Kiki and DTK Vs. Tre and FO
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Forum Name: Partners in Rhyme
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:02am
Topic: Kiki and DTK Vs. Tre and FO
Posted By: Cee-Jay Outlaw
Subject: Kiki and DTK Vs. Tre and FO
Date Posted: 29 July 2013 at 2:38pm
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8lines/4 bars per battler.. Blind Drops submitted to me. All Fair votes count! First to 5 or 3KO Verses due 1st August Midnight/2nd August 00.00am BST. Good luck!
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Posted By: Cee-Jay Outlaw
Date Posted: 02 August 2013 at 5:11pm
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DTK and Kiki This battles a canoe ride till you die, got you both on death row! I'm Will Smith in Independence Day the way I'm ending U-FO! It's like the Law got rid of his partner cuz I'm dropping this guy! Triz's initials are T n T yet couldn't blow the spot if he tried! He'll drop in demise, his leader tried and left shaking his head.. Fucks so forced with his rhymes you'd think he tried raping the thread! And the closest that Triz came to a title was setting the thread for me! It's like a noob wrote your lines..there's no showings of "Eff-or-T" (Effort) FO- *Sigh* - His mother's coke crimes drift in his mind, So fittin' he finds peace inside by pickin' Tre's deficient of lines, I say it's time I maneuver a stab at this rappin' manure, Laughin' some more- Leader left for Cuba like Assata Shakur, We batter you bores, bitch please, it's too easy to kick these, Cos simply, Tre's biggest PB is letting Point lead his big piece, Kid leave's without reason, watch me bounce them heads, We account for their deletion like our announcement threads.. *Assata Shakur, Black Panter leader, ran to Cuba. PB and these guys have been close, but PB went with Cuba for this straight away. *PB was the best on their D.O.P.E collab. ------------- |
Posted By: Cee-Jay Outlaw
Date Posted: 02 August 2013 at 5:31pm
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Trizzy and FO Fuck Keeks n D! They dying today,.. ya'll cant stop me bitch.. Cuz I’ll have these "two-wish’in"(tuition) for death like L.I. scholarships! Thoughtless pricks! D ducked Jay hom, he aint equipped to kill… cuz the only time he waited for a ‘check-in’, was when he’s splitting the bill!! Both of ya’ll are ahhh, just ok living off crew sig’s, so how’s that feel? With no ‘offensive lines’ proving you aint shit without your backfield! Keeks blowing LI like Bagpipes, so hoe u know I got to be right… but I also “kilt” a Dress today, without a Scotsmen in sight! im downin 'em? an you can call me alcoholic girls, coz ill take the W.. K, D ones a http://s21.postimg.org/gbxqntq8j/loljosh.png" rel="nofollow - rapist potato head, and the http://s16.postimg.org/sd41ontwh/kilolll.png" rel="nofollow - other a gay queen!! im breakin this tame team.. i dont wanna discourage your mate kee but D you need keep growin that freddie mercury tash.. till it covers ya face.. PLEASE nahh, f'real man.. i bet you feel successful now.. is it a lil different?.. coz in real life you went from highschool quarter back.. to fixin fridges (LMAO) I-slam ki, hes scared to upset gOd, but im cookin, so ill make this mug break-fast really im only against dress, cause like your career.. your just an extra (GIVE UP..) EXPOS... http://www.onelittlevoice.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/wkd.jpg" rel="nofollow - WKD ... http://www.conairventilation.com/our-company/" rel="nofollow - Dress's Job - conair mechanical.. i-slam.. Kiki alway agrees with O.. its ramadan atm.. fuckers are fastin.. ..you'll get the rest.. ------------- |
Posted By: Brotha Goose
Date Posted: 02 August 2013 at 9:53pm
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ok....fitst off I gotta say there was some hateful shit dropped on this thread both drops were hot though KiKi/DTK....DTK- the U-FO line was damn clever so was thst TnT bit, also the raping the thread line was priceless. KiKi..........The bit about Assata Shakur came out of nowhere! I was met with surprise then tears of laughter filled my eyes. I liked the shot you took at PB And Trizzy's collab, didnt really agree with it, but still funny as hell. Trizzy/FO .......Trizzy those first four lines fam, were hot to the touch bruh! Where did that fire go I didnt see it in the rest of your flow? Although that kilt line was fairly hillarious! FO.......Lines 3-6 untouchable compared to the rest of your drop, you and Trizzy came to play! But you kinda fizzled out too. The whole thread dropped hot im fucking impressed But......if I gotta choose, sadly I do, my vote goes to DTK/KiKi......but I think this one might go to max votes ------------- 
