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Topic: WWC Pre-Mag
Posted By: Sammy
Subject: WWC Pre-Mag
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 4:30pm


Weekly Writing Challenge Magazine


Intro





Brevity is the soul of wit. I personally feel brevity is the soul of all good writing. Take Hemingway for example. Here’s  a guy who made it a style to omit fillers such as excessive usage of personal pronouns and adjectives. As a result he won the Pulitzer. He’s a cornerstone of the modern literary movements of short concise wording and punchy prose. Compare him to Lovecraft who often time does engage in verbal vomit in an effort to “set the stage” and its night and day. H.P. , although very imaginative, but as far as literary competency goes, he’s often criticized for his verbose vernacular. What i hope we can all get from this challenge is 1. To become better writers. 2. Observe the nuance of good writing.






Combatant profile


Slip - Slip’s a staple of LA. I’d even go as far as to call him a vet. He’s known for his clarity. His concept are often very easy to catch on to. The only obstacle i see for him in this challenge is the line restriction as he tends to take time to develop his plot and character. If he can learn to sharpen his wording and ideas,  he should quite a threat to everyone.


Rhetorical - Rhet’s on my top 5 writers list. And i’ve been around many different blocks, observing many different writers. He’s the rare breed who can pull this off effortlessly. His pieces are always competently constructed, utilizing all the necessary literary tools to achieve the desired effect. If you want to become a great writer, i suggest observing his method.


Rap Daemon - Remember when he first came on the scene? Choppy wording, bland rhymes. Now...well check out his heated mess piece. This guy has improved tremendously. If anyone can gain from this challenge, Daemon should be primed for it as he’s already at a “momentum” stage in his writing career. Keep it


DJ Flame - Flame has always been a solid writer. My only critique of his style is the wording aspect. When narrating a story, he tends to overdoes it with the personal pronouns thus giving his work more of a “telling” quality than a “showing”, which i feel is the difference between good writing and great writing. But his concepts are always fresh. We’ll see how he does in the confines of 16 lines lol.


Daydizzle - Just as im writing this mag, this motherfucker has already dropped his verse lol. Day has always been a volume writer so i was skeptic on how he will hold his own in this challenge. And, well, his drop was pretty gawdamnn impressive. He’s a vet here so i shouldn’t even be surprise. Good shit, bro.


Crimson Juice - Crimson is another star turned journeymen. Its a pleasure seeing him improve drops after drops. His verse always has a very emotional turn. I believe he does this by utlizing everyday type of wording which will forced connections with reader, rather easily. His flows are often time very clean. He’s a solid contender in this challenge.


Neek - At the behest of my buddy Self, i approached neek about the challenge. I didn’t think he would but he did. I think this challenge is tailor made for this guy. He may be the most precise writer across the net, or at least one of them. His phrasings are always clever and unique. Thanks for signing up, man and hope to read your verse!


Vellum - I’ll be honest, i’m not too familiar with Vellum. Apparently he’s been a member since 2013 but he may have been on a hiatus of sort. I’ve only ever read one of his verse, it was a braggadocio type drop and he definitely knows how to write. Looking forward to seeing what u got, bro. g/l!


Ridley Squat - as much (and often) as guy has proven himself, he always seems to be stimatized with that dark horse thing. Ridley’s dope! He made it all the way to the finals in the IC2 tourney, i believe! He’s actually one of my favorite writer on LA. He’s a battler so you know brevity is a common aspect of his sport. I am definitely looking forward to reading what u got, Rid!


Spume Corrupt - one of the shining personality of the site, Spume also boast a strong catalogue of work. His writtens are often imagery heavy but when he wants to, is able to inject pathos that resonates heavily. Read his Loraine piece, a very emotional tribute to a love one. Another dude that can certainly do damage!


Ill Scripturez - ahhhh this was a late addtion. We know this guy can write. IC2 winner, ill Scripturez is another one of those that can woo the crowd with lazer precision wording and ultra creative content. Everywhere he goes he does damage and carve a name for himself. So glad he decided to take part and as with all the others, i’m looking forward to seeing what he go!



