"A home for this Garbage Pail Kid"
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:28am
Topic: "A home for this Garbage Pail Kid"
Posted By: Exoduzt
Subject: "A home for this Garbage Pail Kid"
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:11pm
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Fuck who's eva booin' me and thinks my lunacy has faded... You puny fleas are hated...I only rape white women now, in communities that's gated... The duzt has settled L.I's a full house you can read it & weep...I hope it's seepin' in deep... I'm throwin cards like Gambit no more preachin bout keepin the peace... I'm a creep in the streets reakin of trees makin all you bitches weak in tha knees... Who's speakin to me? Every time I spit I start tweekin' for free!... It's not hard to follow that I'm now apart of the darkest demons... and only time http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=24567&title=pi" rel="nofollow - I hang my buds out to dry is during harvest season... not an insult cuz we still psycho's we're 2 sharks to weakling's... but I'm L.I now my heart has deepened...and turned into this hardened creature... That spits shards thru speakers and it's not hard to reach ya with my marksman features... Fuck pussies who think they spit flames, carpet breathers... I didn't mean to start this either I sharpen cleavers but my darts are meaner... The carcus eater. I could eat Nas alive and start fartin' ether!... Fuck wit L.I? I guess you haven't seen how my goons eat?... shit good luck against us space warrior moon priests!... So if you in the room leave. Cus we droppin acid and havin a shroom feast... Dooms day has arrived I'm ready like Rambo... stealthy with cammo and defanitly steady wit ammo!... I'm on your screen for good and there ain't no changing the channel... on point like arrows I'm mike myers mixed with kruger... holdin more weight than yokozuna and lex luger!... I'm duke nuke em with fangs ready to chew thru em holdin 2 bazookas!... but I'm still your average Joe puffin pcp through new hooka's!... -------------  |
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Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:27pm
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Haha! This was just straight insanity. First off, love the layout of the bars and how you worked that. It was getting repetitious with all the people doing segmented short bars so I'm glad you came fresh. Second that moon priests line made me literally laugh out loud. You know we always on the same page with the references, loved the hanging buds out to dry play and Yoko and Lex old school WWF! Last but not least, welcome home. The Garbage Pail kid belongs in a crew with Oscar The Grouch (Kay) lol Proud to have you on tho, real talk. |
Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:45pm
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You came out straight viscous with this one kiser! You ain't nothin to fuck with and that's the truth. Course I'm feeling the hang my buds out to dry bar, every line was just pin point through the entire thing. 'but I'm still your average Joe puffin pcp through new hooka's!...' Yess aha and the mans still trippin' with rhythm. Congrats on LI I'm proud of you dude. ------------- Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
Posted By: Cee-Jay Outlaw
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:12pm
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This was fire throughout Exo... Fuck pussies who think they spit flames, carpet breathers... Absolutely died at that line... flow was on point and the jokes in this were funny all the same Keep up! Keep Dropping! -------------  |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:49pm
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Thanks fella's appreciate all the feed...it's an honor to be a part of L.I ------------- |
Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:53pm
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This whole piece was solid as fuck man, you're just playing with them on this. Some obscure references and mad multi's, you know that's my shit! The duzt has settled L.I's a full house you can read it & weep...I hope it's seepin' in deep... I'm throwin cards like Gambit no more preachin bout keepin the peace. ^That was vicious man. Welcome to LI, you belong here dude. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow"> 
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Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 10:00pm
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That buds out to dry shitt was super clever man Are you with LI now? Cool................Welcome It's not hard to follow that I'm now apart of the darkest demons... and only time http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=24567&title=pi" rel="nofollow - I hang my buds out to dry is during harvest season... -------------  |
Posted By: Jams
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 10:01pm
| #beastmode .... this was different than any piece i've seen here due to the drug reference and real street feel to it.... didnt have as much of that internet rapper feel, open mic's gettin loaded with nice drops right now |
Posted By: Acid
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 10:26pm
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Fuck yes Exo, this was crazy, Jams and J5 are right this was fucking raw it had a real feel to it, not like the typical way an OM would be written nowadays on here. It was crazy throughout with some great lines, most of what I wanted to say has already been said, I cant say much but know that this was absolute insanity, you belong with that group of beasts in LI, you lot are killing it on the OMs today daaamn
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Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 11:32pm
