[Crew] Brotha Goose vs U.N.L.M.
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Topic: [Crew] Brotha Goose vs U.N.L.M.
Posted By: Scotty32
Subject: [Crew] Brotha Goose vs U.N.L.M.
Date Posted: 26 February 2014 at 8:11pm
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Crew battle between Brotha Goose vs U.N.L.M. for http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/crews/tha-syndicate-22/" rel="nofollow - Tha Syndicate and
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/crews/vis-maior-21/" rel="nofollow - Vis Maior , respectively. 16 lines 2 week deadline First 5 (3-0 KO) No crew votes No flipping/feeding No show is instant DQ, no trip to NML Blind Drops - All verses must be PM'd to me Lets keep the battles clean and /forum/crew-battle-tha-syndicate-vs-vis-maior_topic30980.html" rel="nofollow - limit the bitchin to just the linked thread for the crew battle. -------------  |
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Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 12 March 2014 at 11:02am
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Brotha Goose News flash bitch, i just clicked a .GIF UN equipped with scuba gear lookin sea sick
Who needs a gym, when U's take'n those long swims to Cuba to suck his E-dick Heres something Kris, ya been here since 2006 move away from the computer fam UNLM is just an acronym and it stands for Ur Nothing but a Loser Man Stick to pic's cuz yur scriptures stink try n listen to yourself cuz yur novice son Except this time start from where you should of begun by pick'n up Self Help Vol. number 1! Cuz yur skills are none, had to start yur own add campaign just to get sum attention dude Ya know its true, peope only claim you great when it comes to votes explained the Hall of Fame will never mention U! This dude is full of it, worse than CNN the way this kids pics pry conversations You should probably quit, yur involved in everyone's shit more than the United Nations! UN is never on top, when it comes to leaders yur not even seen on the list See yur a bitch, seems even yur crew agrees UN couldn't be Seasonlly Sick! Make you bleed when I spit, im reigning over this game UN ain't going to slow me a bit like Russians taking over Ukraine! U can swing all ya want, Goose is still put'n the heat on ya Kris ain't touch'n this bird, he's only good when he beats on Rhianna! ------------- |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 12 March 2014 at 11:03am
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UNLM Goose bringin' Syn down-hill with no punches, only filler So watch Syn drop 'more tiers' for this dead Brotha than http://fansided.com/2014/02/16/nbc-reporter-badgers-bode-miller-dead-brother-till-cries/" rel="nofollow - Bode Miller I'm surely iller, this lonely sinner talking shit on occasion Then can't back up his worth to the IRS like tax evasion! Strugglin' with an X, broken up - you need to distort statements i'll have you 'fucked over, kid' worse than your http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/lets-get-shit-straight_topic30418.html" rel="nofollow - child support payments We had short patience, Law's drop scared you shitless, you beg to forget Cause we didn't see a goose drop but we still saw you lay an egg! Ya dead, your bars' child's play, a playground, lose ya raps ya music's wack Treats Audio Mic like a park so now we're all http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mixed-up_topic27573.html" rel="nofollow - avoidin' http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/parking-lot-freestyle_topic27477.html" rel="nofollow - Goose's crap!! Just shut your trap! you need sincere help cause you'll lose by yourself Won't feel good about his chances... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mcotm-january-2014_topic30507.html" rel="nofollow - even if he could vote for himself Needs to advertise his own skills, can't go Hamm with lines that sadden Since Don couldn't be on 'A MC's best list' if he played with Mad Men! This is the end so take my ideas cause your drops in doubt without Cause http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/hey-preacher_topic30262.html" rel="nofollow - writing about confessions shows he can't get Syn out his mouth (ugh) - http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/question_topic30293.html" rel="nofollow - I ranked battlers in tiers (tears) ... -Got Koed by Beans and Xplicit after having some problem with IRS -his quote "I got two kids and a bitch of an ex wife and child support got me bent over and lubed up." - Name is Don...Don Draper is main character on AMC's big show "Mad Men" who works at an advertising agency... - Wrote an OM using my topic "Your in a confessional: telling your sins to a priest"... ------------- |
Posted By: Shankley
Date Posted: 12 March 2014 at 8:34pm