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Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 02 August 2013 at 10:06pm
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Thank you for swiftly getting on the votes Goose. Respect for the verses lads. Some entertaining stuff there.. And FO, that pic was from my last show man, set in the 70's! Might make that shit my picture on here  Real talk, when you have a cig in your mouth, some old school glasses, a sheep skin type coat, and some flares.. You just sit back and go, 'I look sick, I can see why our parents wore this shit!' haha 1-0. Uppin' this. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow"> 
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Posted By: Brotha Goose
Date Posted: 02 August 2013 at 10:19pm
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damn a thank you? No need cousin just doing what im supposed to do! Everyone else seems to drop the ball leaving it stalled if no one starts pushing it again then its all of our fault! -------------
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Posted By: The Law
Date Posted: 02 August 2013 at 10:53pm
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DTK - Dope verse all around. Consistent punches thrown, all connected. I enjoyed every bar, I have no critique at all for you verse. Flow was on point also. Dope shit DTK. Kiki - Solid, consistent verse, I did feel like some of the bars could have used some reworded (closing 2 bars), the first 2 was crack. I liked the assata shakur line and the opener was clever. Overall it flowed well throughout. Definitely a good group of verses from you too.. Top verse - The top two bars was crack.. flowed well nice personals. I thought the last two could use a bit of rewording. The wordplay on the last bar seemed a bit forced to me, although I liked the concept. Bottom verse - First three bars were dope, you also brought some nice personals. I really liked the play on the pictures, the freddie mercury line had be laughing. I felt your last bar was off a bit, the concept was okay but the wording didn't give the bar any justice. I read it over several times and it just wasn't hitting for me at all. MGVT: Kiki & DTK I enjoyed reading both verses. I thought Kiki & DTK's verses together were a little bit more well rounded. Great verse by DTK by the way, punch after punch, and they were all worded smoothly. good luck.
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Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 02 August 2013 at 10:56pm
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Thanks for the detailed vote man. 2-0. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow">
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Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 02 August 2013 at 11:47pm
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Close battle... DTK - I think sometimes you seem a little formulaic, you've got better at minimising it but still shows sometimes...e.g. Spot if he tried / drop in demise...but anyways, I thought your punches were mixed, opener was dope, second was a good punch but slightly corny in the execution, third line I thought was a bit of a dud concept...still landed but more a big jab than a solid blow...closer was ehhhhhh, I actually liked the setup bar but wordplay was ergh. Kiki - honestly I thought you let the side down a bit here which surprises me...for a short verse I felt there was way too much dubious stuff in there, opener was weak for me, jab rather than a punch, next filler line was dope rhythm and rhyming but I didn't like the punch & the way I pronounce that name (and the way I've always heard it pronounced) makes that rhyme disjointed. It's kind of a vague diss in my eyes & it's not like you're dropping with Manc...next punch is ok but I think you've kind of forced the wording "biggest PB" (biggest personal best then equals a big piece?)...nah, and the closer is ok, felt like you were trying to pre empt a shot though as really it was a thread that was deleted not an account, so the play doesn't stand up.... So yeah, overall I thought Keeks did ok without landing anything really solid & DTK brought a couple of hot shots with a couple of weaker ones... Trizzy - I like your aggressive style when it comes to battling, I liked the wordplay and I thought that was a good multi layered diss...really good start. Only thing that didn't make it an absolute wow punch was the "tuition for death" isn't that killer of a concept without the breakdown play, you really need it to have a solid meaning both ways for it to be WOW, that said, it stood up so you got a lot of credit points...cool diss in the filler, I thought the diss wasn't that strong on the punch though...call that a big jab / light punch...again, good