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Topic: All To Know About Text
Posted By: Xr8D
Subject: All To Know About Text
Date Posted: 19 October 2004 at 11:04am

I DID NOT WRITE THIS I FOUND IT BUT IT SHOULD BE  A BIG HELP

 

ART OF TEXT


This  is designed to help those of you that had just started the art of writing rhymes. It may also help veterans that need to polish up their skills.
Read it, it may help you.

Before you proceed, be aware that this is only a foundation to becoming an Ill lyricist. I'm only writing to what a nice verse should have and the rest is up to your ability and/or creativity. However, I do have the prerequisite that's worthe mentioning, I've won K'O 2 Intersite battle, and have winning record of in text of [40 plus - 5].

Terms that you'll encounter and what I'm going to cover:

  1. Rhyme struture - How a verse's written. Such as amount of bars and location of rhyming words.
  2. Simile - A comparison using the word "like" or "as".
  3. Metaphor - A comparison without using the word "like" or "as".
  4. Wordplays - A pun, or words that has double meaning.
  5. Multisyllables (multis) - Rhyming using words or combination of words that contain more then one syllable.
  6. Punchline - These are the dissing lines. Just like comedy, it's where the joke or the dissing is.
  7. Alliteration - bars or verse that contain words that start with the same first
    letter.
  8. Fillers - words that in a verse that's there just for rhyming purposes.

Let's begin by pointing out the differences between a "battle verse" and a "non-battle verse". A "battle verse" is just that, a verse that's written to battle another MC or MCs. These type of verse usually contain heavy usage of Punchlines/Wordplays/Multisyallables. Along with it a small usage of Similes and Metaphores. Basically a "battle verse" is a verse that talk shit about your opponents. One mistake that most MC make in battle verse is that they tends to talk about themself. How good they are etc.. Which what you shouldn't do. Your focus is suppose to be mainly on your opponents. You're not supposed to talk about yourself, rather you should be degrading your opponents.

"NON-battle" verse, is any verse that's written as topical, or even a freestyle about a certain thing or incidents. This could include almost everything. What make it different from a "battle verse" is that rarely does it have any punchlines. In this particular verse, the usage of Simile/Metaphore is heavy. Included with it are light usage of multisyllable/Wordplay/Alliterations. In this type of verse, it's acceptable to talk about yourself. Though, it's not necessary.


RHYME STRUCTURE.

Not too many kats pay attention to this, but I believe most of the veterans are aware of this. Though it doesn't get mentioned much, Rhyme structuring is very important. It actually give or take away the smooth flow of a verse. Since the lenght of bars is important, try to keep it at an even lenght. Also, place your rhyming words carefully so that you'll have that easy transition and it'll roll off of the tongue abit easily. There really aren't any nice example to give, so just look out for what I've described. You can do this by reading any well established veterans.


SIMILE

Simile is a comparison that uses the words LIKE or AS. It's another way of saying something indirectly.
For example:

A."Like an Athiest, you ain't got a prayer"
B."You're lying on yourself like sleeping on mirrors"


METAPHOR

Metaphore is another form of comparison. However, it does not uses the words LIKE nor As. Metaphores are very effective in capturing your audiences attention if your ceativity is there.
For example:

A."I spit so sharpe, every point I make will pierce through your heart"
B."Fuck the Sun, I spit hotter then it's father"


WORDPLAY

This has to be the best part of writing a verse. Wordplays are puns. Or words that has double meaning used to conjoint two different concept together yet make sense out of it. It's just basically that, playing with words.
For example:

A."You can't [bust] like [passenger without tokens]"
In this case, "BUST" is a wordplay for "BUS", it's relation is to
PASSENGER WITHOUT TOKENS. Cuz when you think of it, A PASSENGER
WITHOUT TOKENS are not allow to ride on the BUS. Yet in this case BUST
itself is referred to spitting off the top. You could also say that you can't spit a freestyle.

B."Your [lion] ass is getting [held up] like a young [Simba]"
In this case, "LION" is a wordplay for "LYING". "HELD UP" is another
word for a stick up. A robbery rather. If you had seen the movie THE
LION KING. Young SIMBA was held up to show the rest of the animals when he was borned. But in this instance, you're basically saying that..Your Lying ass is being stick up.