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BG: Opener: Nice opener good punch the personal was decent also. 2nd Bar: nameplay was nice and the punch was decent as well 3rd Bar: this was a nice bar as well but I feel you could have dropped "number" and just had "self help vol. 1" still has same impact and it's not as wordy. 4th Bar: this wasn't that much of a punch more of a statement. Tried to get personal though 5th Bar: the set up is a bit awkward with the "pics pry conversations" it doesn't sound that natural/smooth but the punch is reat just that bit is a bit weird 6th Bar: this was good as well great personal nice punch and hebar flowed smoothly as well 7th Bar: nice bar very relevant and an ok punch another UN nameplay though Closer: this was good (if a little old haha) the pkay on kris/chris was nice though am sure it has been used I haven't seen it so it still cool with me. UNLM: Opener: It was ok nothing spectacular and required the help of the link but after I saw that it made more sense. 2nd Bar: This was dope the flow the punch the set up all on point 3rd Bar: this was nice good personal the punch was a nice hit 4th Bar: this was good and the "laying an egg" was funny so not bad at all 5th Bar: this was a nice concept but I don't think you executed it as well as you could have. 6th Bar: this was a cool concept and an ok punch 7th Bar: I feel the punch lacked impact it was worded weirdly as well Closer: this was nice a good closer nice set up and nice jab. Overall a tough call I feel UN had some dope concepts but weren't always executed with finesse and Goose had repetitive concepts but executed better. MVGT Brotha Goose for better execution and a more polished verse ------------- |
Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 13 March 2014 at 2:06pm
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BG:
News flash bitch, i just clicked a .GIF UN equipped with scuba gear lookin sea sick
Who needs a gym, when U's take'n those long swims to Cuba to suck his E-dick This was an ok opener. 3/5
Heres something Kris, ya been here since 2006 move away from the computer fam UNLM is just an acronym and it stands for Ur Nothing but a Loser Man Wasnt feelin this, I've seen people do that kinda angle wit his name before - 2/5
Stick to pic's cuz yur scriptures stink try n listen to yourself cuz yur novice son Except this time start from where you should of begun by pick'n up Self Help Vol. number 1! This was only ok - 3/5
Cuz yur skills are none, had to start yur own add campaign just to get sum attention dude Ya know its true, peope only claim you great when it comes to votes explained the Hall of Fame will never mention U! Nah, this was more of a statement then a punchline, nothing was flipped to hit - 2/5
This dude is full of it, worse than CNN the way this kids pics pry conversations You should probably quit, yur involved in everyone's shit more than the United Nations! This was nice! Good set up and solid punch. 4/5
UN is never on top, when it comes to leaders yur not even seen on the list See yur a bitch, seems even yur crew agrees UN couldn't be Seasonlly Sick! Another nice one, nice flow and punch landed 3.5/5
Make you bleed when I spit, im reigning over this game UN ain't going to slow me a bit like Russians taking over Ukraine! Cool scheme here, I think it worked ok - 3/5
U can swing all ya want, Goose is still put'n the heat on ya
Kris aint touch'n this bird, he's only good when he beats on rihanna!
LOL, enjoyable closer man nice 3./5 Overall - 23.5
UN:
Goose bringin' Syn down-hill with no punches, only filler
So watch Syn drop 'more tiers' for this dead Brotha than http://fansided.com/2014/02/16/nbc-reporter-badgers-bode-miller-dead-brother-till-cries/" rel="nofollow - Bode Miller
Solid opener here - 3.5/
I'm surely iller, this lonely sinner talking shit on occasion
Then can't back up his worth to the IRS like tax evasion!
Nice punch and personal jab - 3/5
Strugglin' with an X, broken up - you need to distort statements
i'll have you 'fucked over, kid' worse than your http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/lets-get-shit-straight_topic30418.html" rel="nofollow - child support payments
Daaamn, this was a haesh punch and personal - 4/5
We had short patience, Law's drop scared you shitless, you beg to forget
Cause we didn't see a goose drop but we still saw you lay an egg!
The concept here was nice and so was the personal but thought the wording was off a little. It could have been a haymaker connectiion - 3/5
Ya dead, your bars' child's play, a playground, lose ya raps ya music's wack
Treats Audio Mic like a park so now we're all http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mixed-up_topic27573.html" rel="nofollow - avoidin' http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/parking-lot-freestyle_topic27477.html" rel="nofollow - Goose's crap!!
Another nice concept here, ok - 3/5
Just shut your trap! you need sincere help cause you'll lose by yourself
Won't feel good about his chances... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mcotm-january-2014_topic30507.html" rel="nofollow - even if he could vote for himself
haha, good shot! - 3.5/5
Needs to advertise his own skills, can't go Hamm with lines that sadden
Since Don couldn't be on 'A MC's best list' if he played with Mad Men!