aggressiveness in the filler line (crew sigs is a bit ehhh but you survive it because it isn't the main punch) & I liked the punch...thought it was solid, did a good job of turning a generic punch into something relevant to the battle with the filler line, nice, closer I liked...filler got off a good diss to one opponent and the main punch went at other one, which is always good approach...again, I liked this punch but like before its not WOW because the concept isn't up there...but what you did do well was convert that into good punches, basically maximising what you brought....In other words, I thought you were better than Kiki and competitive with DTK, he had the better punches but you had more consistent punches thrown FO - so really it rested on you at this point....honestly, that opener was hard...only thing I didn't like was the "alcoholic girls" setup because it was a bit contrite, but the wordplay was bossing & loved that you followed it up with two personalised shots against them...that was dope. Probably the dopest set of the battle...next punch was funny, I liked how you followed on from the first punch and are addressing them both...another solid hit if simplistic...next one is a pretty solid punch again, assuming its true, pretty much a 'state the facts' punch, it was nice...I like how you're taking the piss rather than being overly lyrical (I.e. name plays and shit)...closer, I think you could've made this a lot doper if I'm honest...the diss itself was dope & it actually played out in the context of the battle really well for you, but the filler line was too busy, too much going on in there & it ended up being a very basic rhyme...you would've been better just going for a solid multi and letting the closer land full force...again, a bit like Trizzy, you get away with it more because its in the filler line but you did sacrifice a bit of force in the punch that you could've otherwise landed... That said, I think FO basically won this battle with his verse...he had the hottest punches of the battle and had the consistency in his verse as well. Trizzy was solid, aggressive if unspectacular. I thought DTK brought some heat but also fizzled and Kiki didn't have enough tenacity... FO had the best verse, Triz/DTK about the same...DTK maybe a little more due to his opener & then Keeks a fair bit behind Trizzy... So for me I thought FO & Trizzy took this one... ------------- 
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Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 03 August 2013 at 1:10am
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2-1 uppin ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: levy420
Date Posted: 03 August 2013 at 3:43am
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DTK and *Kiki* This battles a canoe ride till you die, got you both on death row! I'm Will Smith in Independence Day the way I'm ending U-Fo Solid opener It's like the Law got rid of his partner cuz I'm dropping this guy! Triz's initials are T n T yet couldn't blow the spot if he tried! Dope personal flow was on point He'll drop in demise, his leader tried and left shaking his head.. Fucks so forced with his rhymes you'd think he tried raping the thread! A lil stretched but good execution liked the angle And the closest that Triz came to a title was setting the thread for me! It's like a noob wrote your lines..there's no showings of "Eff-or-T" (Effort) sick closer n possibly the hardest hit off the battle 9/10 *FO- *Sigh* - His mother's coke crimes drift in his mind, So fittin' he finds peace inside by pickin' Tre's deficient of lines, great personal to start off I say it's time I maneuver a stab at this rappin' manure, Laughin' some more- Leader left for Cuba like Assata Shakur, worded good work well good punch We batter you bores, bitch please, it's too easy to kick these, Cos simply, Tre's biggest PB is letting Point lead his big piece, Ur best personal outta the verse loved the flow Kid leave's without reason, watch me bounce them heads, We account for their deletion like our announcement threads.. another strong closer 8/10 All together i thought u both played off eachother great each verse was polished n put together well 17/20 * -------------  |
Posted By: levy420
Date Posted: 03 August 2013 at 3:55am
