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B&B - "The Organ Donor" FT EL1TE

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Topic: B&B - "The Organ Donor" FT EL1TE
Posted By: daydizzle89
Subject: B&B - "The Organ Donor" FT EL1TE
Date Posted: 22 March 2016 at 5:35pm


Dizzle (Deshi)
Hey its Mr. Deshi, im venturing into shit that's sketchy
gonna get messy, lets see.. first Vic is Tenshi
her kidney's will bring me a hefty penny
met Ms. Tenshi for a Pepsi n roofied her till spaghetti
She's a beauty, superb with a booty n curves nd healthy
She awakes as though she's seen a yeti nd she's getting sweaty
Her screams are deftly, "Shut the fuck up or this'll get deadly"
"All i want is your left kidney and maybe ill take your liver"
sedated this cunt but left her feeling every little sliver
Her body begins to shiver, face cold like its brittle n wintered
dig in her stomach and clamp arteries, blood flowing like a river
slither a pin prick into her and use paint thinner as a disinfectant
Kidney's n hand but i notice something.... This bitch is pregnant
a tenant connected to this bitch, I didn't know she was expecting
Rip out the umbilical chord and protect the kid as an investment
Dirty Desh can get seventy seven thousand or more from my assessment
rip open her Septum, her eyes filled with horror and resentment
i adore this kids complexion, predestined to a whore and subjected
Im stitching Tenshi up in segments and await her to waken
she lays naked in the basement of a serial vampire made with hatred
She felt every serrated slice and saw her baby get taking
She couldn't move nor say shit, All while Dr. Deshi was playing Iron Maiden
her stomach vacant of a baby and hey kidney's lay on a surgical station
submersed n frozen waiting transportation to an unmerciful patient
She's raging "Amy said you were going to give me 88 grand as payment!"
That's to bad lady, im giving you immortality as a gift from this pagan
I clamp on her neck n she begins to shake quick with stimulation
You gave me organs and a baby, your soul and beliefs are now forsaken
Your a vampire now, Organ trade is just another way to get a statement
Because you gave me your baby i must keep you alive in the name of satan
One thing though Tenshi, Amy will guide you through the hatred nd raping
shell show you the ropes to become a monster how stays in during the day kid


El1TE (Tenshi)
Tools, scissors n knives as the inside of me shreds
My baby's got more worries now than being dropped on his head
Blood trickles, my veins slashed, teary eyed... a sinners curse
The shivers burst in my spine as he pries upon my liverwurst
gaze between the rooms and see naked bodies of 50 chicks
as Deshi rips my nails out and sucks the blood like a pixie stick
I rattle fear & battle tears, "Tenshi, none of the cryin' shit.."
He sticks a pair of scissors right up between my vagina lips
Clippers all inside my nose as if he scissored my sinus..
His old TV running child porn and Gilligan's Island
This shit is violent, but he advised me that to live, I keep silent
While he yanks my baby out and tries to piss in his eyelids
A sinner, a tyrant.. Deshi's just a wicked form of Satan
He drops the scissors, running to his kitchen for an apron
Coming back with a gas mask and a rugged chainsaw
he peels my eyes open, as he hacks my baby's face off
He tears the gas mask off, as he licks his lips and smiles
He tells me "Truth be told, i haven't had a quick one in a while"
I can't stomach what had happened next...
Deshi was raping me, heinously, as i was strapped with a belt around my neck
He tightened the grip, so much that my eyes were drippin blood
I yelled "please, please stop!" he said "..I got to get it up..."
Screaming in agony, I shook him off, it fueled up his rage
That's when he sliced my foot off, stabbing another tool in my face
He ripped all of my clothes off, my guts half on the floor
Seething through his teeth he screamed "I've had it you whore!"
A machete to my breasts, the volcano of blood
He shoved his hands on both sides trying to rip out my lungs
He bites into my neck, I feel a rush of his lust
While he jabs another jagged rusty knife in my gut
I feel my soul escape into the air, I'm colder and pale
He gives me a mirror, asking me ".....how do you feel?"

With his haunting grin...





Replies:
Posted By: Endeavor
Date Posted: 23 March 2016 at 11:28am
Jesus Christ, ya'll getting more and more creative with the B&B shit.

Technically Dizz, you were absolutely flawless. The flow was bonkers, the imagery was disgusting and actually got me to shiver a couple of times. Can't leave them poor babies alone, can you? lol

I liked how Elite narrated from the perspective of Tenshi and he also was very descriptive with his stuff. How do you guys sleep at night, ha. This is the first text I've seen from you Elite since you've been doing audio a lot but you definitely know how to translate flow to the words written.

I'd love to give a big breakdown but my boss will kill me if I do. Good job peeps. I might start my own series of a vampire hunter just to save the children!


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#Bananas



Posted By: Elite
Date Posted: 23 March 2016 at 1:30pm
thanks for the feed Endeavor. And yeah i was strictly text for about a my first full year here, thats why im good on audio


Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 29 March 2016 at 10:45pm
Thanks Endeavor mucho gracias


Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 30 March 2016 at 10:04pm
Ha, this was nice and really messed up in places! It's been a while since I read a piece with such a strong horrorcore theme and it was quite refreshing. You've both come on leaps and bounds since I last read anything of yours and it's great to see. The imagery was dope across both verses and they tied together very nicely. Good work guys


Posted By: Gambino
Date Posted: 31 March 2016 at 1:33am
This piece was fucced up...in a Marilyn Manson type way.The horror vibe was timeless.I liked the names too lol.The imagery..(though it was painful to envision"was sick...I mean literally sick.The flow was choppy in some spots but overall this was a nice piece.Keep up the good work



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