3/5
This is the end so take my ideas cause your drops in doubt without
Cause http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/hey-preacher_topic30262.html" rel="nofollow - writing about confessions shows he can't get Syn out his mouth (ugh)
This closer was on point, nice - 3.5/5
Overall - 26.5
This battle was really close and a good read on both sides. I just think UN stayed a little more consistant and that gave him the edge to get the win. Close battle fellas.
MVGT - UN
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Posted By: Brotha Goose
Date Posted: 13 March 2014 at 7:31pm
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Thx fellas...1-1...gud shit UN! ------------- 
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Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 16 March 2014 at 5:27am
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With all due respect to the titu/ pb and z/ bliss battles, I have to actually break this one down to decide who won, as this one was actually quite close. Goose Opener was ok... A little wordy, but funny, ok hit Acronym bar was funny too, tho felt like a little bit of a reach... Still hit tho Wasn't feeling the 3rd bar, idea was there but poorly executed IMO Mention u maybe a soft jab at best United Nations bar was another good concept that missed due to poor execution Wasn't feeling the seasonally sick punch... Tho the setup was good, lol Ukraine bar was nice, I liked this one Closer... Ehhh, not good enough to me. It was cool that you incorporated the personal bit, but on a played idea like Chris brown/ Rihanna u have to be way more clever than that, and the flow was off anyways. Was a little funny tho Overall, had humor and decent interior rhymes, but tended to be too wordy to flow the way I think u intended. A lot of decent concepts, with poor rhymes and execution led to too many soft hits or misses to me. Not bad tho. Unlm Opener was nice, good shit Tax evasion was cool, tho transition was forced... Solid tho 3rd bar had knockout punch potential but I didn't like the setup... Still, great punch Lay an egg was a solid play, but as the voter above said, flow in the setup mismatched and took away some effectiveness Avoiding gooses crap seemed forced, in the setup and punch, wasn't a big fan of this 1 Vote for himself was solid Mad men was also decent, good shit Closer was poorly executed... The setup was off, tho the punch was decent Overall, after breaking down the verse noticed more solid hits than I initially read, even tho there was a few setup issues throughout. Good verse. Unlm had more hard hitting punches and better incorporated plays and personals, therefore MVGT Unlm |
Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 19 March 2014 at 1:59pm
| 2-1 UNLM |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 01 April 2014 at 11:28pm
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Fuckin Christ this place is slacking hard Aight Bro goose poop Opener- I felt this was a bit forced. Bunch of personals clumped up But I liked the punch Bar 2-wasn't feeling this. I hate nameplays like that Bar 3-this was cool. I think your set up could have been better Bar 4-stretch as fuck but I like the punch name play here. Shorten ya wording up Bar5-yup. Liked this allot Bar 6- nice punch personal here solid hit Bar 7- this was cool. Nothing to crazy Closer - like the personal here Now That 50 cent dude(unlm) Opener - this was cool. Wordin on your punch was a bit forced but good personal punch Bar 2 - this was nice personal punch ! Made me laugh Bar 3 - nice personal here. Digging up Work. Like the set and punch were solid Bar 4 - personals & name play were here but I wasn't feeling this bar Nothing hard here Bar 5 - cool concept but to much on your set up Punch was cool Bar 6 - liked this. Nice personal punch Bar 7 - liked this Closer - this was solid. Didn't think it was to crazy but good shit Overall- both were solid reads. Bro goose started off a bit choppy then turned it up As unlm was more consistent and his weaker lines of his verse were better than gooses Vote unlm Good read fellas. Stay up and let's get voting back on track ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: IZIAH
Date Posted: 14 April 2014 at 7:30pm
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This was a doopppe battle guys. Alrighty- Brotha goose- fucck man, good verse! The had a good opener. Very good punches and a fucking siiick closer. I think ur flow was very giod. Multis there. But maan. The thing that wins battles are punches. And u boxed him hard like a trye boxer bro. Keep it up. Unlm- wow. Good shiit too. You put up a good fight bro. The opner was good. U had flow multis and good punches too. So keep up the battles. U punched hard aswell. Keep it up man. ------------- ~Insight The Inspired~ |
Posted By: IZIAH
Date Posted: 14 April 2014 at 7:31pm
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Awe shiit sorry. My vote goes to brotha goose for having the best closer and a bit harder punches. ------------- ~Insight The Inspired~ |
Posted By: Brotha Goose
Date Posted: 15 April 2014 at 4:25am
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3-2 UNLM..... Just wanted to say thank you to everyone that Has taken the time to vote on this, its much appreciated -------------
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Posted By: Rapper T
Date Posted: 20 April 2014 at 9:02am