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Triz Fuck Keeks n D! They dying today,.. ya'll cant stop me bitch.. Cuz I’ll have these "two-wish’in"(tuition) for death like L.I. scholarships! Good concept for a open thought u coulda worded it way better to hit alot harder Thoughtless pricks! D ducked Jay hom, he aint equipped to kill… cuz the only time he waited for a ‘check-in’, was when he’s splitting the bill!! Good person hit alot harder then the opener Both of ya’ll are ahhh, just ok living off crew sig’s, so how’s that feel? With no ‘offensive lines’ proving you aint shit without your backfield! Trying to discredit there worth nice shot Keeks blowing LI like Bagpipes, so hoe u know I got to be right… but I also “kilt” a Dress today, without a Scotsmen in sight! Weak closer in my opinion thought u coulda pulled something better off this was a bit of a stretch 7/10 im downin 'em? an you can call me alcoholic girls, coz ill take the W.. K, Dones a rapist potato head, and the other a gay queen!! im breakin this tame team.. i dont wanna discourage your mate kee but D you need keep growin that freddie mercury tash.. till it covers ya face.. PLEASEnahh, f'real man.. i bet you feel successful now.. is it a lil different?..coz in real life you went from highschool quarter back.. to fixin fridges (LMAO)I-slam ki, hes scared to upset gOd, but im cookin, so ill make this mug break-fastreally im only against dress, cause like your career.. your just an extra (GIVE UP..) ok phones acting up wont let me do the bat for bar breakdown on fo but your verse while better put together then trizz lacked the hard hitting punches ur best line was the refrence to dtks highschool football days i gave u a 8/10 15/20 So my vote went to dtk n kiki ------------- |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 03 August 2013 at 10:23am
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3-1 bump ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Cee-Jay Outlaw
Date Posted: 03 August 2013 at 7:07pm
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3-1.. Upping ------------- |
Posted By: Brotha Goose
Date Posted: 03 August 2013 at 7:11pm
I knew this one was going to bleed the voters broke! This is what its about..... -------------
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Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 04 August 2013 at 10:29am
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3-1. I voted on all the PIR stuff, I can't do anymore, would appreciate anyone's input. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow">
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Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 04 August 2013 at 6:49pm
This needs votes guys! ------------- The original comeback kid |
Kiki Spirez wrote:Posted By: levy420
Date Posted: 04 August 2013 at 7:10pm
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Bumping for votes ------------- |
Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 05 August 2013 at 8:31am
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Posted By: Brotha Goose
Date Posted: 05 August 2013 at 9:27am
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gonna up this again just for GP....besides my pant's are falling down Spume and I need those belts already! lol VOTE UP OR GET OUT! -------------
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Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 3:53pm
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Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 3:55pm
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Cheers Luck. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow">
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Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 4:21pm
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Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 9:52pm
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DTK This battles a canoe ride till you die, got you both on death row! I'm Will Smith in Independence Day the way I'm ending U-FO! This was a good opener, nice nameplay, good job It's like the Law got rid of his partner cuz I'm dropping this guy! Triz's initials are T n T yet couldn't blow the spot if he tried! This one is not to bad either, like the nameplay again He'll drop in demise, his leader tried and left shaking his head.. Fucks so forced with his rhymes you'd think he tried raping the thread! I didn't really like this one, too much. It's just alright And the closest that Triz came to a title was setting the thread for me! It's like a noob wrote your lines..there's no showings of "Eff-or-T" (Effort) Good Closer Kiki FO- *Sigh* - His mother's coke crimes drift in his mind, So fittin' he finds peace inside by pickin' Tre's deficient of lines, Not bad, not great, kinda generic IMO I say it's time I maneuver a stab at this rappin' manure, Laughin' some more- Leader left for Cuba like Assata Shakur, This was decent, like tha finish more than tha set up We batter you bores, bitch please, it's too easy to kick these, Cos simply, Tre's biggest PB is letting Point lead his big piece, Again just decent not really hitting that hard IMO Kid leave's without reason, watch me bounce them