[Text] JBrenn Vs joffy428
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 12:23am
Topic: [Text] JBrenn Vs joffy428
Posted By: JBrenn
Subject: [Text] JBrenn Vs joffy428
Date Posted: 14 November 2022 at 1:25am
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10 lines.... house rules -------------  |
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Posted By: JBrenn
Date Posted: 15 November 2022 at 7:00pm
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as soon as you check in or drop Joff ill drop my verse. ------------- |
Posted By: joffy428
Date Posted: 15 November 2022 at 7:34pm
| Ok |
Posted By: joffy428
Date Posted: 16 November 2022 at 12:54am
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bJbrenn is a normal man what else can you really say except thats gay so gay you could turn to a donkey and start eating hay And calling everyone else gay just incase'they are and want to play taking That chance to get beat up you do it everyday Battling you is like childs play so you better have came prepared for your lyrical doomsday its gonna be like bombs and bombs away youd be calling mayday'mayday on a cast away. its a sad story u died Gory in a nasty way similar to like you got KO ed by a bully who is abnormal at the bus terminal same year u got fucked up and got framed raped and cloned that day Jbrenn clone #1 is is ur real name tatted right in your illuminum vane |
Posted By: JBrenn
Date Posted: 16 November 2022 at 3:16am
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Ill just keystlye this.... seriously Joff do a lil research or something.... ok.... You wana knock J OFF WHY? better come with 428 punches guy! I thought Id let you give it a try, read your "drop" and *sigh*.... Your battles look more like pillow fights one punch sends you soaring... Fuck Joff up with a memory foam so you'll remember this ass beating every morning! Its perplexing your styles like two retards sexting... Joffy you bitch, is everybody you battle gay or are you projecting? Stark comparison you and I, You're like covering a fart with the noise to cough... S'No wonder I wana kill you off no Game of Thrones when I say I wana poison Joff! that should be more than enough..... ------------- |
Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 16 November 2022 at 9:14pm
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Well its a one sided battle here to be Frank.. Joffy as JBenn stated in his opening line of this battle, (and a wise old saying "know thy enemy") do a little trawling to gain ammo, and I do mean trawling not trolling!, I've said this to you in past vote also, spend time and formulate your punches, flesh them out and make them witty or add a level of depth, and thats where the time factor comes in, you should read his past battles/posts, do some plays on his alias, and that involves time, i think Cuba just recently commented on your call outs/battles, you ain't spending time on the task at hand, in some ways I get the impression you're a bogus account, or at the very least you're just freestyle stuff and hoping for the best in battles, but there were some improvements to be had with this one, it wasn't a wall of words, and it actually had a inner rhyme scheme (of sorts), and I apologise now I'm not being a prick here, I'm trying to give you angles to work with for growth , perhaps some one like Beans if you was serious could help, because it sure can't hurt, give him a pm who knows, ask him to look over a verse before you drop, or any active member, it won't hurt throwing out a Bat Signal you dig.. Vote.... JBenn... peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 10 February 2023 at 5:21pm
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BUMP PEEPS.. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: JBrenn
Date Posted: 24 February 2023 at 5:57pm
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can we get this closed before march? Vote ppl even if your on for a minute. ------------- |
Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 24 February 2023 at 8:10pm
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Uncomparable joff what in the fuck are you going on a boat? Seriously I’m not going to attempt to break this down for you your way up and left field with your hat down over your eyes. Nowhere near the mark. Yo Brenn the memory foam line alone was enough to take this battle the rest of the verse what is the spectacular but enough to see you obviously beat your opponent MVGT: Jbrenn ------------- See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 24 February 2023 at 9:43pm
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One day this gangster gonna kill somebody dead don’t doubt it back in the mix packing his usual garbage, what can be said about it?...Nothing this time, but....... Joffy428.........Dude might always lose but these days the truth is, every single time someone answers his call out he gets a massive win.........keep killing it brother JB does nothing for the win here but Joffy still managed to die again Vote JB -------------  |
Posted By: JBrenn
Date Posted: 24 February 2023 at 10:06pm
Nothing for the win DAMN SC!!! ------------- |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 25 February 2023 at 12:38am
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Yeah that’s my bad brother Read Joffy verse and kinda drifted into a coma so never really got to your stuff I guess Joffski does enough to kill himself every time I read him so the result was always gonna be a given I got you now though homie Yeah you keyed this and truth told I thought you opened up on fis six lines with a perfect flow, just got a bit too wordy in the last two so the closing punch felt like a concept that should have been done better to work properly Nice touches of humour throughout ....To be fair you actually obliterated him for the win Keep on it brother ------------- |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 25 February 2023 at 12:44am
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You guys should be banned 30 days for free posting ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 25 February 2023 at 1:35am
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000000000000 00000000000 0000000000 000000000 00000000 0000000 000000 00000 0000 000 00 0 Beans making a good point here ------------- |
Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 25 February 2023 at 3:24am
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Flip them zeroes around put them on your head sit in the corner stare at the wall spume, time out ------------- See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 25 February 2023 at 3:31am
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https://vm.tiktok.com/ZMYATobcB/" rel="nofollow - Spumes in trouble ------------- See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 03 March 2023 at 9:53pm
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% Beans tryna hold up Beans cos the top Bean is slipping ------------- |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 04 March 2023 at 1:04pm
Only thing quotable involving slip ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
spume corrupt wrote:Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 12 March 2023 at 12:05pm
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KO JB.... ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |