United Fates
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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:59am
Topic: United Fates
Posted By: The Rap Daemon
Subject: United Fates
Date Posted: 27 April 2017 at 12:03am
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(In response to daydizzle89) Ok... So I've heard some things -- about this bunch of hopeless states. Not so united and great with Trump in the midst, shit Couldn't even catch your own warnings run on the Simpsons (that episode where Trump becomes president) Y'all call out doing our cousins as twisted Yet your place is full of rednecks fucking their sisters! Call us pussies in sport and claim your football in proudness But wear protection, try your hand at rugby you foul shits! You should do it in sex too so the world won't have to hold such weight in down kids Joining wars in the latter stages to hide the fact their cowards Y'all never do shit 'cept for eating oversized burgers and damn chips Your big roads aren't for the bad traffic but your fat asses! An Earthquake when they sit and tornados as gasses Are released from them, no wonder why your shops have such mad taxes It's to pay for the sad damage that'll be caused, the fall's deep As I drop these depressing facts harder on y'all than Wall Street More criminals with guns than your whole army which appalls me So stop trynna teach the world a lesson when all your own school's weak! Say we're smothered in denial but you can't accept their's global warming But then again, that's only 'coz y'all know you caused it Your wrongs protected by weapons n just 'coz in everything you own a portion Yet y'all don't know what a portion is 'coz all the shit you've grown to horde it Complain about our drunk whores and lads getting fucked more But you're the ones with the issues and the drug wars Even religiously there's no light under ya shut doors Where McDonald's signs' more recognisable than the cross, you dumb boars Which reminds me of your broken society, the corrupted policing Moan about are rights to speech problems but how's that for the busting of freedom? Haha, fucking Bay Of Pigs, so before you take the piss learn what you suckers are heating 'Coz shit'll come back down on you like a Trail Of Tears and burn n rip you motherfuckers to pieces. ------------- Faggot |
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Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 27 April 2017 at 12:09am
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thats cool you guys keep your free health care and having to pay a tax for simply owning a tv. ------------- #Bananas 
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Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 27 April 2017 at 12:43am
| rap guy. I sparked your response like the 4th of July. Kudos on the fast response. At least chu got nuts pal. Bring it Saxons!!! |
Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 27 April 2017 at 12:54am
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Not so united and great with Trump in the midst, shit Couldn't even catch your own warnings run on the Simpsons (that episode where Trump becomes president) Tony Blair was a beacon of unity. Y'all call out doing our cousins as twisted Yet your place is full of rednecks fucking their sisters! fair, but we keep them in the basement. Call us pussies in sport and claim your football in proudness But wear protection, try your hand at rugby you foul shits! bro. get in your car. get that shitbox going as fast as a four foot tin can you call a mini cooper will go and crash into a wall, pop out and ask for a beer. then tell me youre a tough guy. You should do it in sex too so the world won't have to hold such weight in down kids Joining wars in the latter stages to hide the fact their cowards if it wasnt for us, Russia and Germany would be super powers. why dont yall handle China since its so easy? Y'all never do shit 'cept for eating oversized burgers and damn chips Your big roads aren't for the bad traffic but your fat asses! An Earthquake when they sit and tornados as gasses Are released from them, no wonder why your shops have such mad taxes youre gonna talk taxes? lol.. It's to pay for the sad damage that'll be caused, the fall's deep As I drop these depressing facts harder on y'all than Wall Street the DOW is up isnt it? ill ask my broker, brb. More criminals with guns than your whole army which appalls me So stop trynna teach the world a lesson when all your own school's weak! what? no comprehend. Say we're smothered in denial but you can't accept their's global warming But then again, that's only 'coz y'all know you caused it actually, the study was formed by British scientists in an act to lower coal miners wages, but I digress. Your wrongs protected by weapons n just 'coz in everything you own a portion Yet y'all don't know what a portion is 'coz all the shit you've grown to horde it freedom fries…horde that. Complain about our drunk whores and lads getting fucked more But you're the ones with the issues and the drug wars yeah cause rolling stones are sober blokes. Even religiously there's no light under ya shut doors Where McDonald's signs' more recognisable than the cross, you dumb boars what? you already called us fat. Which reminds me of your broken society, the corrupted policing Moan about are rights to speech problems but how's that for the busting of freedom? no? Haha, fucking Bay Of Pigs, so before you take the piss learn what you suckers are heating 'Coz shit'll come back down on you like a Trail Of Tears and burn n rip you motherfuckers to pieces. doubtful. Murica. ------------- #Bananas
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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 27 April 2017 at 9:57am
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Hmm interesting,you had some good points made here but i think you excuteded them at times in cringe fashion,they came off in parts as titt for tatt,it also had a rush feel about it,like you was to focused in just answering back quick,because within this verse there contained quite a few solid lines/bars,my favourite being this one, "Where McDonald's signs' more recognisable than the Cross, " Ain't that the truth,a good example of the corporate web that exist globally,while we scurry and fight amongst ourselves for the sake of patriotism,(which is a taught emotion and concept),anyways the wall street line was another one i liked,if you had worded this better if could of been solid really,that's why I feel you rushed this drop somewhat you thought of an angle and ran with it,instead of playing with it first,now With that typed the verse on the whole was a plus for me,a little banter between ppl is always entertaining,as I found this to be,good read,just take the time on delivering..peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: rhetorical
Date Posted: 28 April 2017 at 2:42am
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yay, America bashing most of it is not factual and just plays off the typical stereotypes that us americans make fun of ourselves. didnt really find the flow all that great, nor the wording. . i mean. i find it hilarious when people make fun of america, just wasnt a whole lot of original concepts or anything to give me any real laughs. basically, not much damage done here. but i do respect that you was quick to respond to diz's verse and trust me, i dont agree with the liberal socialist view points, but any real american does/should respect your right to your opinion. thats what freedom -------------  |