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Good battle y'all BG: News flash bitch, i just clicked a .GIF UN equipped with scuba gear lookin sea sickWho needs a gym, when U's take'n those long swims to Cuba to suck his E-dick Aiit so you clicked a pic of your opponent swimming and you reckon he is gay with Cuba, no real expo or references so this didn't hit that hard to me Heres something Kris, ya been here since 2006 move away from the computer fam UNLM is just an acronym and it stands for Ur Nothing but a Loser Man An attempt at an acronym which was a little funny but the concept from this punch felt lacking in that the lines didn't really tie together to smack him in the face Stick to pic's cuz yur scriptures stink try n listen to yourself cuz yur novice son Except this time start from where you should of begun by pick'n up Self Help Vol. number 1! You are saying he's good with pictures and should get some help, again not that hard hitting Cuz yur skills are none, had to start yur own add campaign just to get sum attention dude Ya know its true, peope only claim you great when it comes to votes explained the Hall of Fame will never mention U! This was a little more personal and a bit more of a jab, again praising your opponent and here for his votes, this detracts from the harshness in your verse to me This dude is full of it, worse than CNN the way this kids pics pry conversations You should probably quit, yur involved in everyone's shit more than the United Nations! Telling him he 'should probably' quit and that he's as great as the UN again didn't hit that hard, this bar was funny though UN is never on top, when it comes to leaders yur not even seen on the list See yur a bitch, seems even yur crew agrees UN couldn't be Seasonlly Sick! This multi was cool but I didn't think the lines linked together as a setup and a punch, the seasonally sick and leader concepts felt disconnected and let this bar down Make you bleed when I spit, im reigning over this game UN ain't going to slow me a bit like Russians taking over Ukraine! This bar was current but more like self-hype than a dis, with all of this filler you said that you make UN bleed and that you are fast U can swing all ya want, Goose is still put'n the heat on ya Kris ain't touch'n this bird, he's only good when he beats on Rhianna Here again you give your opponent props saying he's good and that he beats on Rihanna, both of these are like compliments and putting heat on someone in New Zealand is putting your package on them so maybe it was a language barrier or something but this closer tied your whole verse together and didn't hit that hard UN: Goose bringin' Syn down-hill with no punches, only filler
So watch Syn drop 'more tiers' for this dead Brotha than http://fansided.com/2014/02/16/nbc-reporter-badgers-bode-miller-dead-brother-till-cries/" rel="nofollow - Bode Miller A direct personal and a referenced punch, this opener was ok and a nice start to your verse I'm surely iller, this lonely sinner talking shit on occasion Then can't back up his worth to the IRS like tax evasion! Personal again which was nice, the rhyme was loose thought which made your first line in this bar feel like filler, could be seen as buildup so this was aiit Strugglin' with an X, broken up - you need to distort statements i'll have you 'fucked over, kid' worse than your http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/lets-get-shit-straight_topic30418.html" rel="nofollow - child support payments Nice personal with this bar, this was quite funny and relevant and personal, idk if this has been played but I thought this was one of the best bars of the battle We had short patience, Law's drop scared you shitless, you beg to forget Cause we didn't see a goose drop but we still saw you lay an egg! Another quite funny personal here, the rhyming was really loose though, don't let your concepts and punches let you lose sight of your rhymes Ya dead, your bars' child's play, a playground, lose ya raps ya music's wack Treats Audio Mic like a park so now we're all http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mixed-up_topic27573.html" rel="nofollow - avoidin' http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/parking-lot-freestyle_topic27477.html" rel="nofollow - Goose's crap!! This was personal I guess but the concept of the lines didn't connect that well, I couldn't find the connection between goose crap and anything else in the bars, something like steppin' on bird shit could have been incorporated into that first line or something to link the bar Just shut your trap! you need sincere help cause you'll lose by yourself Won't feel good about his chances... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mcotm-january-2014_topic30507.html" rel="nofollow - even if he could vote for himself You were landing quite a few punches in this battle, this again was no exception, the rhyme of yourself and himself felt like it could have been more creative and the multi could have been smoother but the personal dis in this bar was quite funny Needs to advertise his own skills, can't go Hamm with lines that sadden Since Don couldn't be on 'A MC's best list' if he played with Mad Men! The references in this bar were good but the directness of this bar felt off, again your multi could have been lengthier by way of syllables and inners added but the thought behind the punch was there and the concept just needed some development to work the bar as heavier punch This is the end so take my ideas cause your drops in doubt without Cause http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/hey-preacher_topic30262.html" rel="nofollow - writing about confessions shows he can't get Syn out his mouth (ugh) This bar was pretty ugh but it was funny too, it tied your whole verse together well as a closer. A bit of filler in this bar but adding something about the whole confession element to the first line could have made this a killer closer MVGT UNLM |
