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Recent Mixtape I Made

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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Mixtapes
Forum Description: A collection of mixtape from members of Lyrical Assault. Feel free to add yours.
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:27am


Topic: Recent Mixtape I Made
Posted By: SKullcraneSun
Subject: Recent Mixtape I Made
Date Posted: 20 March 2013 at 3:48am
Surprisingly got over 100 views and a handful of people downloaded it, pretty proud tbh hope I get money for it lol. But nah this was fun to make of course I make shit all the time never know when I'll have the next best. Anyways check it out if you'd like

http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=449383


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Posted By: Sick-Witted
Date Posted: 20 March 2013 at 5:08am
1st track....the instrumental's too loud, hard to follow and understand the words...
2nd track.....eehhh...cool enough to listen to, i'm too drunk to really get into.....sounded cool tho...lol
3rd track....nice calm n smoothe beat, rhymes seems abstract, but the flow was smooth
4th track, not really sure what the theme was...had a kendrick lamar type vibe to it...
5th track, cool beat, a lil too fast paced for me tho....delivery was cool.....still hard to find the topic,       seemed like a bunch of random lines strung together...
6th track...instrumental was good, but a bit slow paced....the rhymes were ok
7th and final track....beat was slow, but had a deep and thoughtful type vibe to it....
 
Overall, you lay good vocals, but i feel like your rhymes were hard to feel due to the lack of you rhyming on solid concepts......so imo, all you really got to do, is find a topic, and consistently rhyme about it, and maybe incorporate a hook, and you're golden
 


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Sick-Witted->means

I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when

Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin

But testin da realest

Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it

Posted By: Sick-Witted
Date Posted: 20 March 2013 at 5:11am
also, props for posting your mixtape on datpiff.....i get 99% of my mixtapes from that site


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Sick-Witted->means

I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when

Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin

But testin da realest

Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it

Posted By: SKullcraneSun
Date Posted: 20 March 2013 at 9:45am
cool, thanks g I agree for the most part.


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