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**It's GULLY in Woolwich**

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Topic: **It's GULLY in Woolwich**
Posted By: Manc
Subject: **It's GULLY in Woolwich**
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:52pm



“We swear by almighty Allah we will never stop fighting you until you leave us alone. Your people will never be safe. The only reason we have done this is because Muslims are dying by British soldiers every day. We must fight them as they fight us. An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth. I apologise that women had to witness this today but in our lands our women have to see the same. You people will never be safe. Remove your government, they don’t care about you. Do you think David Cameron is going to get caught in the street when we start busting our guns? Do you think your politicians are going to die? No, it’s going to be the average guy like you, and your children. So get rid of them. Tell them to bring our troops back so we, so you can all live in peace.”


Are you serious?.. Say what?.. We'll never be safe?
not with freaks like these weilding machettes and blades
to carve bones, his dark tone still showed him red in the face
as armed response responded slowly - he readily waits

(20 minutes ahead of their pace)

The weather's great, both were sittin' scoping for a victim
vision fixed upon an innocent, approaching his position,
floor it, turbo kicks in, the blokes ferocious with precision
cuz they're hopelessly devoted & the motive is religion
 focused on the mission, they drag him through the street
onlookers look in disbelief at what's presumed as meat
hacking in full view of the screens like 2 computer geeks
as blood oozes and leaks the dudes refuse to cease
each swoop induces screams with every gash created
they slashed his frame, he thrashed in pain until the lad deflated
a "help for heroes" tag defaced quick by this act of hatred
splattered stains on slabs of pavement from the captures plateletts


I have to state the facts incase "the facts" are jaded
Islamists are to blame, this aint ISLAM related
the Jihadists stated
"get ya flashes activated on ya cameras to take pics
we've got no plans to evade pigs - Allah is the greatest!!"






R.I.P Lee Rigby
I know you'll be sadly missed




Replies:
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 7:00pm
Superbly written, this was A1 writing with a mixture of current events. I really liked the opening rhyme scheme, it was flawless! Very well done, dude.

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The original comeback kid


Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 7:00pm
You know this was great, but i can't really feed it fully being the subject it's about...i was sickened watching it on the news


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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 7:10pm
appreciate that Kay n DTK

i knew this lad personally - can't believe its him. he literally lived round the corner. it's devastating.

for those that aint heard about this yet - Lee was 25 and was a serving soldier. he was returning back to his barracks when 2 guys ran him over, got out and proceeded to chop him over and over with meat cleavers. they stabbed him repeatedly, tried to decapitate him, and then as he lay dying, they dragged him into the middle of a busy high street and danced around him chanting god is great. they were asking onlookers to take pictures and film it on there phones. they then waited for the police to arrive and charged the officers shortly before being shot


Posted By: BIG GAME
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 7:32pm
Thanks for putting that into prospective Manc.
Them idiots are foolish!

This piece is rawl bro!
I can sense the connection you have with this event thru your lyrics.
Great Job

Stay up.


Posted By: Vib.Klean
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 7:37pm
This was very deep i respect this,props. Its crazy how you knew the guy. What a small world.

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Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 7:48pm
You knew him? Wow

Shit


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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .


Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 9:35pm
Yea man - didn't even realise when they released his name although my initial thought was that I know a lad with the same name. Doesn't seem real.


Cheers for the feed lads


Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 9:54pm
Like i've told you on Facebook, this is one of the most technically brilliant things i've ever seen you write, and that's saying something. 

So sorry for your loss. 

I'm very much for people of all religions, all walks of life, and all races coming to our shores. It's what makes us the best collection of countries in the World (as far as being accepting, multicultural and 100% behind free speech). So you know i'm not going at 'immigrants' when I say this.. 

FUCK ANYONE TRYING TO TERRORIZE US. Fucking British and proud. We'll stand strong for this great lad. And we'll be better than this despicable pussy scum. 




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Posted By: fuckoff
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 10:05pm
this was sick as. flow/content was rediculous. props




rip too



tho i will say i know plenty of muslims ( and though anyone who actually believes in a religion imo is a either in denial/deluded/crazy ) the few tarnish the rest. 

for me its like even if there had never been islam or religion, these guys were psycho killers, the rest is an excuse.






