word drop Wk 6 (spume)
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Topic: word drop Wk 6 (spume)
Posted By: spume corrupt
Subject: word drop Wk 6 (spume)
Date Posted: 04 July 2011 at 10:13pm
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A DOPE THEME........ Burnin down a scalene
shaped cone’a haze an squintin thru da refor
– mist
A pathological dope smoker, that’s been stoned fa days an can’t see fa shit
All a dis Exuberant consumption
straight sends me-ta-physical ascension,
And constant deliberation
bout shit that just isn’t worth the mention,
Wit dem outta body experiences like
me sliding out ma exoskeleton
Mans spaced out like lunar but decides ta just keep King’ L’in .....em
Ta keep it blazin like my man
Marley, who never shot that deputy
Show some respect fa B! (One love)
then drop a 10/10 in here fa equity
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Replies:
Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 07 July 2011 at 10:09am
hahaha  If yad of missed out "cone" from the first line - and "dope" from the second line, the opener would have flowed a lot nicer. It's not worth a mark-down though cuz the wordplay was well worded. Show some respect for B? hmmmmm I give you a 9.5 for this one Spume. Good shit |
Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 07 July 2011 at 10:16am
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Actually - if I can change my score - I'd like to give this a 10 cuz I dint realize it was done in 8 lines when I first read it so yea - its a 10/10 from me |
Posted By: dag
Date Posted: 13 November 2012 at 2:44am
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straight...flow was choppy that metaphysical line was dope 9/10 |