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therapeutic word association: Blue

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Topic: therapeutic word association: Blue
Posted By: Steven T. Guidry
Subject: therapeutic word association: Blue
Date Posted: 20 February 2012 at 5:40pm
my therapist told me to associate concepts with a word in the hopes that my subconscious might detoxify.   The first word I thought of was blue.

Blue skies, little boy who lost manhood
little boy cries, little boy abandoned
blue from being choked out
suffocating:
blue balls, masturbate: pressure waning
expensive painting of blue waters gushing
blue dress, silky blue panties pulled down
thick spic dick quick lick on the slick found
she blew Juan and lied. now  I am a fool clown
my hearts dark, blew a gasket and bound
blue....depression, I am Stevens filthy shame
blew my chance at happiness, owning all the blame
blue curacco drowns my sorrows, I weep in the shower
this is shame and pain, and I am deep in its power.




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Posted By: Gemos
Date Posted: 20 February 2012 at 10:34pm
this is cool man, except I think you could be writing a lot better if you got off that juan shit.  I understand the dude fucked you over but to get better as a writer you gotta move on. Also dont be droppin the word spic in your rhymes son. 

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Posted By: Steven T. Guidry
Date Posted: 21 February 2012 at 2:32am
 Thanks for the feed man, I am trying, I am just hurt.  I dont mean any racism, it just rhymed ya know? I will work on it, no hate.

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Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:03am
looooool u can dump that girl  the one with juan. there's alot of fishes in the sea.. you got all the lyrical elements so try to make a rap about different story instead involving a girl and guy..  go down in the club and get some lap dance.. fuck 2 to 4 prostitute cool ya self man.. free ya self.. lol

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Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:08pm
Kill Juan for closure man
Then yo might get the girl ov yo dreams back
That Tramp!

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Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:12pm
Oh yeah
Drop was cool bro
Done blue me away

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Posted By: $n00z
Date Posted: 22 February 2012 at 5:24am

lol yea go run over juan and backup and park on him. anywayz, neat idea an cool drop. be ez!



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