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Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 10:27pm
Originally posted by fuckoff fuckoff wrote:

for me its like even if there had never been islam or religion, these guys were psycho killers, the rest is an excuse.

Absolutely


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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .


Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 11:08pm
You killed this Manc! Everything you touch is platt bro! Great work. Dammm...I love how you stood unbiased toward those who practice peacfully.


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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 10:03am
Thank for the positive feed lads - much appreciated


Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 7:13pm
Fuuuuuuucccckkkk.

This right here was like whoa. Sick on multiple levels with flow, wording, storytelling and you did it effortlessly. Add in the element that it hits you so close to home that it puts in in that really real zone.

The descriptiveness of the brutality added so much to this and again, trying to make sense of something so senseless.... Yeah, like whoa.

This was kinda like the "In the news" concepts you do, but like 1000% more raw. You got this topic on lock, ain't nobody touching this. Bravo kid.


Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 10:04pm
Mate you told that just how it unfolded.............Hard to believe what the fuck just happened really, you see the picture of that manchester lad on tv and straight away you can tell he's a good kid, what a fucking crime...............You knew him?  Oh shitt it feels like me an my family ad half the nation  know him and miss him too now
Ya know that locations only a 25 minute cycle from me............Shitts getting deep in it
Agree these people wa insane regardless of religion
 
 
 
 
Final thought
Rest in peace Lee


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Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 10:11pm

This right here was dope as fuck.

The flow and the way you were able to really capture the image and put it into word was insane. The vocab with your schemes and milti game was fuckin on point! The way you put the story together it really was solid.
 
There are some crazy mother fuckers out there....
 
But fuckin great read


Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 27 May 2013 at 3:00am
This has been all over the New York newspapers... I've been reading up on this and damn...It really is a sick sick world we live in...

I think you laid this shit down perfectly Manc..

"Are you serious?.. Say what?.. We'll never be safe?
not with freaks like these weilding machettes and blades
to carve bones, his dark tone still showed him red in the face
as armed response responded slowly - he readily waits"---flow was perfect  and you really set it up nicely...

"The weather's great, both were sittin' scoping for a victim
vision fixed upon an innocent, approaching his position,
floor it, turbo kicks in, the blokes ferocious with precision
cuz they're hopelessly devoted & the motive is religion
 focused on the mission, they drag him through the street
onlookers look in disbelief at what's presumed as meat"---you painted such a vivid picture of what actually happened...

"as blood oozes and leaks the dudes refuse to cease
each swoop induces screams with every gash created
they slashed his frame, he thrashed in pain until the lad deflated
a "help for heroes" tag defaced quick by this act of hatred
splattered stains on slabs of pavement ---the flow is flawless and again the imagery is just crazy dude...cheers to you

"I have to state the facts incase "the facts" are jaded
Islamists are to blame, this aint ISLAM related
the Jihadists stated
"get ya flashes activated on ya cameras to take pics
we've got no plans to evade pigs - Allah is the greatest!!"---damn

OMOTH nominee without a doubt...




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Posted By: J Sass
Date Posted: 27 May 2013 at 6:20am
"each swoop induces screams with every gash created
they slashed his frame, he thrashed in pain until the lad deflated
a "help for heroes" tag defaced quick by this act of hatred
splattered stains on slabs of pavement from the captures plateletts" - Manc
them bars was crazy my nigga...flow was goin bro
HG)Sass


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Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 27 May 2013 at 8:34am
Great piece Manc, flow was impeccable. Nice to have something real dope to read when I pop back for the first time in months!

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Posted By: Ellduduronron
Date Posted: 27 May 2013 at 10:16pm
Craziness.... I really like how you put it together. Read really nice an painted a good picture. Sorry to hear about your loss. Its a crazy world now days. Rip


Posted By: Nigma
Date Posted: 27 May 2013 at 10:40pm
Beautifully worded. Id be interested in learning the whole story which catalyzed this verse


Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 28 May 2013 at 5:37pm
‘Bump‘ outta respect.



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Posted By: TeQuiLaSunRiSe
Date Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:58pm
this was brilliant. Nuff said. 

