therapeutic word association: Blue
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 5:12am
Topic: therapeutic word association: Blue
Posted By: Steven T. Guidry
Subject: therapeutic word association: Blue
Date Posted: 20 February 2012 at 5:40pm
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my therapist told me to associate concepts with a word in the hopes that my subconscious might detoxify. The first word I thought of was blue. Blue skies, little boy who lost manhood little boy cries, little boy abandoned blue from being choked out suffocating: blue balls, masturbate: pressure waning expensive painting of blue waters gushing blue dress, silky blue panties pulled down thick spic dick quick lick on the slick found she blew Juan and lied. now I am a fool clown my hearts dark, blew a gasket and bound blue....depression, I am Stevens filthy shame blew my chance at happiness, owning all the blame blue curacco drowns my sorrows, I weep in the shower this is shame and pain, and I am deep in its power. ------------- NLIE's new recruit |
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Posted By: Gemos
Date Posted: 20 February 2012 at 10:34pm
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this is cool man, except I think you could be writing a lot better if you got off that juan shit. I understand the dude fucked you over but to get better as a writer you gotta move on. Also dont be droppin the word spic in your rhymes son. ------------- - Grimy Gómez |
Posted By: Steven T. Guidry
Date Posted: 21 February 2012 at 2:32am
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Thanks for the feed man, I am trying, I am just hurt. I dont mean any racism, it just rhymed ya know? I will work on it, no hate. ------------- NLIE's new recruit |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:03am
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looooool u can dump that girl the one with juan. there's alot of fishes in the sea.. you got all the lyrical elements so try to make a rap about different story instead involving a girl and guy.. go down in the club and get some lap dance.. fuck 2 to 4 prostitute cool ya self man.. free ya self.. lol ------------- 
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Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:08pm
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Kill Juan for closure man Then yo might get the girl ov yo dreams back That Tramp! -------------  |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:12pm
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Oh yeah Drop was cool bro Done blue me away ------------- |
Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 22 February 2012 at 5:24am
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lol yea go run over juan and backup and park on him. anywayz, neat idea an cool drop. be ez! ------------- U already know... |