heads, We account for their deletion like our announcement threads.. Not that good of a closer. Overall- DTK came really well in this battle, only tha 3 bar didn't really do anything for tha verse. Keeks on tha other hand I was a little disappointed in. It was a nice verse for an OM, but in all honesty I thought that for a short battle verse it was up to your usual. Maybe I didn't get some of it I don't know. Trizzy Tre Fuck Keeks n D! They dying today,.. ya'll cant stop me bitch.. Cuz I’ll have these "two-wish’in"(tuition) for death like L.I. scholarships! Good opener, nice wordplay, and crew diss Thoughtless pricks! D ducked Jay hom, he aint equipped to kill… cuz the only time he waited for a ‘check-in’, was when he’s splitting the bill!! First line was good, but I thought tha follow up lacked Both of ya’ll are ahhh, just ok living off crew sig’s, so how’s that feel? With no ‘offensive lines’ proving you aint shit without your backfield! Decent but not that good Keeks blowing LI like Bagpipes, so hoe u know I got to be right… but I also “kilt” a Dress today, without a Scotsmen in sight! Good closer, that was a nice play about Dress im downin 'em? an you can call me alcoholic girls, coz ill take the W.. K, D ones a rapist potato head, and the other a gay queen!! I don't like gay plays unless there really good, this one wasn't im breakin this tame team.. i dont wanna discourage your mate kee but D you need keep growin that freddie mercury tash.. till it covers ya face.. PLEASE Not bad I guess, no really punch in tha first line and just a jab in tha second nahh, f'real man.. i bet you feel successful now.. is it a lil different?.. coz in real life you went from highschool quarter back.. to fixin fridges (LMAO) I don't see any real attacks here either, fixin' fridges? I-slam ki, hes scared to upset gOd, but im cookin, so ill make this mug break-fast really im only against dress, cause like your career.. your just an extra (GIVE UP..) Not bad closer, although doesn't really rhyme much. But I'll give ya that Overall-- Trizzy you had some nice lines in there, opener was dope, and so was tha closer. Fuck Off your verse lacked. I thought that tha closer was your only good line in the battle. With only 8 lines you should have fire on all of them. Basically it came down to DTK and TT on this one, as Keeks and FO verses were subpar. I thought Dress was a little better IMO, with 3 bars verses Trizzy's 2 bars. It was a close battle that should've been better if Keeks and FO had better verses. DTK Kiki GMV
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Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 10:11pm
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4-1, really appreciate your time and vote Lucky! Uppin for the win or a swing vote ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 10:43pm
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No Problem -------------  |
Posted By: Dougysnuggy
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 11:06pm
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DTK and Kiki: Both of you had very consistent verses. Some nice punches and not much hard landing personals, but the both of you had dope verses. You both came prepared and both of you had some nice concepts. Kiki, you killed it with those first few lines. As I read it over I was like... Damn. So nice verse from the both of you Tre and Fuck, Tre that first bar was a great concept, honestly. But the wording of it was a bit off. It didn't really flow together. Other than that you had a great verse. I havent read fuck's yet, but if it tops yours than you guys may have won this...
Ehhhh. fuck your first bar didn't rreally land that hard to me. It wasn't really aimed towards anyone. the line didn't really connect with the picture tbh. The second bar wasn't really that good either. the 3rd line was a lot better in terms of delivery and a personal. The fourth bar couldve been worded better imo. you just werent that consistent on personals in this one. MVGT DTK AND KIKI |
Posted By: fuckoff
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 11:08pm
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cOoool glad this is over with. much respect D n Ki your both great battlers. hope you lose tho lol -------------  |
Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 07 August 2013 at 12:49am
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Yea good battle fellas.... But I hope dress falls down a flight of stairs and breaks his leg. Keeks ...just off a building. Oh I mean good luck next round Jokes....jooookes! lol good battle tho ------------- |
Posted By: Cee-Jay Outlaw
Date Posted: 07 August 2013 at 6:31am
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5-1 DTK and Ki go through ------------- |