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Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES



Posted By: Acid
Date Posted: 24 June 2013 at 12:41pm
''cuz they're hopelessly devoted & the motive is religion
 focused on the mission, they drag him through the street''

It is religion, but I say they were deluded, what they're doing isn't even nearly devotion.


''I have to state the facts incase "the facts" are jaded
Islamists are to blame, this aint ISLAM related
the Jihadists stated''

YES. Manc, this was an intelligent drop, this almost mirrors my opinion on the subject, which i could go on and on about, because I really looked into this, being Muslim myself. It was a really good perspective to take it from and I couldn't help but appreciate it. Fucking brilliant. The last few bars that were separate really sealed your understanding on the matter, and made the whole drop for me.


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Posted By: The Law
Date Posted: 02 July 2013 at 7:18am
This is dope drop. I really enjoyed and it's definitely one of the best pieces I have read on LA, since I got here. You got your point across well with oustanding flow. The way everything was put together was smooth throughout the whole verse. Really Great Drop. 


Posted By: Et Cetra
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 3:08pm
Cool shit mate

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Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 3:45pm
Classic verse

Ledge Dave


Posted By: Shankley
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 4:45pm
Originally posted by J504 J504 wrote:

Classic verse

Ledge Dave
 
Couldn't have said it any better myself...
Definitely one of the best verses i have read on LA. Period.


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The Amount of Fucks given: Zero


Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 4:50pm
Appreciate the kind words lads. This is one of my favourite writtens, so the good feed means a lot.


Posted By: Titu
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 6:50pm
Definitely, a dope verse. Short but very affective. One of the best verses that I've read here on LA.
Lots of props and respect- you executed this subject with mere perfection. Very raw piece.

This piece made me go and google the whole incident that happened.
First lets talk about islam ( Manc knows my religious beliefs about religions and shit). I have actually studied the main religions including Islam( Quran-several times, and other books) christianity (bible and other books) Hinduism ( ramayan) and Buddhism in depth. And for yall to know, i aint a muslim. I don't follow any religion.
So Islam- it never "encourages" violence and hatred. I can quote several occasions where Islamic history goes beyond the human imagination just to encourage the peace. 

Actual meaning of "Jihad" according to "sahi bukhari"-
Quran used the word "jihad" several times in it.
According to those "several places" context..  It can have different meanings. Here is the list of "context" where it is used... These are the categories which fall in jihad.

Fighting against invaders or fighting for yo country. 
To raise the voice against unjust. 
To raise voice for your own rights. 
To preach the knowledge.(it can be of anything.)
To seek for the knowledge. (again, anything)

Now, what these so called muslims confuse is the first category ie fighting against invaders and fighting for yo own country.
It is clearly mentioned in Quran that this type of jihad can only be performed under the supervision of government and/or ruler of the time.and if someone does, their is a punishment for that.
Its not something like any bitch can stand up and kill someone in the name of God.

I found it very hilarious when some of you call them "extremists". I swear, these are not extremists.  According to the definition of "religious extremism" -- " the one who strictly obeys and practices his religion on the extreme level". You cant call them  "religious extremists" as they practice their own belief, not the religion. If some of you want to categorise them, they fall into fucking animals category. They don't even belong to human beings.
Now how these "animals" are made?
They are made by groups who brainwash them by misinterpreting the holly scripture to make them do what "they" want them to do.  
I wont go deep in what happens in afghanistan as it will just derail me from the topic... But in a nutshell (if soldiers rape yo sisters and kill yo brothers bla bla bla, so????? What do you "animals" do? You capture them and cut  their heads off?? You piss on their dead bodies? So fuck off with that bullshit...
these motherfuckers who,just to justify their acts and for the purpose they use the verses, are the actual reason why everybody suspects you and hates you along with the ones who are just muslims and not the "animals".

I piss on the ugly faces of you molvis and so called Taliban etc who brainwash the dumb fucks by using the name of Allah.
And honestly, i dont give a fuck if you're a muslim,christian or whatever the bullshit and found my post offesive.

peace

 


Posted By: fuckoff
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 6:56pm
fuck religion.

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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 7:28pm
Dayyyyum T lol that was heavy. Appreciate the looks bro.

And Fuck - thanks for the 'feed'?


