Blonde & Bondage - Auschwitz
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:57am
Topic: Blonde & Bondage - Auschwitz
Posted By: daydizzle89
Subject: Blonde & Bondage - Auschwitz
Date Posted: 24 August 2016 at 8:13pm
 The Shoah began, 1941 with astounding profit We were on a train Heading to Auschwitz Promised food, new outfits with pockets Deshi about to get bank off his surroundings Train stops off the frosty mountain nd' We get out surrounded with kids pouting Pompous Officers howling nd shouting "You, get on the ground nd give me a thousand" I lost count nd got an atrocious pounding The entrance is godless, "take off ya watches" My gold wrists pocketed, silk woven clothes robbed nd They promised us Chocolate nd our freedom as options Gossip is, once we enter... Woman so hot nd topless Colossus men looking like Sasquatch watching us My mom was brainwashed nd feeling nauseous My round was up, I sit on top of this box with kids It was an auction, monsters bidding on us as if we were oxen Not even in our board and room and I’m feeling plotted Their mocking us, "after the war, You’ll regain your calling” "Till then, were just lodging ya like a flock of fish" "Oh and that fence? Touch it, you’ll find it shocking" First night had me jaw dropped nd frothing  3 months later.... Bruised with enough abuse to cause acute puking In a state of confusion and I’m starting to lose it Shootings moving closer to my tarnished roof nd' Every shot is death looming closer with amusement I’m reduced to a polluted Kosher cuz I’m Jewish Bulldozing humans into a ditch after experiments My room is next, you can’t compare to the fair i get This arrogant gent, "Resist and ill severe yer limbs" "Excrement covered flesh won’t save you the embarrassment" After their finished, I’m gonna need a fucking therapist I’m scared as shit, Next stop is the gas chambers They chain your hands to your neighbor and fill it with vapor I pray to a savior, give me the strength of a reindeer entered the cage with eight strangers with hate nd anger They close the gates but we are enraged monsters We have the strength to cut the chains like lobsters The vape begins to mix with the water We bust open and stage a Slaughter At this stage, bullets gaze and conjure I take one to the face and i ponder Who can enslave and sponsor hate to prosper? Deshi, A man of pure waste but has created honor  Nightmares I survived the revolt, though it was thwarted I’m getting older yet i only weigh 104 nd' My mortality is distorted Exhausted nd they record my every moment I’m soaking in a disproportionate set of Importance Guards reward me cuz death is what I’m supporting Rid me of this torture, the general is morbid I rather die nd be torpid Instead I’m tied to assorted electrical cords nd' Electrified for four minutes I can afford to die and have my limbs contort from rigor mortis My life is small yet the gore is enormous Made me watch my wife have an unsupported abortion My brain is fried and shortened Suicide compared to this life seems euphoric I no longer cry, my mind is dormant Foreign thoughts of a life filled with orchids a torrent of memories before i became mordant My life is like a forest, my screams remain foreign there is no restoring light, there’s fire in my core nd' Its 1989, i woke up this morning crying in the mirror Wipe my tears, I’m eighty four and been mourning my wife for years i survived horrible things but every night at 4:00, im fighting this terror  |
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Posted By: Bakardi
Date Posted: 24 August 2016 at 10:29pm
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im torn, on one hand you are scientific as fuck with how you write your bars, and you are technically proficient for sure, on the other hand....dude what the fuck. ------------- 
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Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 25 August 2016 at 1:15am
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this was intense , a brutal point view , a horrible story told well , im not to fond of some the topics you write about but i have to admit you got some talent the way your able to mind fuck people and get underneath there skin inside there brains and stirr emotion with your lyrics, its awful ,,,awfully good,,,,,i think ,,, fuck you dizz fuck you lol your fucked keep it up tho
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Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 26 August 2016 at 1:16am
| thanks gents for the lovely feed |
Posted By: SELF ACTIVATE
Date Posted: 28 August 2016 at 11:56pm
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Ahhh Back at it again. It's nice to see you keeping the B&B series alive. This was definitely another nice edition. Surprisingly the thought of writing a piece about the Nazi death camps never entered my mind. However, after reading your drop it kinda seems like a no brainer. It actually fits the theme of the entire series completely. Also, the legend of Deshi continues, huh? Nice touch bro. I think you did a great job with The story progression here. You gave us a complete experience from beginning to end, to post traumatic stress disorder after the fact. I think this drop was a little less gruesome and visceral in content, But no less colorful and vivid in detail. Mechanically you checked all the boxes as you always do. Dope shit Dizz. I dug it. |
Posted By: Konflict
Date Posted: 29 August 2016 at 8:57pm
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I legitimately got chills from the last line. This was a beautiful read. It flowed perfectly from start to finish. I wasn't sure if it was branching out into some sci-fi/fantasy stuff in the middle but I realized it was just your wording and imagery lol. This was sick man. You don't see this topic used very often but I like your spin on it. Good work |
Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 30 August 2016 at 2:48pm
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Thanks for the feed my peeps. Im not happy with some of the wording but i must live with it now lol. Self, nice to see you active again brothaman |
Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 07 September 2016 at 2:28pm
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bump |
Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 25 September 2016 at 10:31am
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This was graphic but then genocide is graphic,and I agree with SELF it is good to read your still doing the series B n B,Deshi's has no morality as he see us as part of the food chain,so really him being at Auschwitz is no surprise,where there is suffering to be had or done,rest assured Delhi isn't to far from it,this piece was written and displayed well,you know when you get that feeling of coldness on your neck,and then the tingling feeling,that's what I got here on reading this,you gave via details a real vivid account that in essence lifted this piece up and out at the reader,a kind of in your face scenario,your imagery is 2nd to none and you certainly have a creative flair with your OM's,you think outside the box with your subject matter,by using your gray matter,funny thing is,i find my self looking out for your work in this section,as I know that you give a different verse or perspective for ppl to ponder,you are in my top ten pool of writers here on this board,and rising,good work here Dizzle,real good,props on letting me take a genuine feeling away from this ripe piece...peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |