- Career Advancement Options -
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=22150
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:29am
Topic: - Career Advancement Options -
Posted By: J504
Subject: - Career Advancement Options -
Date Posted: 22 November 2011 at 3:56pm
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Yo, some might say this change of pace is makin me soft
but I'm still runnin' with the devil like I'm David Lee Roth Still pissin 'em off and not afraid to snap on the boss cause if I get fired, I'll get ahead by blasting his off Employee of the month? Fuck you tho, I know I got the right stuff! I got them Ed Norton tactics gettin paid like in Fight Club I AM JACK'S SHADY BUSINESS TACTICS cause this whole jobs a racket Shits ass backwards like an elderly lady just robbed a black kid But I can hack it, work 30 years to get a watch or a jacket That shit'll match attractive to tha diapers and my severance packet Gotta laugh at that shit, right? I mean who's says life shouldn't be funny? Trying to juggle it's complexities, hmmm, let's see..."pussy or money?" I need equal amounts or I bounce, it's just a question of balance cause there's more employers out there requestin' my talents! I'm a hot property, so when opportunity drops by to pay me a vist- I sit up in my recliner and yell "WHO THA FUCK IS IT?" |
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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 22 November 2011 at 4:19pm
hahaha at the opener. That was nice  Great play in the next bar. Get ahead/ blasting his off (obtain a head by blasting his head off) It came across simple but impressive and effortless - like, how do you fuck with them plays? lol The lady roobbin a black kid line made me laugh haha - again, clever stuff. The closer and previous bar to that were clever too. Great way to work up to the ending. Good stuff kiddo |
Posted By: J Sass
Date Posted: 22 November 2011 at 8:00pm
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i loved this whole thing...tha flow was hot...i was rappin it in my head Yo, some might say this change of pace is makin me soft but I'm still runnin' with the devil like I'm David Lee Roth Still pissin 'em off and not afraid to snap on the boss cause if I get fired, I'll get ahead by blasting his off whole thing was nice...but that opening was crazy Sass -------------  |
Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 29 November 2011 at 4:40am
| Much respect on the feed, Sass & Manc - good looking out, fam. |