See the thing is - the Qu'ran has NEVER and will NEVER change. What is in it is what 'god' said - where as the bible has lots of different versions and is basically a dictation of what one man said. NOT his actual words.
As a Muslim - you are meant to interpret what you hear/read. "Extremists" take the words and scriptures to the extreme - hence the name. It's a peaceful religion, if that's how you view it. It's not if you take it LITERALLY - although it IS NOT meant to be taken literally. It's a mine field of interpretations.
Extremist Imans concentrate on preaching about the bad stuff and put their own extremist views forward in a bid to make people believe that is how it is meant to be.

It's like telling someone to 'piss off'. You don't start urinating as you walk away do you? No.
But Muslim extremists take statements from the Qu'ran LITERALLY - those statements are there, but they're not meant to be taken to the extreme.

This could go on forever - but yea. Thanks for checking this out.


Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 7:35pm
agree with fo



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Posted By: Titu
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 7:40pm
Yup, man. I can definitely see what you are trying to say. My point is the same... Its the interoperation which is causing problems. Like...
Quran says "dont offer prayers....." now any motherfucker can get up and scream like "aayyye noo need to offer prayers"
But the acutal verse is " dont offer prayers, if youre drunk". So , personally, i think their should be strict laws about who can and who cant give the education of relegion. Thr is no other way to stop it.


Posted By: fuckoff
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 7:43pm
thought id fed this already tbh manc if not il feed later peas n chicken

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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 8:16pm
Oh yea, ya did lol sorry, it's an oldish one & lost track of who fed


Posted By: Shankley
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 10:51pm
I agree with Manc and T2 the cunts that did this are just using islam and jihad as a mask of such a diabolical act. Using the troubles as a smoke screen to try an justify the unjustifiable. They are simply the lowest form of life not worth the time of day.

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The Amount of Fucks given: Zero


Posted By: fuckoff
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 11:30pm
Originally posted by fuckoff fuckoff wrote:


tho i will say i know plenty of muslims ( and though anyone who actually believes in a religion imo is a either in denial/deluded/crazy ) the few tarnish the rest. 

for me its like even if there had never been islam or religion, these guys were psycho killers, the rest is an excuse.






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Posted By: Freeda5thDawg
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:07am
Religion is usually an excuse...I agree, fuckoff. Without it, evil and insanity would still remain. I remember seeing this on the news, and just read and read as much as I could on it like I always do with these tragedies. They could preach what they wanted to preach but it just meant nothing. RIP to that man, and that is tragic how you personally knew him. The piece itself was wonderful. It was all there and it was all meaningful. Very powerful and a difficult reminder as well. This event was actually brought up recently during a discussion I had with my brother.

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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:17am
Yea man - extremely tragic.

Weird thing is, I didn't know it was Lee until they released his picture, and why I personally love this peice so much is 1. I literally wrote this as the event unfolded on Sky News, so it took around 15 mins to write and I feel like it's one of the best writtens I've ever done - the fact it took such a short time and came off so well just goes to show how natural it felt - and 2. Like I said, I didn't know it was Lee until the pic was released, so I wrote it all with a totally unbiased view on the situation. If I'd of known it was Lee, I honestly don't think I coulda been so descriptive.
I was out of the country for his funeral, but managed to catch it on TV. What a send off!!

After I wrote this, I read over it a few times as I do with most stuff - but since finding out it was Lee, it's hard to read.

The positive feed on this is greatly appreciated lads.


Posted By: Freeda5thDawg
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:44am
I'm sure and the story you told is an interesting one. I imagine this piece itself might have not have turned out the same if you were attempting to write it already knowing the deceased man was the person you were acquainted with. It's just a completely different mindstate you could have been shoved in. But as we all should know, this is beyond just appreciating your greatly written work. Can't imagine what it must feel like. All positive vibes and respect for you and the late Mr. Lee from me, though.


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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 12:03pm
Thanks for the kind words bro. As he went into the army, we seen him less and less over his last few years ere, but still on home visits n stuff. Unforgettable!!


Posted By: Demonic
Date Posted: 09 January 2014 at 9:06pm
fuckoff hit the nail on the head.
Anyway..
Good piece bro, Hard read in all honesty but couldnt have been written better. Crazy...  I'd HOF this .


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