To stay true to the theme of the challenge, i’m keeping this mag short. See yall next week! And good luck everyone!!









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Replies:
Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 4:47pm
Dope Writeup

Im actually looking forward to seeing some of the off-chutes dropping like Crim, Slip and Rap D. Its good writing practice



Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 8:48pm
You done this up nicely Sammy
Props for the effort
I see two dope drops already but I don’t see any reference to the given topic?
What is the topic my main? I seem to have missed it
Cheers

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Posted By: rhetorical
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 8:56pm
Originally posted by spume corrupt spume corrupt wrote:

You done this up nicely Sammy
Props for the effort
I see two dope drops already but I don’t see any reference to the given topic?
What is the topic my main? I seem to have missed it
Cheers

the topic is the image of the man in the forest 


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Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 9:07pm
Ah I see or rather I don’t see...No picture is showing up for me must be cos I’m on my phone atm
I’ll check it out on my laptop later
Thanks for pointing that out Rhet

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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 10:44pm
Yeah i can't see the image either..

And solid write up by the way Sammy..

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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".


Posted By: Ridley Squat
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 11:33pm
Yep I agree fully ...

a) dope write-up Samborghini!
b) what fucking picture though?

Can any of the special people that can see it, try posting it here?

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Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 11:39pm
hmmm....apparently im not able to view it either now that i'm on my laptop. ok, let me tinypic that shit and repost it lol. sorry guys. but for descriptions, its a picture of a guy in a forest. he seems to be musing. but check back in a couple minutes. im gonna try to reupload it

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Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 11:40pm
dope write up.



I sent the pic to sammy so he can re-host. he slower than the annunaki's return tho.

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#Bananas


Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 11:43pm
lmao! its done

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Posted By: Ridley Squat
Date Posted: 30 July 2018 at 11:44pm
yep that's got it
Nice one Samoyed

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Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 12:49am
this was supposed to be a light writing exercise but i see everyone got they gloves off. lots of dope work. my judges are already unsure on an actual winner based on the drops so far.

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Posted By: The Rap Daemon
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 1:20am
Loads of different interpretations as well. An open-ended picture for sure.

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Faggot


Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 1:36am
Keeping them all in the same thread was a dope idea to
How does the judge panel work, will we see the voting or will a winner just be announced

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See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so
warn the mother fucking people


Posted By: The Rap Daemon
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 1:54am
Probably a magazine talking about each piece in brief detail, with a quotable from each as well quick feedback, then the winner announcement like how it's done with the OM King, amirite?

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Faggot


Posted By: Lord Puente
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 2:08am
Originally posted by The Rap Daemon The Rap Daemon wrote:

Probably a magazine talking about each piece in brief detail, with a quotable from each as well quick feedback, then the winner announcement like how it's done with the OM King, amirite?


You not even asking for much...

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Posted By: rhetorical
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 4:22am
could the verses be hidden then revealed when they are all in? 

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Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 6:27pm
Originally posted by Slip Slip wrote:

Keeping them all in the same thread was a dope idea to
How does the judge panel work, will we see the voting or will a winner just be announced

that's basically how i mapped it out. 


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Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 6:28pm
Originally posted by rhetorical rhetorical wrote:

could the verses be hidden then revealed when they are all in? 

im pretty sure it can. u think we should do that? (maybe not for this week but next week and so forth)


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Posted By: rhetorical
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 6:48pm
Originally posted by Sammy Sammy wrote:

Originally posted by rhetorical rhetorical wrote:

could the verses be hidden then revealed when they are all in? 

im pretty sure it can. u think we should do that? (maybe not for this week but next week and so forth)

i personally would prefer it to be that way. . would be kind of cool to just see all the verses be revealed at the same time 

and also the benefit of not revealing your hand before others post their verses ya know. . . 


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Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 6:56pm
ahh i see the reasoning there. yeah we can def do that next round. thanks for the suggestion, rhet. 

to be totally honest, this was something i kind of just wanted to do cause i was bored so as far as structure and ideas, i'm welcome to any and all suggestions. fax. besides Cuba's. I don't plan on rowing any time soon.