Posted By: wateced
Date Posted: 25 April 2014 at 1:20am
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best battle i ceen on here so far....cats structure..bg punches-bg..jus edged personals-un {jus hit harder} multies-n/a complexity-un enjoyment-un jus edged loved dis battle punches n personals eveywere btt un personals jus took ova dis battle...alotta ggood lines thruout..nice battle best bar bg Heres something Kris, ya been here since 2006 move away from the computer fam This dude is full of it, worse than CNN the way this kids pics pry conversations un Ya dead, your bars' child's play, a playground, lose ya raps ya music's wack Treats Audio Mic like a park so now we're all http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mixed-up_topic27573. - avoidin' http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/parking-lot-freestyle_topic27477. - Goose's crap!! This is the end so take my ideas cause your drops in doubt without Cause http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/hey-preacher_topic30262. - writing about confessions shows he can't get Syn out his mouth (ugh) |
Posted By: GiliganDillinger
Date Posted: 26 April 2014 at 8:28pm
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News flash bitch, i just clicked a .GIF UN equipped with scuba gear lookin sea sick Who needs a gym, when U's take'n those long swims to Cuba to suck his E-dick gay n weak Heres something Kris, ya been here since 2006 move away from the computer fam UNLM is just an acronym and it stands for Ur Nothing but a Loser Man lmao good 1 here Stick to pic's cuz yur scriptures stink try n listen to yourself cuz yur novice son Except this time start from where you should of begun by pick'n up Self Help Vol. number 1! statement Cuz yur skills are none, had to start yur own add campaign just to get sum attention dude Ya know its true, peope only claim you great when it comes to votes explained the Hall of Fame will never mention U! stretcched as all hell This dude is full of it, worse than CNN the way this kids pics pry conversations You should probably quit, yur involved in everyone's shit more than the United Nations! lol could of been doper UN is never on top, when it comes to leaders yur not even seen on the list See yur a bitch, seems even yur crew agrees UN couldn't be Seasonlly Sick! ok Make you bleed when I spit, im reigning over this game UN ain't going to slow me a bit like Russians taking over Ukraine! ok U can swing all ya want, Goose is still put'n the heat on ya Kris ain't touch'n this bird, he's only good when he beats on Rhianna! good way to end it. vs Goose bringin' Syn down-hill with no punches, only filler So watch Syn drop 'more tiers' for this dead Brotha than http://fansided.com/2014/02/16/nbc-reporter-badgers-bode-miller-dead-brother-till-cries/" rel="nofollow - Bode Miller good 1 I'm surely iller, this lonely sinner talking shit on occasion Then can't back up his worth to the IRS like tax evasion! ok Strugglin' with an X, broken up - you need to distort statements i'll have you 'fucked over, kid' worse than your http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/lets-get-shit-straight_topic30418.html" rel="nofollow - child support payments i'm feelin it We had short patience, Law's drop scared you shitless, you beg to forget Cause we didn't see a goose drop but we still saw you lay an egg! lolish Ya dead, your bars' child's play, a playground, lose ya raps ya music's wack Treats Audio Mic like a park so now we're all http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mixed-up_topic27573.html" rel="nofollow - avoidin' http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/parking-lot-freestyle_topic27477.html" rel="nofollow - Goose's crap!! not every park has geese but good concept Just shut your trap! you need sincere help cause you'll lose by yourself Won't feel good about his chances... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/mcotm-january-2014_topic30507.html" rel="nofollow - even if he could vote for himself ok Needs to advertise his own skills, can't go Hamm with lines that sadden Since Don couldn't be on 'A MC's best list' if he played with Mad Men! ok This is the end so take my ideas cause your drops in doubt without Cause http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/hey-preacher_topic30262.html" rel="nofollow - writing about confessions shows he can't get Syn out his mouth (ugh) lol good way to end it. i liked it. overall a strong battle. i was feelin UNLMS angles and approach to this battle more. goose had some really stretched lines that killed his chances of takin it, but he had some good shit. better than some othher battles i've seen him in. UNLM was completely consistent whole battle and some funny/dope concepts gotta give it to him v/UnLM |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 02 May 2014 at 12:13am
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5-3 UNLM is the winner -------------  |