Perhaps this link may help >>> http://www.recyclenow.com/" rel="nofollow - Recycle now - Recycle Now - where and how to recycle 
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Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 4:41pm
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griffo200uk on Nextgenupdate is me ......my name is Carl Griffiths.....hence the griffo2002uk. I have changed my sig to say Im Twiz to prove it is me.... I call my mom....mom. I think mum sounds too posh. I hardly ever call her mum unless Im talking about her to someone else.I personally have battled for a long time and I have spit so may verses that the shit I have remembered has obviously stayed enbedded in me....so you can hate all you want, but I had no inkling that I had already spit that.....what would be the point in me writing half a verse and then filling the rest of the verse with old lines? I dont find it that hard to write battle lines.....I hold my hands up to an honest mistake but I will abide by the rules from now on and try hard to not recycle anything.
If it is OK with Manc....can I reset the battle and use the lines that I have got and redo the lines i have dropped before?
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Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 4:58pm
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Why don't you just set up another battle with Manc and rewrite tha whole verse. Battles ain't that hard for you to write, right! ------------- |
Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 4:58pm
| Whats the point in wasting lines.....? |
Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 5:02pm
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So.... you want to recycle lines form this battle, in another battle with manc? I don't think so. If manc wants to battle you, you set up a new battle. New content. As far as this is concerned, the battle is finished, with no stats awarded either side. ------------- I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 5:03pm
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LOL!! I didn't see that comming.....so he thinks battling you with fresh lines is a waste.....lmao....now I done heard it all....SMH!
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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 5:07pm
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I checked you out on that other site before I responded to your call - I wanted to know if you were any good. And I werent dissapointed - so I responded to your call out Now - LOL I can't abide biters and recyclers. I battle enuff of them on a Thursday morning when the cunts won't take my bins cuz theyre too full - psssh |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 5:47pm
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Wow @ you lot going ape at a guy for recyling...yeah, you shouldn't recycle your lines but it's way less of an offence than biting. The strangest thing to me is that since the guy recycled Manc has to drop a new verse...surely the judgment here should be either: 1) Manc says it's ok for this battle & let the votes come in, or... 2) The guy rewrites his verse, omitting the lines that were recycled That has to be the best outcome here...a one off recycling is a minor offence, why waste someone elses verse because he broke a minor rule? If he doesn't recycle in the future it's all good! ------------- 
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Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 6:09pm
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Gotta agree with Nep, a fresh start seems warranted.
If I was Twiz, I wouldn't wanna use any lines from this battle anyway due to what they are linked with. It also shows "a copy & paste" type of approach as opposed to an actual flow. The verse seemed off in that respect from the jump.
Nobody's trying to ban the guy or flame him here , but he deserves to at the very least have his balls busted a bit for this. As BSD pointed out earlier, it's a douche move.
But yeah, don't do it anymore...drop a new verse and people will move on.
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Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 6:21pm
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In this instance, Cuba, it's not a "one off" - Because it's his first battle. A one off wold be if this happened in 20 battles time. But he comes to a site, CLEARLY copies and pastes bars, rather than rewriting them from memory, and if anyone wants to debate that fact, then just compare the 2 verses, and ask yourself, with all the glitter he's put in to his verse, can you really duplicate that to the letter, 8 months on? The fact of the matter is, this battle has become a bit of a shambles. Manc has 3 choices. 1. Battles the guy, Manc keeps his verse, Twiz writes a new verse. 2. Battles the guy, both emcee's write new verses. 3. Lets this thread die, and doesn't battle him again until another call out may or may not be answered in the future. ------------- I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 9:46pm
Finally someone talks some sense!
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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 10:31pm
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Yea let the votes come in - why not Lets see your votes then lads |
Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 10:42pm
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This battle is not open for voting. ------------- I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 20 April 2011 at 10:52pm
Well - it wouldnt be without a verse from me would it  |
Posted By: twiz
Date Posted: 21 April 2011 at 12:53pm
| Do you want me to change the lines? |
Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 21 April 2011 at 8:00pm
| What do you think would be the BEST thing for you to do? |
Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 21 April 2011 at 8:18pm
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Twiz, if a mod says you can't recycle from this battle, then you probably shouldn't recycle from this battle.
Damn, son.
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Posted By: rapdisup
Date Posted: 21 April 2011 at 8:34pm
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Vote- Twiz expo hes being 'Green' suggest the rest of you hevens start recycling too *This was a broadcast brought to you by N-Power* ------------- The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'! It aint over till I Rapdisup |