Guys are cocky, but don't say smack to me,

Divine words, but when sight turns we can't see them,  

I'm stepping on young, throttling the older,  

Ki will smash ranks like Gucci bottling that Soldier, 

Through me, they're now rocking all the colder, 

I do me, writing 'til I get a locked shoulder, 

You'll roll over, any jewelry, they'll be for me, 

 Imprisoned in my vision, that's 20/20 like a JT LP.. 

 

overall good job! keep it up.

Kiki Spirez wrote: I turn a guy with dry humour to a drooler,  Until a stray shot gives you a day off like Ferris Bueller, >>"until" was the wrong word, I think. should've been 'when', right? You need a tutor, cos a future don't suit ya,  Know I root for the dudes that won't merit losers, Guys are cocky, but don't say smack to me,  Lies lead to a Rocky road, i'm talking ASAP, >>lol took awhile to catch "ay ess ay p" Say shit comes free? Jeez, I disagree player,  Some fakes get cake, always sweet on the top layer,  No prayer, so I give you Mormon's freedom,   Divine words, but when sight turns we can't see them,   I'm stepping on young, throttling the older,   Ki will smash ranks like Gucci bottling that Soldier, >>Smoothest bar Through me, they're now rocking all the colder,  I do me, writing 'til I get a locked shoulder,  You'll roll over, any jewelry, they'll be for me,   Imprisoned in my vision, that's 20/20 like a JT LP >> I missed the refrence but this was pretty cool

cool verse... could definitely feel the steez here.. the scheming was short/ chopped almost like an Azaelia Banks feel to it,which probably sounds weird to ya but it was just all very stacatto. the flex/ punchlines were pretty okay, a little played or at least no mind-blowingly fresh fire concepts. good drop. keep keyin.

20/20 is Justin Timberlake's new Album, has that 'Suit and Tie' song on it and that.

 

 

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