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Mikey Wrath Vs AshleyKaos

Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Battle Ground
Forum Name: Text Battle Archive
Forum Description: This is where all the closed battles go.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=29534
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:59am


Topic: Mikey Wrath Vs AshleyKaos
Posted By: AshleyKaos
Subject: Mikey Wrath Vs AshleyKaos
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 7:15pm
Ten bars 48 hours no flips house rules apply


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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME



Replies:
Posted By: AshleyKaos
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 3:20am
Mikeys wrath has no force , like his attempted punchlines and insults
Not two rhyming words in any verse he drops i already won by default

Skills the worse ive seen LA's MC's maulin him cuz our instincts primative
imma kill this wanna be joke its comical,KOn him faster then andrenalyn

He begged and pleaded ak to set up this joust,so eager to be humiliated
It Doesnt matter anyway since his 'L's continue to be rapidly accumilating

Like some ike mikes this battle to easy its like takin candy from a baby
key stylin it up whoopin some ass and im even writin this n im faded....

Look kid theres a reason i gave those expos on you so read what i wrote!
even if he do or dont hes still a talentless prick whos a laugh with no hope!

bout now his face is red veins coursing wrath blotched face out of anger...
your to white for this up in the rap game, ya dont even count as a player

Ya stupid nd brainless bouta drop the same disses ive heard before
Foo thats shits played out dumfuck noone even uses those anymore

Your the definition of a noob its sad the apitamy of the biggest disgrace
been beat so many times round lyrical assauly how can ya show ya face?

funny how this shits gonna end you runnin tail placed between ya legs
When readers go to.place a vote they wont bother to see whatchya said

Look mike noobie joke talentless bitch i can name a bucncha shit
just get ya lame ass the.fuckk outta here..whatever the hell ya is




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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME


Posted By: MikeyWrath
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 5:51pm
Am athletic wit my scripts, olympian Anasthetic Spits, The only fitness Ashley gets is an Epileptic Fit../
Am cookin this beef by raisin a bit heat../
Cuz thats what i do when i smell freshmeat../
Your words will be weak in which ever way you calculate../
Even if your rhymes was a elite rap virus because i'll just CTRL-ALT-DELETE../
You see Ashley got alota talk than Action../
She raps fiction so why pay attention to a bitch in need of complection../
I'll reflect everythin this predominant gay can say../
Send her to South Africa and sponsor her 1dollar a day../
Ashley got skills../
And here she gettin thrills../
Nah! I object completely../
Check It, i'll let the world Ghost Write for her, but she stil fail to beat me../
Its impossible, she angry tryna eat me../
I Ash-Lee own skills am Bruce-Lee to beat her../
Bar for Bar, i'll bury you in your own pool of saliva../
To win this battle you gotta be smart like McGyver../
Your dumb ass is on the road to Self Destruction bitch am your designated driver....

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Wrath DaBeast


Posted By: Syntax
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 8:32pm
My vote goes to mike, I'll analyse him first

"Am athletic wit my scripts, olympian Anasthetic Spits, The only fitness Ashley gets is an Epileptic Fit.."

Best line of the whole battle, excellent intro, good punchlines, this line was great, 5 points for that.

"Your dumb ass is on the road to Self Destruction bitch am your designated driver"

Decent punchline, your rhyming was good leading up to it, although I felt it a bit random. 2 points.

"She raps fiction so why pay attention to a bitch in need of complection.."

Doesn't make sense at all, what has fiction got to do with the complexity of her rhymes? Moreover I doubt you meant to spell it complection I think you mean "complexion", it was so random I didn't understand whether you were talking of her lyricism or her facial complexion. Minus 1 point

"Calculate" and "delete" dont rhyme. Minus 1 point.

Overall relatively good, 4 points.

Now I'll analyse Ashley:

Hardly any of your lyrics rhyme, and the ones that do are mis-spelt/pronounced in order to rhyme or are incredibly simple. Minus 3 points.

You don't have any good punchlines, no rhythm. Minus 1 point because I'm kind.

You know what I can't analyse anymore this is a rap battle and you can't even seem to rap, and this is on a forum, in real life, I cringe thinking about it.

I'm a bit confused on how bars work here... A bar is usually a line, I can see how 2 short lines could form a bar like Mike's "Ashley got skills../
And here she gettin thrills../" but that doesn't mean lines as long as a sentence count as a bar. I guess I'll take it with a pinch of salt and just double the bars I see.

Anyway don't try to pretend my vote won't count on some formulated technicality, I've elaborated.



Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 9:37pm
Stop spamming this battle with bullshit. If you wanna battle eachother use the callout section.

Syntax's vote stands, 1-0 Mikey


Posted By: Syntax
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 9:43pm
Have done, sorry.

I just don't enjoy flaming.


Posted By: Skillos
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 9:46pm
Mikey - had the best line, ( am athletic wit my scripts olympian anathetic spits, only fitness ashley gets is ephinatic fits ) nice structure and nice flow

Ash - didn't see 1 thing that rhymed, self hyper and overall bad flow

Mikey definately gmt


Posted By: MikeyWrath
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 10:00pm
Uppin votes 2:0

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Wrath DaBeast


Posted By: AshleyKaos
Date Posted: 08 January 2014 at 10:41pm
Looooolllllllz these are all hate votes !! newbies are ganging up on me guys lol

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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME


Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 09 January 2014 at 2:23am
calm down ashely.. don't see any hate about it.. u need to accept people criticism here.. and elevate from it.. 


ASHLEY

Most of you bars didn't rhyme at all.. so they basically failed.. your punches didn't even land at him.. 

Mikey.. had nice flow and rhyming throughout the verse.. though his punches were generic also.. they landed more than ashley.. but still mostly fillerish.. 

VOTE: MikeyWrath..




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Posted By: AshleyKaos
Date Posted: 09 January 2014 at 3:49am
Now see coming from u its different its just when someone who just signed up a hour before says something like that. thats that harsh it pissed me off but k rameez... u ill listen to

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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME


Posted By: Systematic
Date Posted: 09 January 2014 at 5:32am
tbh i think ashley was good, had sick flow and good personal and word play about mike  so my vote goes to Ashley.


Posted By: AshleyKaos
Date Posted: 09 January 2014 at 5:39am
does this vote count ? thnks sys tho ppreciate it

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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME


Posted By: AshleyKaos
Date Posted: 09 January 2014 at 5:43am
this battle is over... now I got to battle zentac.. hehe

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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME


Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 11 January 2014 at 3:07pm
3 KO to Mikey

Ashley - I don't ever wanna see you spamming your battles again. If you have a problem with a vote hit the Report button!


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Great and Glorious Supreme Presidential Leader of the People's Democratic Republic of LA



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