Se�or Perfecto vs Lawless...
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Topic: Se�or Perfecto vs Lawless...
Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Subject: Se�or Perfecto vs Lawless...
Date Posted: 10 July 2004 at 7:33pm
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Rules: 20 lines; no time limit; first to 5 votes or 3-0 KO; all votes count but anyone using voting categories is gay... Extra Rule: No making up words like "analitication"... but stringing random words together in an incorrect form to force multis will be tolerated... Adios... -------------  |
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Posted By: LaWleSs
Date Posted: 11 July 2004 at 4:36pm
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checkin in//ill post shortly after yourself
dont take a week
and no hate votes please.
:-) ------------- www.soundclick.com/lawlessmc |
Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Date Posted: 14 July 2004 at 8:15am
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Yo, Yo... You ain't Lawless... You're clueless... I knew you couldn't do this, Adios... ------------- |
Posted By: LaWleSs
Date Posted: 14 July 2004 at 2:47pm
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ok... I Crush seeds With tough Keys Leaving this kid-horrified Its lucky You acceptin forced MUL-TIS cus u dont wanna be Dis-Qualified I come with Poundin-Agression, Try and at least be Smart, retard U beat me? *Out of the question*, like *Closing speech marks* You gonna stall-Now, Bitch knows he never could-maul-me Accepted yah call-Out, And u saw *his-Panic* like the spanish Foot ball tem (Hispanic) I'll smack yah frame-out, youll never be the Same now Gettin embarassed in L.A like Pamala when the sex tape Came out i bin respected your ineffective But think u abused my *credit hard*? But those *Swipes* didnt *Register* like u *Used fake Debit cards* And now..all yah Filler about to be Sonned-By-Quotes.. Yah 'lines' Wouldnt Knock me out, If they was' Undiced Coke'.. 'Bloddy yah verse' now yah 'flows is RED' me loosin to this weak dude?never Senor perfecto About to be 'EXPOSED in *threads* like sportin a *See thru sweater* Peep whos better..And relise that this aint your fight That drop was so wack, i kinda wish u had taken that fourtnight Smack yah jaw pipes...My rhymes will have yah mind vexed U won the first battle? this sites been open for years, time to get a life yet? So next time...Look at who u facing before tryna start shit Put yah *cardiac in x fades place* just so they know *home is where the heart is* good day.... ------------- www.soundclick.com/lawlessmc |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 14 July 2004 at 3:12pm
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I'm feelin' mathematical... I'ma rate each bar and decide that way... Senor... Nice verse... some of it didn't hit hard enough... a lot of it was scorin' well purely because of its lyricism, though you did keep punches goin' they weren't as harsh as they could have been, though line eight and the whole finisher was mad... pushed the rating up a bit... Nice multis, technically varied with transitionals and internals, animates the verse well, a bit of metaphor too, liked it... 8.1 Lawless... Was tight... expectin' better though... This isn't hate, you know that. The wordplay was clever but not all of it was helpin' to really hit him... like the sweater and credit card bits for example... though the wordplay was funny and clever... flowed nice but not quite as nice as Perfecto's. Multis were OK... you didn't force them which is good, and there weren't (m)any broken... but the verse lacked the drive that Perfecto's multis gave him... 7.9 Overall... you both, for me, didn't centre this battle on punches. You centred it on multis and wordplay respectively and both fell short of the potential this battle had. I can tell you both rushed a bit which is probably reason for the drop in standard, but at the end of it Senor had a tight(er) closer and his verse had more drive and flow for me, which helped accentuate the level at which his punches hit - because the punches between you were average overall, but inseparable - so this battle had to be decided on other attributes. Law, if your wordplay had been a little harsher/punch-based, you'd have taken this. VOTE: Senor Perfecto ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: LaWleSs
Date Posted: 14 July 2004 at 3:24pm
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ahhahaha ------------- www.soundclick.com/lawlessmc |
Posted By: Carnage
Date Posted: 14 July 2004 at 3:55pm
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Firstly, Lawless, learn how to press shift + enter man Senor Enjoyed your verse like mad, multis used so well throughtout, flowed really good the whole time. Personals were good, sum of em hit really well. u just made it all work well their, structured out well 2. Only thing u could of dun is more wordplay, but i can see that u didnt need it in this 1 cos what u had in their was well good Lawless Not a bad verse from u, hard to read cos it was so spaced out so u couldnt get a feel for it n gain a grip on what u was tryin to say. I got sum of it well, had sum good use of wordplay in their, but sum were lame, the credit card 1 i werent feelin, plus sum of the wordplay werent really hittin him, duno how closin speech marks is meant to get at sum1 (not sayin ur verse was bad just explainin what i saw). But sum of it was cool, hope 2 c more of ya. Vote Has to be Senor, he had the better all round verse,multi's made it sick as hell, got in2 it well and just thought it was alot more enjoyable. VOTE:SENOR -------------  |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 16 July 2004 at 5:08pm
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Up for the KO ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: DaVeSaNiTy
Date Posted: 16 July 2004 at 5:57pm
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Lawless... Very nice verse. You had some complexity and a nice structure. Rhyme sheme was pretty tight and I liked tha flow. Good stuff... 8/10 Se�or Perfecto... VERY nice verse! Some pretty tight multiez and complexity was aight. Flow was hard-comin, and I liked your structure as well. You came hardest in rhyme scheme and flow. Very nice job - 9.5/10 Vote~ Se�or Perfecto. ~1~
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Posted By: LaWleSs
Date Posted: 16 July 2004 at 6:46pm
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lol ok
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Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Date Posted: 16 July 2004 at 6:49pm
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I had no idea how much you loved this naming-and-shaming shit... If I'd known sooner I would have taken more time with it and not done a rushed ten minute keystyle... Adios... ------------- |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 16 July 2004 at 6:56pm
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SP wins... KO... ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |