kilo G vs blue stone
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Category: Battle Ground
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:00am
Topic: kilo G vs blue stone
Posted By: blue stone
Subject: kilo G vs blue stone
Date Posted: 30 May 2014 at 10:17am
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4 bars(8 lines) house rules no flipping no timelimit ------------- enough of this shit |
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Posted By: Kilo G
Date Posted: 30 May 2014 at 4:23pm
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Expos: 1st bar: he lost to everybody so far 2nd: clear 3rd: his battle record 4th: he bites bars from Kwal!ty (the R-R member) , evidence : http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/completed-rap-battles-archive/182751-funk-vs-kwality-funkdot-wins-ko.html#post481813" rel="nofollow - & his verse with The_Guy http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/guy-v-blue-stone_topic25686.html?KW=" rel="nofollow - Blue stone's a stoner, but only time he gets high is when he's on a boner Bitch you're always a loser, if you don't loose one time it means you're dead somewhere in the corner He shed blood? he did when he beheaded his disliked bird You're bars are messy man they need work, they smell like turd 18 losses dude? how come you're still alive and breathing! You're fucking screwed, just take my advice and start leaving This mouse is a fighter, but what he do against a lion? He's a proper biter, he bites from Kwal!ty or maybe Orion... -------------  |
Posted By: Kilo G
Date Posted: 30 May 2014 at 4:39pm
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Sorry to spam the thread but The second Link is to be : http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/blue-stone-vs-lsd_topic25643.html?KW=" rel="nofollow -
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Posted By: blue stone
Date Posted: 12 June 2014 at 6:53am
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I have a tons of gangsta rhymes,your just a Kilo G, matter a fact,my mom is bigger gangsta,your a fuckin Zero G, This fag got no location and his house is full of mystery, he fool's his dad to delete his mom's porn history,  i'm gonna knock you down with a bent fender, bitches keep asking me "u killed which gender??",  you ain't a rapper u'a just a stone in a kidney, still think u beat me?? bitch your IQ is equal to number of hairs on old britney,  ------------- enough of this shit |
Posted By: Eyez.
Date Posted: 14 June 2014 at 1:08pm
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Okay so i thought this was a somewhat average battle with both of you having some okay lines in it. Personals could've been much harder if maybe structured differently, but they were there, considering it the most hitting part of this battle in form of direct attempts. Flow was also nice in some points! Anyways, i will go bar by bar:
opener was okay referring to his name, personals were in both lines somewhat decent and flow was alright although boner and corner doesnt rhyme for me but alright !
not sure what to think of this bird line, the rhyming was nice here though
ok nice attempt at personal, again a decent flow, second was okay..
i really liked the smoothness of the flow and rhyming here, personals were also somewhat okay, an alright closure here To sum up, your text was average/alright with some quite nice attempts of personals, like the scheme and flow was nice here !
hmm cant feel that one, think its your weakest bar in this battle but flow was okay
attempt at personal was there
personal was okay, if worded differently couldve been nice
hmm couldnt feel that one as well, rhyme was okay though ! Overall you had some attempts at personals, flow was off partly but some words just didnt rhyme for me. Kilo G gets my vote for reasons above !
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Kilo G wrote:
Posted By: KwanTem Qaunondrum
Date Posted: 14 June 2014 at 2:09pm
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Flow(+1): Kilo G Multis(+2) BS Creativity(+2): kilo Punches(+3): Kilo Personals(+3) Kilo(barely) Vocab(+4): Killo Complexity(+4) Kilo(Close) Winning more categories gives you an advantage point of + 1. mvgto Killo G for having a slightly better verse and ending more cats |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 14 June 2014 at 4:33pm
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Kilo G, Please check the http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/battles/rules.htm" rel="nofollow - Battle Rules , you can only up 24hrs after the last post (which you did) but you cannot up your battle if the last post was not a vote or a verse. Basically you had 2 ups in a row, this is not allowed. Kwan, your vote is shit. I told you there was a bare minimum standard for votes, yours does not meet it. You have to actually explain your vote with a few paragraphs. Then you can add on bar break down or category bullshit on top of that. As it is, that vote is shit and disallowed. -------------  |
Posted By: nomedic
Date Posted: 14 June 2014 at 5:01pm
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Kilo I liked your verse but i feel like you can do alot better On your punches and your flow appears a little too stretched But i see you are workin on your flow just remember simplicity Is often the more sophosticated approach But your verse was okay you landed a few punches and got your Point across Blue Your opener was a waste for the punch lacked incredibly It wasnt even a punch ' felt it was too generic too be one Your whole verse for that matter was full of misses i feel you Dont have direction yet thats somin you should work on soon Before attempting to battle again i feel you should hit the tutorials Mvgt kilo for a better battle verse |
Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 14 June 2014 at 6:13pm
| I was gonna vote on this, but it seems like 2 rules have been broken as evidenced in this thread (As far as I can tell.) Firstly, if blue stone's a biter then he needs banning. Secondly, Kilo G using RR is an off-site personal? Can a mod clear this up for me before I vote? |
Posted By: Elite
Date Posted: 14 June 2014 at 6:53pm
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Horrible, horrible, horrible, horrible, horrible battle. I'ma keep this short and sweet. Kilo, your opener was shit. Didn't even barely rhyme except for shitty internals. You're flow kept going from short, to choppy, to good, to bad. It was all over the place for me. You're punches just didn't connect at all and you didn't have any personal attempts. Also, stop putting pointless expos like #2 & #3, that shit's annoying. 2.8/10 Blue, I don't know what the fuck you are on, but stop using it. You're flow was decent AT BEST, but that's it. Your punches were awful, and you didn't have any personals other than talking about his parents. You didn't hit hard with anything, and that's a red flag to begin with. HONESTLY, I would seriously fucking have to give you a sorry 1.9/10 KO FOR KILO G Step the fuck up, and KwanTem, what the hell was that kinda vote?
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