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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 7:38pm
^lmao,(that Cuba reference though,pure truth) ..peace.

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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".


Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 7:41pm
Rowing.......fucking Rowing?..
Damn Samson I don’t think that’s what Cooba meant when he said he’d like to give you the paddle with the cox behind him! Shit main he ain’t even gonna be about no gently down the stream trip....
Just beware homie

Love the mag bro and the chat it’s throwing up......solid work fam

As for hiding the works until the end........why’s?
Thegood thing about the way it is is obvious to me,
The longer you leave it the harder it gets
You might even find your brainwave has been already over cooked and have to go back to the drawing board with scratch but dwindling time

JMO
But rhets idea was cool also, maybe just a bit cynical for this level of entertainment

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Posted By: The Rap Daemon
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 8:03pm
Yeah. Hiding verses would be great. People would think out the box, 1.) Trying not to write something too similar to someone else because they wouldn't know, 2.) They wouldn't know entirely what they're up against, so they wouldn't be able to read something and say I'll just do this and that should be fine, and 3.) It builds on the anticipation, and not just for the combatants, but anyone else just spectating.   

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Faggot


Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 8:36pm
Although i agree with Rhet Spume and Co.,i quite like the fact i can see alias,
for me it's inspiring,instead of putting out a good verse,when you see the likes
of iLL Neek Spume Rhet to name but a few,it injects competition,knowing if you
can pull a verse/piece out of the bag to better them,competion brings for me
innovation..peace.

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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".


Posted By: rhetorical
Date Posted: 01 August 2018 at 9:22pm
Originally posted by Crimson Juice Crimson Juice wrote:

Although i agree with Rhet Spume and Co.,i quite like the fact i can see alias,
for me it's inspiring,instead of putting out a good verse,when you see the likes
of iLL Neek Spume Rhet to name but a few,it injects competition,knowing if you
can pull a verse/piece out of the bag to better them,competion brings for me
innovation..peace.

i get that

there can be a sign in/sign out sheet. as long as its updated, you at least know who you are competing against 

and im really not trying to complicate things, but if this is going to be a competitive exercise, i feel that hiding the verses 

a) creates more anticipation for a reveal 
and 
b) gives writers a bit more element of surprise 

im good with whatever, it was just a suggestion . . i also dont want to put more work on Sammy then he was intending to do 


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Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 02 August 2018 at 2:09am
I think it’s good the way it is without hiding the verses so we can see how long or how quick it takes people to write, like who’s the first to post and who’s the last stuff like that, I thought the point system Cuba had going with the topical twist was a dope idea with different bonus points each time, that’s something to think about for this,
if this was a heavy tournament looking for a champ I could see hiding the verses and votes but we’re all here for a little fun nothin to serious and it’s a good way for us all to learn from each other and try to step it up a notch to top the best

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See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so
warn the mother fucking people


Posted By: The Rap Daemon
Date Posted: 02 August 2018 at 6:08am
Tbh. I agree with this as well. It is a writing challenge, not a tournament. Very good point.

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Faggot


Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 02 August 2018 at 12:11pm
why cant you all just flex and keep it that way. 


Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 03 August 2018 at 11:28pm
Ironically I rowed for the first time in months this evening.

Sammy putting that work in. Great idea, greatly executed. For what it's worth Sam I Am I'd keep it minimalistic as you can...every week is a grind & if you're doing all kind of shit around it like hiding verses and suchlike it will absorb a lot of your energy.

If you want to do it weekly you gotta keep it to the basics like you have done.

You do you though...It's why you're the people's champ

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Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 04 August 2018 at 8:39pm
today is the last day for submission, LA familia! i will extend it to 11:59pm Western time, instead of eastern :)

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Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 05 August 2018 at 1:53am
sammy..... much love on this. Stay Jesus


Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 06 August 2018 at 2:30am
yes! votes are in and winner is known. Results will be posted in the mag tomorrow and new pic for this week will go up tonight :) 

great job, everyone. this was a tough round. word to scotty's hairline.


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Posted By: Lord Puente
Date Posted: 06 August 2018 at 5:30am
Good shit samwise

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