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good looks fellas im loving the feed on this ------------- |
Posted By: Rhetorician
Date Posted: 11 April 2013 at 11:44pm
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good rhyme scheme, vicious in parts some punches and wordplay too, read well ------------- To Call Me Underrated Is An Understatement |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 12 April 2013 at 2:56pm
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Thanks for the feed on this fella's...L.I!!!!! ------------- |
Posted By: BIG GAME
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 12:15pm
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Are you serious with this LI shit? Just last week you and Smooth were starting your own crew and now you are LI? What about your boy Smooth? Cats just crack me up on here. You looking really stupid hollering that LI shit so soon! anyways The stretched bar are way unprofessional looking. There was some good flow here and some nice references but ehhh I just can't look past the LI thing. SMH |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:13pm
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before you open your mouth about shit you dont know about why dont you go ask smooth what happened...you might find what he says quite interesting... what you exhausted everyone with long paragraph shit talking and I'm the only one left? haha... get a life loser...I'm not feeding to your ego...so just stay outta my threads with your multiple personalities and all your internet gangsta shit...your a faggot and you suck at life.... stay outta my shit and I'll stay outta yours...cus I dont play these little dickless games you do starting shit with everyone to get my rocks off... and that album cover? seriously kiddo....eat a sandwich and lift some weights...you puny computer tough guy lol ------------- |
Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:36pm
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Haha first off, Acid your pic and sig are so colorful lol I'm diggin it! ------------- Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:49pm
Second..
This is terrible feed, actually it's borderline trolling. Now, If you truly want to get to the root of the whole crew thing then I'll get personal.. you gave us a bad rep from day 1. Even associating with you as a possible future member rubbed our crew feel the wrong way when you were exposed. I'll also take my credit mind you, my past came back to haunt me and added to the corruption. But let it be known that exo and I are cool, he's my boy on here and he knows that. We will be collabing like always (stay up). We decided to drop the whole crew idea because ultimately everything was just too much for us to handle. Also Ex deserves to be in LI and the homie SHOULD be proud, it's not a secret that them and HG make up the pinnacle of most of the talented writers on here. Stop looking like a hater, man.. it's not flattering. ------------- Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
BIG GAME wrote:Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:57pm
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Classy way to put that smooth...big ups to you my dude... ------------- |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:33pm
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BG YOUR looking real stupid for this.. ------------- |
Posted By: BIG GAME
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:56pm
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no not really, and I aint going to start a big issue about this because that wasn't my intentions. But you still looking awful silly hollering this LI shit so soon. @Smooth, don't you dare claim I tarnished y'als rep. I would have been the greatest addition to y'alls whack ass crew. @Ex if I suck so bad why did you message me to ask me if I would be in your crew in the first place? People usually begging to get in a crew here, you took it upon yourself as crew leader to ask me ... I must not for real suck huh? I know what your problem was with your crew, you lightly let Smooth off for the dirt that came back on him from the past. The dirt that the AOB boys made us aware of. Ask me that's weak personally, because Smooths spose to be your hommie, he was down with you from rip. But you just throw him to the damn side cos you too worried about your punk ass reputation. SMH |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 9:00pm
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nanna nanna boo boo stick ya head in doo doo... ------------- |
Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 9:11pm
Look BG I'm not trying to get in a pissing match about who's the better writer because if you ask me its pretty immature unless provoked. You know why you 'tarnished our rep' (your words) and its not because of your lyrics.. but, since you did provoke the issue.. your obviously the more experience battler, but il run circles around you in a topical. ------------- Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 9:11pm
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you can't get a rise out of me dude...you don't mean shit to me...when did i say you sucked? I think you have some writing ability dude im not denying that...I never did...I just said by the looks of it your puny ass should hit the gym and not the damn keys on the key board ya know? eat something skeletor damn...and I don't give a damn about a rep I just wanna collab and get better as a writer I don't even know who you are...and the sad part is neither do you....get some help homie...your opinion doesnt matter to me now please take all your hating bull shit and stay outta my thread...it doesn't belong here skitzo ------------- |
Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 9:36pm
There was this vvvvvvvvvvv
then there was this vvvvvvvvvv
what is wrong with you Shawn. One minute you're licking manz balls so hard your sand-paper tongue is stripping skin away - next minute, you're bringing up tarnished history tryna make a man look bad. Underneath all your "clever" wormanship tryna cause trouble - your getting inconsistent and showing them true colours. People are starting to see through you. And don't bother replying - its not needed. Anywayz - Ex - fucking hell !! this was absolutely awesome! You're DEFINETLY in the right crew bro lol. Multis were ridiculous - rhyme scheme was so well put together, ..... it was near perfection!! Im really feelin your style. Really really tidy drop. J was right about you |
Posted By: Kosmosis
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:00pm
This is why I dont respect your bi polar self. You cry and act butthurt that I troll yiur thread? Then you flame this one....and its ok? Med up shawn. SHAWN. ------------- Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13. |
Posted By: Kosmosis
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:03pm
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That fart ether line was dope lol good drop exo. Congrats on the crew bro. ------------- Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13. |
Posted By: BIG GAME
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:05pm
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Manc, real quick: I didn't contradict myself at all there. I never said he didn't have skill, I said there crew was whack, and it rruly was, the name mostly. But I still say Smooth is great at topicals. And that's "stripping his skin away"? That is a compliment homo, just like you gave Ex right after you just said that. SMH. Everything you throw at me gets froze. I done showed you who the true emcee is anyways BUM. |
Posted By: Kosmosis
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:11pm
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Mods please close this thread bc shawn is SHAWNING MEDS ------------- Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13. |
Posted By: Acid
Date Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:38pm
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Seriously, come on, why does activity on here have to come in this form?
Edit: haha just saw Smooths comment, thanks dude -------------
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Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 14 April 2013 at 7:11am
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EXO!! Wuddup!....Yeah ...I did one round in the tourney but you know me....I be havin to disappear for long periods sometimes without notice....not that I mean to but The work I do is crazy like that. But I hope to rejoin too. Thanks for feeding my last piece. First off.....Dope shit. This is you all the way. I see you be vicious sometimes but Exoduzt shines when he goes in on these wild escapades full of sick humor and raw lyrics. Right from the start you had me dyin about the gated communities shit. Rotf......The shit was just fire from start to finish. Thats that Exoduzt signature drop. Properz bro ------------- |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 14 April 2013 at 2:04pm
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ahh good looks Que...much appreciated my dude ------------- |
Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 14 April 2013 at 4:56pm
 Super Cold, especially the parts I quoted. PS: you‘re a dragon. So its crazy seeing you rep L.I lol but we all gotta move with the times. congratz. ------------- |
Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 2:45am
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Oh snap! I did read and feed this,.......shit is still fuckin fire and pardon me for forgetting. ------------- |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 3:18am
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haha thanks Que...if ya want check out my newest drop titled "Please believe" ------------- |
Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 3:32am
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Still got much love for this verse bro, proud to have a Garbage Pail Kid in the crew to keep the Gremlin we got company. (shouts to Kay B) |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 3:37am
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thats whats up J...I think me and Kay need to collab on that...I thought he was Oscar the grouch tho lol ------------- |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 7:29am
i AM Oscar the grouch  -------------  |
Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 2:09pm
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This was smooth as fuck dude, seemed a slightly different writing style from usual, can't put my finger on it, but whilst it was clearly one of your pieces, it was even fresher. Keep whatever you've done haha The harvest bar was so fucking dope bro. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow">
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Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 8:50pm
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Yeah you've got a dope style and fresh approach...like how you take it old school with the multis...they're a prominent part of the approach and it works really well. Lot of people try to make that part more subtle but you switch it up and make it prominent without overshadowing. Nice job ------------- 
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Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 25 May 2013 at 12:04am
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Ki and Cuba its much appreciated thanks ------------- |