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[WD#2] Less Is More

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Printed Date: 19 April 2024 at 4:00pm


Topic: [WD#2] Less Is More
Posted By: Stalin
Subject: [WD#2] Less Is More
Date Posted: 25 March 2016 at 5:10am
I'm unmitigated with ya hatred and reputation
Been impatient, instigated by their regulations
I'm ebola how my flows cause rappers to emaciate
I'll debunk the deficit, suture the hands of fate
Politicians are debonair, with a silver platter
My lectures be for rest like sylvan natter

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+Sick-Witted+



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Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 25 March 2016 at 12:26pm
Renegades stand the fuck up :)

thata boy Stal...

didnt get the tree talk line..but im stupid so thats normal.

the politicians line and the hands of fate lines were nasty tho.



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#Bananas


Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 29 March 2016 at 3:10pm
Ok Ok OK


5 bars you sonna bitch. Thats dope. Great use of words and you used them very well. AND IN 5 LINES. Whats Next? 2 lines?

I'm ebola how my flows cause rappers to emaciate
I'll debunk the deficit, suture the hands of fate
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
THATS DOPE SHIT


good work and you can keep the vet status cuz you deserve it bruh


Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 04 April 2016 at 1:26am
Thanks for the feed guys. Appreciate it

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+Sick-Witted+


Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 04 April 2016 at 3:17am
Cool start to what should be a much more complete piece. I have a feeling that's what it is though, just the beginning?

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Imagery so vividly intrinsic you might miss it..
Though you never even had the chance to witness it



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