MULTISYLLABLE

Multisyllable are words that has more then one syllable. Or a single
syllable words that are combined with other words to make or give it that multiplesyllable sounds.
For example:

A."No doubt-kid, my whole out-fit will leave you shocking like you stuck
your fingers in an out-let"
B."It's like pitchers-on-mount, your pitches-on-count, I'll make
bitches-go-down at switches-of-sounds while maintaining status us the
richest-in-town"

[NOTE: keep usage of mulitplesyllable to a minimum in battles, because lots of multi equal to lots of fillers]


PUNCHLINE

It's simple, it's basically are dissing lines. Talk shit line.
For example:

A."Your verse's so stank, skunk took a sniff of it and passed out"
B."You can't spit, I've seen croocket ass drop better shit"


ALLITERATION

Alliterations are rarely used. Though it's real nice as a skit or a non-battle writtens. It's bars or verse that start off using the same first letter.
For example:

A."Fuck a fist fight, I fickle from fainted fire to ferrocious flame just
so you frame can fizzle at the first light"
B."Simply stated, it's sad to say son, your stupid stories of soldiers that sold ya surpassed the second stage of stupidity"


WHAT TO DO, AND WHAT NOT TO DO!

DO..

  • Write everyline as a punchline. It's hard but it's possible.
  • Keep fillers to a minimum. 
  • Stick to the topic/subject when you write. Get into details.
  • Write with an easy mind. Forcing your written will give you shitty verse.
  • Read other MC works and learn from it. Just don't bite it.
  • Expand your volcabulary. Use words that are rarely used. It'll give you that complex verse. But don't get carry away with it. It'll make it boring.
  • Be original with your punches/wordplay.

DON'T..

  • Bite EVER!
  • Overuse your multiples. When you overuse it, it's nothing more then a verse that's full of fillers. You can get by with a Newbie, but a Veteran will spot it immediately.
  • Stretch out your wordplay to a point that your bars are uneven. Keep it short and direct..the quality will definately show when you spit it. Reader or Audiences will catch it easier.
  • Battle with end rhymes. You'll loses votes everytime.
  • Be afraid to battle. It'll only help you improve



Replies:
Posted By: Demonic
Date Posted: 19 October 2004 at 5:33pm
yes im sure it will but are you allowed to do this

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Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 20 October 2004 at 9:48am
Why wouldn't he be?

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Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 20 October 2004 at 9:52am

That tutorial is pretty crap...

Every line does not need to be a punchline, and if every line is a punchline it often takes the impact of the punch away a little, and it's a poor, basic structure to have. On stage it's a good idea to throw as many as you can, but this is a text tutorial.

This guy doesn't describe metaphors or wordplay very well/thoroughly at all, and the examples are poor, the rhyme scheme examples are also basic and there aren't enough of them.

Blah... I have a tutorial in the works, I've been saying that for over a month now but it's 'cuz I don't have time to finish it up, when I do you'll see what's really up. 1



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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .


Posted By: Xr8D
Date Posted: 21 October 2004 at 6:40am
Well Please Could You Show Me A Tutorial Coz I Need A Lot Of Work On My Rhymes And Cant Find A REALLY Good Tutorial But This One Did Help ME Tho It Is Basic


Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 21 October 2004 at 9:53am
Originally posted by -Orion- -Orion- wrote:

I have a tutorial in the works, I've been saying that for over a month now but it's 'cuz I don't have time to finish it up, when I do you'll see what's really up. 1



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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .


Posted By: Xr8D
Date Posted: 21 October 2004 at 11:01am
Oh Shit Didnt See That Bit But Aite LoLz


Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Date Posted: 22 October 2004 at 8:36am

The Art Of Text is to write legibly... and concisely...

All tutorials help at different levels... even crap ones...

If you're a Historian... you would not look at the first piece of evidence you have...  On the contrary... you would take into account all primary and secondary sources of information that you can get your hands on... and form your own hypotheses from there...

Adios...



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Posted By: =Tu-KhinDz=
Date Posted: 13 November 2004 at 8:17pm
Wasn't feelin that Rap Tutorials...

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:::...Tu-KhinDz Which One Do You Like Better...:::


Posted By: H!gH~THa!
Date Posted: 14 November 2004 at 2:50am
the art of rhyming is to be me hahaha im only playin but atleast finaly i got a ok idea of what a meta is lolz

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props to A-clipz
-The "Farther i climb" the "harder i rhyme" you got to skip death and "survive" to feel more "alive"-canibus


Posted By: Stoic
Date Posted: 25 November 2004 at 9:55am
Where ever you found that rhyme sceme at you need to give it back.


Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 21 May 2005 at 4:53am
Although I Dont Need That Tutorial, I Guess Its Pretty Good For Newbies To Pick Up On. When I First Started, All I Had On My Side Was Flow, And That Was It. Now I Got Multies, Punches, Wordplay, Personals, Just About Everything lol


Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 21 May 2005 at 11:18am
so i guess it was pretty good for you then huh....

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Posted By: ILLSTARRR
Date Posted: 21 May 2005 at 12:51pm

LOCKED

Way to old



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